VIRMAN SS... LOST(chapter 9 updated pg14)

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hey i am starting another one, sorry couldnt resist... missing virman like hell these days

CHAPTER ONE

MANVI POV

Chilling cold winter night and its raining too... all i want is to absorb these tiny drops in me...
I used to love winter nights, i would not say that i am not liking it but i all i want is to be lost in the fog...
i choosed a busy street for walk, what i like about it that no one cares about you there... every one busy in their own lives, racing with each other.. and these days i am liking to be lost in bunch of people, STRANGE PEOPLE... Few years back, whwnever i used to get upset, all i want was to be alone but today i want to be lonely even... i just want to be LOST...
may be bcoz that i know that being lonely i would not be able to control my feelings and i dont want to be weak... I CANT EVEN
Strange thing, yesterday my neighbour advised me a lot of things, though she dont know me for more than a week but she said that I dont deserve to be alone.. she told me a fact, a fact that,
"No one in the world can make you, its only u who can do this for yourself, if you wanna be happy then try to be happy, only this could help you"
I smiled at her, and just asked her,
"Who said that I want to be HAPPY, i just want to be LOST"...
She gave me a weird look and then went away... GOD i am so mysterious these days...
YES I "MANVI CHOUDHARY" HAVE LEFT "VIRAT SINGH VADHERA"
yes i left him alone, whom i used to say that,
I wouldnt be able to live without him ever
But i left him... but i was not wrong,
I AM NOT LIVING MY LIFE NOW... I am just dragging it... Dragging because i dont have courage to end it, NOT becoz i am afraid of death, just becoz I CAN STILL FEEL HIM... YES I CAN... and i dont want to end this feeling... YES I AM SELFISH ABOUT ANYTHING RELATED TO HIM

VIRAT POV...

All around are telling me that she is gone... But i dont believe them, HOW COULD I..
i can see her in front of my eyes, so why should I? stupid people... She keeps me teasing all the day, GOD sometimes she is so childlish AND I LOVE HER...
But whats wrong with other people... Why cant they see her? BUT who cares...
BUT wait a minute, AM I HALLUCINATING?
No ofcourse I am not, even in the morning, she waked me up by brushing her hairs on my face... BUT why she is not talking to me these days, all she do is just smiling and smiling... AND HER SMILE... it mesmerizes me everytime...
And how could she leave me alone, ofcourse she could not, bcoz she told me that she would never be able to live without me
AND NEVER WOULD I
But i havent told her this ever, but now i think that I SHOULD...


Chapter 2: pg2
Chapter 3: pg4
Chapter 4: pg6
Chapter 5: pg7
Chapter 6: pg9
Chapter 7: pg11
Chapter8: pg12
Chapter9:pg14
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mysterious and nice concept

plzz cont it n pm me

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nice concept👏
continue soon yaar
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sounds interesting..manvi loves him bt still left him n i m confused about virat's reaction.. do continue n pls pm me..😊

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good start please continue soon and please pm me when u update next part😊⭐️😆
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Very interesting start!! Loved it 😊

Plz pm me when u update it. Would love to read.. Buddy request is on ur way... 😊
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continue- continue fast dear . i want to read it .it sounds really interesting .
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loved it
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sounds interesting...you should continue...I'd love to read it...
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Chapter 2

VIRAT POV
i still remembere the day when i first saw her,i can still feel that day...
was going to home after a long tiring day in office... rainy day it was... suddennly my car stopped with a jerk... i just opened my mouth to ask the driver about what happened but then i saw HER... i just forget asking him about anything... was just looking at her... she was wearing yellow, i dont like yellow colour, still not but at the same time i admitted the fact this colour was made only for her... she was walking with some lady, who was trying to protect her from rain by making her under the umberella but all she was doing was moving slowly and slowly so that she could remain behind and become free of that shield between her and rain... but then i noticed that lady with her was saying her something and after listening to her she started walking properly...but then slowly she creeped out one of her arm at back and spread it out in the rain... she was so refreshing... when at the end of day all around me were looking tired and bored, she was somethimg different... but then all of a sudden she started moving back and soon was out of sight... how could this be possible... and then i realized that actually my car got fixed and it was me who was moving ahead... stupid driver, he should had asked me before moving ahead...that day i thought that i would never be able to meet her in my life but life had different plan for us... we do met
but now she is gone, dont know where but she s gone,
PLEASE COME BACK MANVI.. my heart was screaming


Two years back,

a 45 years lady was serving breakfast to three people sitting around the dining table...
they were going to start their breakfast, when all of a sudden they heard a scream...
"Beeji I think MANVI Di is up" says one of them and all of them smiled...
And here comes MANVI coming downstairs, all in a hurry... she came and stood in front of that lady, "Beeji why didnt you wake me up? u know i am late, late as always... Beeji its my interview today"
"Manvi Di we all tried to wake you up but all in vain" says one of them
"just shutup Dabbu. i know how you were trying to awake me, no i must say you were trying to make me sleep more, no one wants me to try for job, but i will, ok i am leaving bye bye" says manvi
Beeji:"manvi, its your last try and if you didnt get the job then u r going back with us to Hirishiskesh"
Manvi: ok beeji but i am having strong feeling that i would get one today and for this i have to be a little bit fast, so bye Beeji and Bye chachu, chachi and dabbu, manvi waved bye to all of them and stepped out of the house...

on the other hand,
in a well furnished luxurious office, there was sitting VIRAT SINGH VADHERA,
his PA came in, "Sir, thats all for today"
Virat: i know interviews are all over and i am not impressed by a single one, dont know whom to appoint for this job, AM I THAT MUCh choosey?
His PA smiled: HOW do i know sir?
VIrat: yes ofcourse how do you know?
and then they heard someone shouting outside

they moved out to see whats happening and there he saw a girl arguing with all around...the same girl he saw yesterday night in the rain... his eyes got spark all of a sudden...
he smiled and moved towards her, Can i ask whats happening here? and before that can i ask whats your name? says virat
"no, u cant ask,she replied, u know what, people are mad there, they can run huge business but cant even think of a proper name for their company... i mean seriously, "Vadhera Enterprises", cant they think of another name
Virat:"and what is wrong with this name, can u explain me?
"you r asking me what is wrong? u know what, just becoz of this name, i misssed my interview" she attacked back
Virat: i didnt get u, how because of this name?
Sir actually, she was called for interview by Vadhera States, and by mistake she is there, explain one of the employee there
"mistake, u r calling it my mistake" she grinned at him, now what would i do, beeji would take me back, she almost started crying"
Virat: "why dont u try here? i mean in Vadhera Enterprises?
"really, what do you think that i am a multitalented film heroine? who can do anything? i was short listed as Interior decorator there, what would i do here, she said
Virat: well there is a vacancy for interior decorator for our new project and u can get this job, only if?
Only if what? she enquired
Virat: only if you would tell me your name, so that someone can type an appointment letter for you
"seriously? u r not joking na? see i dont like pranks, no you cant, but still MY name is Manvi Choudhary" she looked a little bit confused
Virat: See Manvi, u will get your appointment letter in no time, dont worry
saying this he turned back and left her with lots of confusion in her head and on the other hand he was thinking, which project to start as he had appointed her as interior decorator

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