VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 57

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

This superb...loved their romantice moments most...so cute...the morning scene was funny...ohhh goddd this bloody b***** raj...virat will not leave him this time...he will not let him do anything with manvi...u stopped at a wrong place so pls cont asap

Originally posted by: nishal310

read in maroon

Originally posted by: fatima06

mera thanku wapis karo di 😛 mery b dimagh me DDLG nai tha wo tou meny comments me sy copypaste mara 😆😆 samjha karo na di

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Shivali...itnaa lamba update...love u ...thank u so much ...hanji itna lamba update and love you too🤗...tuumahre fingers pain kar rahe hogee...take care.kar rahe the but ab nahi b'coz tumhara itna lamba comment jo dekh liya😆..🤗...n coming the to the update it was mind blowing...awesome...damekedaar...👏👏👏...really loved every bit of it..aww thank u soo much yummy.⭐️ahaa naughty virat i juz loved it...😉...kahin pe bhi shuru ho jaa taa hai...😛yeah mujhe bhi yahi shikayat hai ki kahi pe bhi shuru ho jata hai😉😉...n the date uff...it was so nice superb......virat propose manvi......everything was so beautifully written...⭐️...awwn...main tho kho gayii virman wold main...hayyen the surprises were fantastic...😳virat ne jiz tarah propose kiyaa it was soo awwn...sweet...😳...the dialogues were awesome...
the song was perfect...😃...i could imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes..hayee...haww tune sach mein unke date scene ko imagine kiya naughty girl😳😳..the morning scene was awesome n cute too.....virat"waise jo kal nahi hua let's do it today"...haww naughty virat😉...par is phone kii gantii ne sab karaab karidiyaa...😡😆...uff kabab mein haddi type haina
omg yeh raj...😡...ab manvi kya karegii...😭...hope virat jaldii aajaayee...
can't wait for next update...really looking forward...will be eagerly waitting for it...plz continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm ...😊it's my plxr dear

Originally posted by: afreenkansal

awesome update
continue soon

Originally posted by: Khushi

hey...loved the way virat proposed maanvi😃...wowww...it's every girl's dream...and that ba****d raj what the hell he think of himself huh😡😡...i know virat will be the saver boy but how?😕??it's daam curious...thnx for the PM...UPDATE SOON 😊

Originally posted by: shruthi13

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awesome update!!!!!😃 thank u😊

haww manvi us raj ke office chali gayi😲 aur woh raj i hate him😡 mee too but kya kare i love complicated stories😳haan😲

par manvi ne acha sunaya usko👍🏼 yeah right yeh sab meri wajah se sunaya😆

nd da over protective virat😆 hayee

haww bechare virat ko kiss bhi nahi diya manvi ne😳 oops

aww virat is so romantic😳 itne ache se confess kiya... akhir dialogue kiske the😉

i luv him yarr😉 nd da song.. aww😳 it's my favourite song

oye hoye virman romance☺️ par galat tym pe rok diya😳 ab kya kar sakte hai😳

ha ha naughty virat😉 hmmm

aww virman separation😭 bechare😭

haww dat idiot raj😡 i wanna kll him..oye vilian ke bina story adhuri hoti hai

virat ki hero entry honi chahiye nd he shud save manvi...dekhenge

cont soon shivi nd thnx fr da pm..it's my plxr dear

nd thnx fr updating😃

Originally posted by: sonu0111

Wow...such a beautiful and romantic update.👏

Virat and maanvi first date was romantic . The way virat proposed and maanvi's reaction to proposal was beautifully written.

I was laughing like hell when ring was stuck in maanvi's mouth 🤣 and liked her enthusiastic about virat sliding the ring and perfect song sequence.

Maanvi's fear of leaving virat made him to sleep with her shows her fear and virat's love on her.

Liked the naughty virat hehe... But yaar you stopped at the wrong place don't know what going to happen with maanvi, just hoping for virat to come at right time and also show raj his place.

Thanks for the update and for the pm.

Take care.

Originally posted by: Bhabani90

Wow.. Its dhasu filmy.. Luvd it.. Nd m too xctd for nxt so hope u won't keep u waiting for long.. Update soon sweety..:-)