VIRMAN SS... LOST(chapter 9 updated pg14)

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sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

hey finally u updated aftr long gap... im speechless, its amazing update... i dinn understnd y manvi is not reacting fr wat happened to her

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Nice update 😊.. I loved the detailed description of Virman's behaviour after the incident.. Im little confused about Maanvi's reactions though..Why is she behaving like that?? so Varun is dead.. Im eager to know whats gonna happen next.. Please continue soon and thank you for the pm 😊

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Loved the update.Love the way u explained Manvi's feelings, how blank she felt and showed that the shock of what had happened had not drained very beautifully.And loved the way how you showed a husband would react to her pain when he loves her so muc.Wow yaar U explained both of their feelings, turmoil very well.Awesome.Thanks for the pm😊

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Aarti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awesome update dear .

very beautifully written .

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aaliya172

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Loved it.
Virat is waiting for her to come back.
Why did manvi leave him?
Plz continue soon n thanks for the pm.

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afreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Loved it
Waiting to see what happens to manvi
Continue soon

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Ahhh urrrmm ok I'm speechless I have nothin to say
Loved the update awesome hope manvi is fine continue soon
And do pm me

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crazyvirmanians

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

A big Hug to all 🤗 for all the lovely comments...

Love to all❤️

will update soon

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

This is amazing...i m speechless actually...i means its a awesome yar...i just read all parts in 1 go...u write virats and manvis POV fabulously...speacially virat...the way he feel regreat, the way he want her back...was just perfect...pls yar cont soon n pm me next time...plzzz

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crazyvirmanians

@crazyvirmanians

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
This is amazing...i m speechless actually...i means its a awesome yar...i just read all parts in 1 go...u write virats and manvis POV fabulously...speacially virat...the way he feel regreat, the way he want her back...was just perfect...pls yar cont soon n pm me next time...plzzz

Thank u so much 4 your lovely comment❤️

will do for sure... would love to❤️

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