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Posted: 12 years ago
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can't wait for their meeting
continue soon
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it was a fab part ..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You updated wow it was amazing loved it loved the flashback
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i liked it... plz do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wow.. nice update
virat and manvi's pov is full of suspense
plz update it soon otherwise that suspense will really kill me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fab...pleasee cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update.Love the way how u present both their feelings.Very eagerly waiting to know what happened in the party and why are they not together now.Whose fault is it or is it just a MU.Waiting for ur next update.Thanks for the pm yaar😊
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Chapter 5

It was 8'O clock, he left for home to pick up Manvi for party..

And to his surprise his dear Wife was wearing the Black saari

"You r looking really beautifull" he said all of a sudden

"and that's because I was unable to find the pink one, so don't be happy that much' she replied back quite surprised by compliments from Virat's side

Virat: "okkkiee. Now lets go there" he smirked showing that he wasn't convinced even a bit with her explainations

After sometime, they were in the party, Virat greeting with his friends and Manvi accompanying him..

Varun; By the way guys, I am going off to Delhi today so it's a kind of farewell to me..

Virat: Hey don't worry yar, Delhi is not far away, we will be there for you whenever u want…

Varun: ofcourse I will call you and Manvi whenever I need, as you r one of my best friends and manvi is your wife, so I think that much I owe…? He said by looking into Manvi's eyes

Manvi was quite tensed with Varun's presence, she didn't like her even a bit, so she was tightly holding Virats hand…

Virat; "for sure, Varun"

"Ok, so I am going now, my flight time, so bye bye".. he said and walked away after greeting everyone

after he has gone, Manvi loosened her grip on Virat's hand

Virat: Thanks God, otherwise all were looking at us

"oh really…? If a wife is holding her husband's hand, all are looking and what about all those around who are also doing the same but not with their husband's… you know what you should also go there" she replied fuming in anger

Virat, "ok, as you say' he responded while moving to a group of girls leaving Manvi mouth opened

Manvi to herself, "With me, he cant even express freely and now see how is he talking to them quite at peace"

She moved toward them and pulled him back

Virat what the hell you were doing with them? Manvi rattled

"Manvi relax, and by the way it was you who told me to go away, he smiled as his plan working..

You know what, Go to Hell…she stated grinning

And to her surprise , " You know what, I am going, Bye Bye"… he replied

Virat moved out of the place, his mind quickly working,

he was planning for Manvi's Birthday from last many days, now the day was ahead and he still had to make many more arrangements….

This much is allowed, after all u looked more mesmerizing when irritated, he gave a wide smile while thinking

After making one or two important calls regarding arrangements, quite relieved now he was thinking of how to keep her wife for 2 hours more there, and he knew it was one of the difficult task he ever came across… and then exact at 12.00 they will be at home… and then SURPRISE… he was much excited about her birthday and why should not he?… it was her Manvi's Birthday… THE REASON OF HIS UNREASONED SMILE… he thought to himself

Scene Shifts

On the other side, Manvi was sitting all alone, thinking,

"Don't he know that I could read his eyes, I know that He is planning for my Birthday… and I am giving him full advantage to be happy that I am not aware of any thing, she giggled while thinking..

But still two Hours, God and I know that now he will try his best to keep me there and I will try my best to force him to go home.. I think atleast That much effort should be there on husband's side…

But Two Hours…? Really? Is it necessary to celebrate at 12, we can celebrate whenever we want, but who can teach him… she was in deep thought suddenly startled by waiter's voice…

Waiter: "Mam, This is for you", he handled over a card

Manvi clutched the card and opened it, there was a writing on it

Meet me at the back hall now..

She beamed at the effort of his dear husband….

And made her way to the back hall thinking about him…

She enterd the hall and was surprised,

It was enchanted with candles and roses, quite enough to delight anyone….

But something was missing, it wasn't of virat's type, she knew that, he would have never chosen roses, ofcourse she knew that…

Manvi was trying to get hold of the situation, when when felt someone's touch at her back…

Sudden wave of coldness striked her, she could appreciate that it wasnt Virat's hands, she could feel the coldness in the other person despite Virat's warm touch…

She turned back all of a sudden, to see the face of the person…

There was Varun satnding in front of her..

What the Hell are you doing there, you were off to Delhi, Don't you? She yelled at him

Surprise, Surprise, don't you like it? He said moving closer to her, his eyes more deepened then usual…

Manvi, "No Varun, and for God sake plzz stay away" she said while closing her eyes, trying to avoid the situation but it wasn't worth of it

Actually I don't have much time, 1 hour remaining in my flight… sooo…? , he replied back with coldness in his eyes making his grip around Manvi more strong…

Manvi, No plzzz, Viraaat, she screamed with full force

Varun, Mrs Vadhera, not worth of it, don't you know that u r in the back hall

"pls stay away Varun, plz stay away", that was all she was able to speak, realizing the faintness in her voice, realizing the insecurity, the pit fall…

she tried to move away, but couldt, she was in strong grip, tears rolled down her cheeks but no one was there to wipe them away at that time… she tried to scream again but her mind was not working, she tried to escape but she couldnt, she could feel the person empowering her, and then all of a sudden once again she tried to retreat regaining her full strength but it wasn't her day….

She could feel herself dead…..

Scene Shifts

Virat back to party and searched for manvi,

Rohit, Have u seen Manvi?

No, must be there, just call her, Rohit replied

Have done, but she is not attending the phone… anyways don't worry, I will go for her my self, he replied and walked out…

"Where she has been to, May be HOME…? No, she cant destroy my plan like this.. but maybe I have offended her much today, he thought while moving towards his car in the parking area, he was quite sure that she would have been off to home

he sat in the car and was igniting the engine, when he saw Varun in the back mirror,

What the hell is he doing here, he frowned….

And before he could ask him, he saw him sitting in his car and flying away…

Virat moved out of the car, and started moving in the direction from where Varun was coming… some sense of danger he could appreciate

While near the back hall, he saw Manvi's ear rings, there, sudden fear chilled him… all of a sudden HE BECAME MORE WORRIED OF Manvi's absence… He took out his phone to dial Manvi's number once again but before that he saw the door half open…

He opened the door and entered the hall with his heart beating in an ususual manner,

And HE SAW HER…

No, she couldn't be her, she was just like her but she couldn't be Manvi..

He saw her lying on the floor, with her eyes closed… in a state he could never imagined off.. neither he could ever… He closed his eyes to finish the nightmare, but no it wasnt the dream… it was the bitter reality…

He could feel his blood rushing through his body…

He hurriedly rushed towards her, taking he fragile body in his arms and slowly whispered his name,

Manvi

She didn't replied back…

Manvi, he called again with little more strength in his voice, but still she wasn't responding…

He clutched her tightly towards him, trying to wake her up but no response from her side… he could see the bruises, scratch marks all around her body, her lip was bleeding…

He tried to move his trembling hands softly over her wounds, feeling the pain she would have been through and closed his eyes… tears rolled down his cheeks…

Without thinking for another second, he immediately took her in his arms and headed towards the car…

He was rushing to home as fast as possible, all bcoz he wanted her to be fine soon.. as soon as possible

he had called the doctor already and now while driving he was holding Manvi, gripping her close to his chest, to his heart and his mind was strucked on one thing only,

"I will only come to party if you promise that you wont leave me alone there for a second"..

And he had promised her then how could he, all the thoughts haunting his mind..

Within 15 minutes they were home.. Virat carried her inside the home and as soon as he entered the lounge, he heard the clock alarm of 12.00 clock…

And he looked around ,

All arrangements were according to his wish, whole house filled with white tulips, candles melting all around with soft background music… perfect timings for which he was praying to God for the whole day…

He looked at the person in his arms, and his heart stopped all of a sudden…

He placed her on the bed and while caressing her hairs slowly whispered,

Happy Birthday Manvi, trying to engulf the sudden pain in his heart he placed his lips on her forehead

To be continued……………………..

Love to all the Virmanians...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Loved the update so much.I hate disgusting people like Varun so much. 😡.
U have explained Virat's feelings , his guilt very beautifully l.Love u so much for that.A big hug to u for that. 🤗And u showed MAnvi's helplessness too very well.Loved the whole update so much. Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.😊
Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Omg poor manvi hate varun awesome update loved it continue soon and do pm me

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