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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 7


Had heard that Time is the best Healer... But what if time doesnt feel like moving... What if someone donot want to be healed? About two weeks had passed after the incident, but instead of any recovery Virat was not getting even any response from MANVI...
LIFE SEEMS SO LIFELESS SOMETIMES...
After trying all the ways the only response he was getting was a single nod or Yes/No... He hadnt even talked to her about Varun's death.. All the day he accompanied her totally ignoring all other things including office and at night even he made her sleep by talking to her... Though Manvi was taking her medicnes daily which the doctor had prescribed for her but whenever Virat wokeup from sleep, most often he saw her standing near the window looking at the stars... and every time he made her back to sleep again it became more difficult for him to sleep again

It was sunday and after having so called Breakfast Virat took her to vineyard at the back of their home... There used to be time when Manvi only jumped around here and there everytime they used to visit it and every attempt of Virat to made her sit along with him used to fail down... Thats why he never liked to visit it along with Manvi but today he had planned something different...

Virat: Manvi be there, i am coming back in 5 minutes...he said before leaving her there...Manvi moved towards the chairs and sat on one of them..

It was always amazing for her to see the golden sun rays trying to creep out of the thick grape-vine shelter... Though hardly any ray ever succeded in getting so, but of the ray which in case get in, she used to move her hand in and out of it and Virat always used to wonder whats so pleasing in it for her...

Though sitting quitely there, Manvi noticed sunrays approaching exact centre of the table and something glittering in it.. Without thinking anything she moved her hand towards it to pick up the thing...
It was her wedding ring...

the sameone whose diamond had losted but it was there now... She immediately stand up and turned back and saw Virat standing there with nervous expressions...She looked into his eyes which were giving a different spark...
Virat slowly moved towards her and without breaking the eyelock softly took the ring and moved in into her finger and whispered
"Its Valentines Day My Dear wife..."
TEARS started falling off from her eyes wetting her cheeks... All of the sudden she felt helpless and sat on the gound with sudden thud... Virat on seeing this immediately accompany her to the ground and approximated her to provide support to her... Though he didnt stop her from crying to let her cry her heart out for sometime...

Manvi: I am Sorry Virat..., she said while clutching his shirt in one day...

Though trying to speak up all the things to assure her, to comfort her, to made her believe that he would be always with her, to tell her that actually he was Sorry for not being with her. what only he was able to say was: "Manvi please dont cry... I cant see u like this" and to his pleasure she stopped it within 5 minutes... Some scilence and then Virat spoke in a low tone,

Virat:Manvi u know all na which I want to say?

though Manvi didnt speak anything but she placed her head on his chest... and that was more important than the words to give him the answer...

Though it was an off day, but due to some imp meating Virat had to attend, hedecided to attend the office and to leave Manvi for about one or two hours...
Virat: Manvi I am going to office, will be back soon... Take care till then and I know U will, atleast for me... he said by looking deeply into her eyes for reassurance... but then thinking something, he looked down and decided something else ...

Virat: Manvi, lets go there together... i dont wanna get bore alone...you are my betterhalf, so if not half then atleast 1/4 you have to share, i cant take all alone...

And to his surprise, She Smiled... Though not widely but even this little bit was more than enough to lighten his world... He looked into the window and the sun seemed to be more brighter than usual with a smiley face... He felt more ecstastc than ever before... After so many days he ACTUALLY breathed...
Manvi: Virat lets go...

Virat after coming back to senses: yeah sure...lets move..
and after a long time she was actually with him...


Precap:
Virat What happened Manvi...?
Manvi: Virat... Varun... I have seen him... she replied with broken voice..

note... i have written this in a very bad mood, with tears falling on the keypad, making it difficult to type, actually not a bad one but an emotional one(yeah i am an emotional fool)... dont know where to pent out so i am here...
Love to all❤️ 🤗
Edited by crazyvirmanians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Was an awesome update wow improvement in manvi
Loved it continue soon and do pm me
Tears falling hope your ok dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update. Manvi is returning back to normal. Love the way u showed the pain and love beautifully in the update.Thanks for the pm.Precap sounds interesting.Thanks for the pm.😊.

P.S: Hope u r alright. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...poor virat...he actually cares her a lot even after all that fiasco...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesome update.. can't wait to read more.. pls continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey buddy dont be upset... Whatever is bothering you, Im sure you are gonna solve it 😊... Guess what the update was freaking awesome⭐️.. so cheer up 😃.. Yes it was very emotional.. and I loved it.. I loved Virat's lil gestures to get her back to herself.. you portrayed manvi's reactions very beautifully.. 👏 Precap sounds interesting.. Varun is dead right?? Will be waiting for your next update... thank you for the pm.. Take care😊

Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...u updated two parts in my absence...awesome as usual...part 6 is quite a long one than part 7...but both r good...ohhh...poor virman...in both the parts virat's pain is there...but whats that precap...varun is alive...mysterious ha...update this time sooner...

what happened to u? i dont know why u r sad...but dont be sad na...ppl with emotions r good than ppl with no emotions...keep smiling and take care dear...


btw thanks for the pm and may i know ur name(if u dont mind)...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A big Hug 🤗to all...
Its first time so far that all my problems solved within one day... I dont know how... ok, My problem was that my cousin is coming and I want off from the college for this, though I wasnt finding any way to convince my parents and to my surprise, yesterday evening he called me and said, "Its not your headache, just mark one day attendence and be back to home along with her, I will handle the rest, dont worry"
and I was like
P.s... I know that there was nothing in it to cry for...
and @Madhu My name is Sana... so short na?
LOL enough of my story. lets move to the other one now...


Chapter 8

"Manvi just hurry up, I have to attend a meeting even after the shopping..." Virat shouted looking at the watch

Manvi: So what? First I will complete my list for shopping then we will go...dont want anything to be missed out...

"And what if I missed my meeting?" replied Virat...

Manvi:" I dont care, thats not my headache and anyways its almost complete... let me concentrate.."
Virat: "Tell me onething Maanvi, U always make this list but I dont think that we ever do shopping according to it..."
Manvi: 'Virat ok what do you think that if I found something more interesting there then shall I leave it just becoz its not in the list and then back to home and then to make again a list including that thing and then..."
"Manvi, Hold on... I got it": Virat interrupted her
Manvi: "Its okay Virat, lets go now..."
"Lets go my dear wife..." he repied holding her hand

Life was getting back to normal again... and Virat was more than happy for seeing her back to normal again...

After about half hour drive, we entered the Mall...
Manvi: "Virat, I forgot my bag into the car, please bring it, The list is in it"
Virat:"Ohkkie... will be back within 5 minutes"

Saying this he moved ou of the Mall towards his car to bring her bag... and actually within 5 minutes he was back... But Manvi was not there...Where could she have been, he became quite tensed thinking about it...

after searching her around for sometime,
HE SAW HER...
She was sitting with her back supported by wall near a shop. Though it wasnt a busy place, thats why people hadnt noticed her...
She looked completely shocked...
Virat immediately sat next to her.. He was concerned to see her again like that..
Virat: "Manvi, What happened?"
Manvi:" Virat, lets go from there" she replied immediately
Virat: "but what happened Manvi... Is everything ok?"
Manvi:" Virat, please i wanna be home right now..." she replied with blank expressions
Without thinking about anything else, he provided her support to get up and headed towards the car to get home
while driving he kept on asking the question but she seemed to be lost somewhere..

within no time they were back to home but Manvi was getting more restless by then..
Virat: now first tell me, whats wrong with you? It was ultimate concern that was bothering him... She looked horrible in that state

Manvi: "Virat, I have seen him... I have seen Varun..." she replied looking somewhere else...
Virat: "Its ok Manvi, leave him... stop thinking about him.. He cant comw between us now"
Manvi: "You are not believing me na?" she looked at him finding something
Virat: "Manvi plzz calm down... Its ok I am with u... SO"
Manvi: "Why the hell u are not believing me? I am telling u that I have seen him... He hadnt gone to Delhi... He is there, just like that day he is again ing... plzz Virat dont go and lets inform the police... she said wiping her tears from one hand and dragging him from the other one..."
Virat: "Manviii come here..." he replied pulling her close and while caressing her thick brown hairs he again rattled... "Manvi, listen to me.. leave him, we should not be discussing about anyone else except us... lets go for dinner... i am really hungry."
"For God's sake Virat, plz lets go to police... he is there all free... she said looking a little bit disappointed..
"Virat: "Manvi, he is not there... Why dont u understand? Why dont u understand that he cant be anywhere, He is Dead... Can u listen to me... He is no more Manvi...Rohit called me and told me about his car crash... Yes he didnot succeed in going off to Delhi but this is also not possible for him to be there..."
Manvi; "but i have seen him Virat... why dont u believe me"
Virat; "Get out of your fears now Manvi and u have to..."
"So u think l am hallucinating, no i am not Virat..."she shouted looking downwards in some unknown direction...
Virat: "no i am not saying that but maybe u have considered someone else as him..."
Manvi: "Plz Virat understand me, its not that i have seen him, i have also sensed him and I know he is there... plz listen Virat I cant forget him, i really cant... u have to believe me..."she replied while trying to breath, shivering badly...
and before he could handle the situation she collapsed on the floor...
Virat immediately called the doctor and took her to the bed... intense guilt hit him on seeing her like that, what if he had believe Varun to be alive, atleast he could have reassured her for believing it...
Doctor: No need to worry Virat... it was just due to low BP... She will be fine soon..But can I ask that was there any emotional disturbance or some thing like that...? Isnt she out of all the things till now...?"
Virat: It seemed to be but... (he narrated him the mall's incident
Doctor: "I think virat u should consult a psychuatrist now,,, i mean one month had passed, she should be out of it by now and if she is not, then u should definitely look forward it"
Virat: "Thanku doctor, I dont think she needs it, i will handle it myself.. and will ask you if there would a need..." he responed back still looking downwards..
Doctor: "Ok Virat, I am leaving, do inform me about Manvi after two hours" and with some instructions he left

Within one hour Manvi gained consciousness, and managed to sit up with Virat's support...
Virat could still see the confusion in her,
Virat: "Manvi, R u alright?"
Manvi: "I am fine.."
It was the same question that he was asking her from last many days and every time she just replied that she is fine or didnot reply at all but at the same time she always gestured that she is understanding his concern... but this was missing today... It seemed just a formal question today... As if she was not believing his question...

After 2 days:
After recieving a call, Virat immediately rushed to home and saw her sitting on the edge of bed..
Virat: "Manvi, Where u had been and why were u not attending my phone"
Manvi: "Virat, I have filed the case against Varun"
"and u donot consider it important to discuss with me?" Virat asked in disbelievement..
Manvi: "Thats because I know that u are not gonna believe me"
Virat: "Manvii, Listen... Its not the matter of believing or nor, its just that I want you to be safe.. Manvi Varun is dead, no one is gonna believe u... Why dont u understand?"
Manvi: "Virat, I dont want anyone else to believe me... Only U matters to me... Virat I have seen him again and believe me I am not hallucinatng"
"You r impossible and i dont know what to do Manvi"... saying this he left leaving behind Manvi who knew that this time its not gonna be easy...

Present... In NewYoRK...
MANVI POV...
Today strange thing happened, my neighbour invited me to her son's Birthday Party and I just cant say her NO... I dont know the reason, maybe bcoz of her name... Her name is jeevika... oh yes there is nothing in name Jeevika but her full name is Jeevika Vadhera and her husband name is Viren Vadhera... Ofcourse I know that these vadheras are quite different from him, but still I feel attraction... maybe due to same surname or maybe due to their son Nihal... Everytime I see him, he brings a smile on my face just like Virat... well maybe i am thinking more than needed these days...
I was sitting on my bed with my head resting on the bed, LOST in thought, when someone knocked at the door...
I asked the person to come in and there was Jeevika...
"Manvi, what are u wearing for the birthday party", she enquired...
"I dont know" I replied as i really havent think about it yet...
"Ok, let me decide" she replied and started looking into the closet.. I knew that she was doing it for the purpose of assuring my presense in the party. She came out with about 3 dresses... "Manvi, wear anyone of them, but I think this blue one is best for u" she told me showing the dress...

and before I spoke in agreement, 10 years old Nihal entered the room..
Nihal: "Hi Manvi... What are u wearing at my party?"
"I am deciding but Jeevika has selected this blue dress for me" I answered him...
Nihal: "Leave MOM aside...Listen to me.. I have told all my friends that I have a girlfriend like Bella in the twillight and she is going to wear black dress in the party... So wear the black one..."
I smiled at his description...
Jeevika: "Dont u think she is a little bit older for you. and arent u too small to handle the girlfriend thing."
"MOM... Just cool down, she is my girlfriend and if she is not having problrm then whats wrong with you, Do u have any problem Manvi?" he asked me with full confidence as if he knew that I am not gonna say No...
"Yes ofcourse no problem" I answered him and on listening it he waved me Bye and went out..
Jeevika: "Thanks God he choosed you.. otherwsise I dont know whom I gonna have as her girlfriend at the party and thanks to u for coming to the party though I know that its becoz of Nihal and not becoz of me"

"He is so cute but he is not like u, nor like Viren.. I mean his features are quite different" I enquired...
Jeevika: "Yes Viren told me that Nihal is more like my devar,,, I mean Viren's brother,, Viren told me that his brother used to be same like Nihal in his childhood"
It puzzled me more, "What do u mean by Viren told you? havent u seen him?"
"No, actually, Viren belonged to a broken family, I mean same typical story that becoz of divorce of the parents, they both separated, actually even Viren have not met him untill last visit to India about one month back...till then only childhood memories were with him and more than that I havent enquired because i know talking about it brings pain to him" Jeevika was telling me while putting back my clothes into the closet...
and I was thinking that no one is free from life twists and turns...

Edited by crazyvirmanians - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy... me first...

here comes the second biggest twist...manvi with virika...u r going to reveal the secret(why did they separate) in the last part...right...i m eagerly waiting and still waiting...not fair
(just kidding...take ur time)...as usual amazing part and long one...i liked nihal part and name also...flashback is sad...thanks for the pm and take care sana(it is short and sweet...i like ur name...)
Edited by madhavichowdary - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it was a lovely update!
So i guess virat is virens brother!
Nishal and manvi r boyfriend girlfriend 😆
actually what happend between virman are they not staying together anymore or something else
continue soon dear and please pm me!
Edited by ..nikki_vijay.. - 12 years ago

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