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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Seriously Loved this 👏

Beautiful writing...😊

Thanks for the PM...

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very emotional...can't express my feeling in words...brilliant

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sara arif

@Saaraa.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Omg Neha! I have no words to express my love for this story! Its fantastic. Thankyou for the pm and I would love to readore stories written by such a talented writer like you. Hats off to you and your writing . 👏

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sajanfan004

@sajanfan004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey!

You know what? You have left me absolutely speechless!

Firstly, I loved the couple, and everything was perfect... The title, the way you wrote it, and the pictures addition!

The best part was the love for music the couple had! Soo sweet!

I am a great fan of virika and I request you to send me any other link of any os, ss or ff, on virika which you've written!

Thank you so much for the pm!

This was a mind-blowing os... So touching, virika understanding is the best part of them!

I really liked your story, your concept and the way you wrote it was absolutely beautiful!

Do pm me if you write any other story on virika...

--sajanfan004

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Nimishrr

@Nimishrr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG ! Don't know what to say even! This is a perfectly perfect OS. Beautifully written and emotions are well brought out. I could very well imagine all the scene while reading it
The way u used each and every single line of the song, Wonderful !! HATS OFF to you for writing this heart-touching OS ❤️
Starting from the proposal to the loss of baby, It was all marvelous! A beautiful, sweet love-story of Virika ! 😳

Edited by Nimishrr - 12 years ago

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

OMG,I m speechless,it was so wonderful,he end had me in tears,loved loved,loved Ur OS,it was awesome.Plz do write more such stuff on virika,Ur OS are a pleasure to read!!

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved it its so nice i just lvd it

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CHANDANA

@chandana123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Very beautiful OS...

The transition of the couple was very cute...

And the song was mindblowing!!!

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

FANTASTIC SUPER EXCELLENT YA GOOD JOB THANKS FOR THE PM

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wonderful Writing 👏👏👏
Apt Lines & Selection of pics added to the charm ⭐️

So flawlessly describes the story along with Rhythm of The song & the best part is that they Didnt let die that love for song even in bad time...

Apne jeevan saathi ke pyar se zyada humein uske Sukh, sukoon ki zyada zaroorat hoti hai... Yeh baat main sirf aapke liye nahin apne liye bhi keh rahi hun... mujhe koi problem ho toh main yeh expect nahi karti ki aap mujhe samjhein...meri aankhein padhein aur samajh jaayen ki mere dill mein kya chal raha hai par haan main itna zaroor expect karti hun ki har problem mein hum dono saath ho...Sukh mein saath hain toh dukh mein kyun nahin?? Aur rahi pichlo kuch dino ki baat toh main yehi kahungi ki yeh sach hai ki main aapke bina nahin reh sakti par sabse badi baat yeh hai ki main aapko pareshan nahin dekh sakti..

best Lines...shows how much of thought you have put in that . & how much involved you were with that
great job 😊

PS - choti jeevika

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