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sania

@Krazzy4u786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Mind blowing!!!!
Loved it!!! Superb OS!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Beautiful os! All tye emotions penned down perfectly! Hope you write another one soon.
Love
Sarah

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Ashirania

@Ashirania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Aww...it was beautiful :) my favorite was Jeevika and virens convo...the one where Jeevika tells him how love grows...I could almost hear her saying those words...amazingly written nehaji!!

Thank you so much for the pm! Glad I could read such a wonderful piece of writing... :) keep writing!!!!

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virika maliha

@navliha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow...neha ji it was just awesome 👏

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Sonal

@Hello-hi-by-by

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

god, neha i knw ive alrdy comntd but jus wana say dt m not yet ova frm it.. readin it again n again.. cnt tell ya in words wht uve written gal.. ttly speechles, hope ya continue it

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ita_04

@ita_04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

i'm so very late in reading this 😔

but it was so fluidly and sweetly written...

great job neha...

the story had a beautiful flow to it...😳

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Did I read that name correctly? Welcome my dear. Don't worry you are not late as I still haven't read it.

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

wow Can't Wait 2 read Will Commnt Fta finish reading...

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shafaq

@shafaqsheikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

wow that was so beautiful...love .it

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Well I was deciding whether to comment as you know the reason. lol but I couldn't be that mean so I will now that I have read it. Btw where was my pm??? 😆

Wow Neha! That was beautifully penned as per usual. You know I stumble over the Hindi, but what you write is always so good. I loved the journey they had from starting marriage to losing their child. The normal Viren, closing himself off and Jeevika's approach to make him talk.

The way the song was used through the sad and happy moments of their journey. I always love when they fight, it can end nicely like yours but at least it reassembles more of a relationship.

(PS, I liked the pictures as well, but I don't know the song- please don't kill me)

Edited by -Pj- - 12 years ago