VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 58

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

kab update karegi ???

Originally posted by: nishal310

haww abhi kal toh kiya😲

kal phirse kana 😉

Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1

lovely yar i wish nothing happens to manvi n virat come on time/// plz continue sooon n gayab mat hona ab

Originally posted by: amnavirman

amazing update...

cont soon and thanks for the pm dear😊

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Shivi bon 🤗 omg itna longgg update .. Maza aa gaya 😃.haye sachii tere liye tha😉. Ab apne fingers ko thoda rest bhi dede 😛.tune itna bada comment diya toh rest hi rest hai. Update was fantastic ⭐️⭐️.. Just superb.. I loved the banner.. Its lovely ❤️.hayee thank u so much my dear bon. Finally Vadheras are out of the picture for a while 😆.. Virman are all alone .haww kya chal raha hai tere dimag mein😉. I toh loved overprotective Virat very much..mee too😳 He was ready to romance with her in the office 😲.. Naughty boy 😉.you are absloutly right. But Manvi is no less than him.. She made him fool 😛.yeh toh hai. Thier first date was just perfect ❤️.. Loved the way they were admiring each other.. And then Virat complimented her.. Wow .koi baat nahi ek din tere ko bhi aisa compliment dene wala milega. It was beautifully written 👏👏👏.thank u so much😊. Loved the way he proposed her.. Lucky Manvi 😃.. He hid that ring in the cake 😎.. Thats something new.. Song-dance part was great.. And then they kissed ☺️.haww kiss un dono ne kiya aur sharma tu rahi hai. It was so hot ☺️.. Loved Manvi's reaction after seeing him in the morning.. It reminds me of DDLJ..tujhe bhi ddlj ki yaad ayi😕 " waise jo kal nahi hua let's do it today " - Haww Virat is so besharm 😆..maine hi banaya hai😳 But that stupid phone call ruined the moment.. Ending was very very scary 😳.. That jerk Raj 😡😡😡.. I hate him..even mee too hate him but you know na jab tak kahani mein villian na ho kahani adhuri hoti hai 😉Virat bhi Chandigarh me nahi hai.. Now who will save her from that moron?? Hope she will be fine.. Loved the update 👍🏼.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care ❤️ 🤗love you too and thanks for reading it🤗

I m late 😭 iskeliyee kaan pakad ke sorry...plz mujhe maaf kardoo... ...
N coming to the update...it was superb awesome... 👏 👏 👏 Really loved it to the core... ⭐️ ...Kya entry thi hero virat ki...hayee ...Main toh fidaa hogayii...waise toh main phele se hi fidaa thi... 😳 ...Becharii manvi... 😭 ...Iss raj ki toh main... 😡 Loved the way virat tried to console manvi...beautifully written shivi ⭐️ ...Yeh ending main kya howaa... 😲 ...Swamini bua ki haat se coffee mug gir gayaa..haww... 😲 ...Eeks excited for next update...really looking forward...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm shivi 😊

Unres kar diya pg 80 😎

pata nh aur kitne tme mai yeh update read karugi m jst nt gettng ovr it
It ws jst perfct

What an amazing & looonnnggg update 😛 😊 😃
Yayyy!!!!! Virat...the superman saved manvi 😃
I was having fun when virat was punching raj very hardly 😆
After that!!!! I was in shock...the way manvi behaved with virat...but then she was in shock also!!!!
Shit man!!! Raj bhaag gaya 😡
Okay but more than that i am worried that what vadheras have seen that they are so much in shock!!!!
I think virman got married...kaash aisa ho jaye 😛

I just loved the way you portrait the whole incidence!!!!
First i loved it when you showed that manvi was behaving badly with virat because she was still not in her senses & was in shock!!!!! That behaviour was so required at that time...if you would have shown that she was behaving normally...then it would have been wierd!!!!
Then it was so sweet to see virat's eagerness to see whether manvi was fine or not!!!!

I mean you just did it man!!! You filled the update will so beautiful emotions...!!!! Amazing yaar...well done!!!!
Hats off!!!! 👏
Please please update soon...can't wait what's next...& update it like this only...i mean this looonnnggg 😛

I know...i know i am greedy!!! 😛 😉

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

I m late 😭 iskeliyee kaan pakad ke sorry...plz mujhe maaf kardoo... ...
N coming to the update...it was superb awesome... 👏 👏 👏 Really loved it to the core... ⭐️ ...Kya entry thi hero virat ki...hayee ...Main toh fidaa hogayii...waise toh main phele se hi fidaa thi... 😳 ...Becharii manvi... 😭 ...Iss raj ki toh main... 😡 Loved the way virat tried to console manvi...beautifully written shivi ⭐️ ...Yeh ending main kya howaa... 😲 ...Swamini bua ki haat se coffee mug gir gayaa..haww... 😲 ...Eeks excited for next update...really looking forward...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm shivi 😊