VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 59

Originally posted by: nanditam2107

What an amazing & looonnnggg update 😛 😊 😃 and what an amazing long comment😊
Yayyy!!!!! Virat...the superman saved manvi 😃 ya ya
I was having fun when virat was punching raj very hardly 😆 haww kisi ko pitta dekhkar maze le rahi thi😳
After that!!!! I was in shock...the way manvi behaved with virat...but then she was in shock also!!!!
Shit man!!! Raj bhaag gaya 😡 haan aur yeh sab shivali ki vajah se hua hai🤣
Okay but more than that i am worried that what vadheras have seen that they are so much in shock!!!!
I think virman got married...kaash aisa ho jaye 😛 ab kya pata yeh toh shivali hi jane😛😛😛

I just loved the way you portrait the whole incidence!!!! thank u so much nandita😊
First i loved it when you showed that manvi was behaving badly with virat because she was still not in her senses & was in shock!!!!! That behaviour was so required at that time...if you would have shown that she was behaving normally...then it would have been wierd!!!! exactly my point
Then it was so sweet to see virat's eagerness to see whether manvi was fine or not!!!! hayee

I mean you just did it man!!! You filled the update will so beautiful emotions...!!!! Amazing yaar...well done!!!!
Hats off!!!! 👏 thank u thank u so much😊
Please please update soon...can't wait what's next...& update it like this only...i mean this looonnnggg 😛

I know...i know i am greedy!!! 😛 😉 don't worry everyone is greedy in this world even me too😉

Originally posted by: copypaste

pata nh aur kitne tme mai yeh update read karugi m jst nt gettng ovr it
It ws jst perfct

Originally posted by: nrithyao

awesome update
loved the way virat proposed her
it was so romantic
and the next morning was even better
cant wait for the next update
sure that virat would save manvi

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

gaalat time pe stop kar di... ohhh!!! jaaldi update karna, tension ho rahi hai bohot... viru the hero ajaye aab yehi dua hai... the date was super romantic... awsm... and the passionate kiss... manvis morning confusion... oye hoye... thanks fr the pm and again congrats...:)

Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update dear waiting for maanvi's saviour. please continue soon dear. your such an awesome writer hats off to you👍🏼

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

👏👏👏AWESOME UPDATE👏👏👏


😊😊THANK YOU FOR THE LONG AND ROMANTIC UPDATE😊😊


BUT AT LAST ,YOU ARE SCARING ME YAAR. WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO MANVI. I WISH VIRAT WILL COME AND SAVE HER.


CONTINUE SOON. EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART.

Originally posted by: Aenna

Omggg amazinggg update a longg one
i truelyy luved it... Hope virat come on tym
to rescue manvi...update asap..

Originally posted by: nishal310

hayee sachi😳

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Oh my God dear what an amazing update.. Can't believe that how did u managed 4 giving that awesome n long update too..👏and i can't beleive that you typed such long comment👏

Seriously dear it was fantastic,, awesome,, fabulous,, superb n super duper update.. It was as long as i always want to read...👏 thank u thank u so much anji😊

the bannar in the starting was really very awesome,... I love this story with all my heart since u started...👏 thanks for liking the banner😊

I love it this much from starting that i have fixed the date of first chapter in my mind... Its on 26th November...yeah you are right the starting date of this ff is 26 november

Ooh maanvi went to that devil Raj's company,,, he is so disgusting... But thank God that maanvi has virat with her.. warna i can't even know that vo Raj kya karta mannu k saath...hmm point hai

Seriously maanvi is really very lucky to have a lover like virat... Ufff that Raj met her... So unlucky day 4 maanvi...very unlucky

Hhahahah loved the dialogue in which maanvi said to Raj that she always insults him but he dun pay attention... Kitna dheet banda hai...😆😆 really dheet bando par kissi baat ka asar nahi hota😆

Bilkul right mannu he is such a useless son n a useless n disgusting person too...

Hawww now Raj would b so angry with maanvi.. I know that he will surely do anything to hurt virat n maanvi...hmm aise bando ka koi bharosa nahi

Awww loved the way virat was getting restless when he doesn't saw maanvi... n the way he got worried n hugged to her was really an awww moment...hayee i was just dreaming when i wrote that part

His words n feelings after breaking the hug was just like waooo... waooo an over-protective lover he is...

hahahahha smilling like an idiot... the way he was worried when he came to know that she got to meet Raj's dad... N not receiving his calls...

Aaahhhaaannn romancing with girlfriend.. naughty Boss... This line was just out of the world... (so i don't care,let them see akhir unhe bhi toh pata chale that how much virat singh vadhera loves his girlfriend)...😳😳 haww naughty boy virat isn't he😳😳

Now maanvi in her own avtaar (chep).. really this word is made 4 virat n it looks good if maanvi takes this name 4 virat.. as in sirf maanvi ko haq hai...bhai haq banta hai uska

Ohhhooo kissey missey... hahahah maanvi is too cunning kissed on his cheeks... Waooo maanvi would b looking so pretty in that dress.. Wish i would see her in that dress...😳😳imagine kar lo bacha

Uhhhuuu virat,,,, as same as maanvi virat would also b looking smoking hot... Hooo beautifull in loose hairs... waoo what a romantic date.. flowers pettals on the ground...

The word of virat when he was proposing her.. ufff i was like mad after reading it... Finally he confeesed... I LOVE U MAANVI.. Sounds so good n cute na???😊😊very cute baby😊

Waooo what a great n sweet way to give the ring.. RING IN THE CAKE.. Waooo this line (I will do everything to make u happy)... this captured the whole update...😊😊thanks dear

the song sequence was really very nice... the scenes along with the song were great... Oh wao hawwtyy hawwwtyyy kisshy... Waoo she slept in virat's arms.. that scene was amazing...acha ji

Hhahahaah this line (waise jo kal nahi hua lets do it today).. hahahhah too naughty... Hawww virat being away from maanvi 4 sum day.. Kahin Raj kuch??? No virat plz dun go.. stay with mannu...😕😕 don't worry when shivali is hear not to fear hum virat ko bula lenge😉

This Raj he again came in-front of her.. OMG he called her to his farm house.. his intentions seems scary... Good mannu ek aur slap dena... Hawww what will he do??? she screames VIRAT'S name.. Virat is not there.. Hope all goes well...😕😕don't worry bacha everything will be fine😊

Dear it was an awesome update.. loved it to the core... Plz continue very soon c0z m dying to know that what will happen next...😊😊plz don't die if you die then who will give me such a long comment😉

Plz yr Plz update as soon as u can.. Very soon han... Hum jese Bachon ka khayal kar lena plz... Jo mar rahe hain 4 ur next update😆😆... Plz zyada dair mat lagana... tum jaise bacho ka khayal main jaroor rakhungi and thanks for liking it😊

Originally posted by: copypaste

muchi 😆

and m gng to read again and again jab tak i didn't get bore😆