Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 5

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PART-11
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MAanvi sleeping peacefully on bed with cludding blanket against her chest..looking too innocent..after long time she felt this peace around her nd specially inside her..after all ups nd down of her life finally her life take right turn wiche automatically joint her life with virat..
Everything was changed now..as she heard soft musical tune of her phone she wake up from her sleep..she turned around on bed nd with lazzy sleep open her eyes..she took her phone from side phone nd placed her her ear..
M-in sleepy voice-hello..
?-kaisi ho beta?
Hearing this voice she sit on bed with sudden jerk nd opened her eyes..
M-mom..aap..
Mrs.bhatiya-yes..good morning dear..
M-smile from heart-good morning mom..ded kaha hai?
Mrs-to happily-yahi hai..mere saath..phone speaker pe hai..
Mr.bhatiya-kaise ho beta?
M-ded..main bilkul thik hu..good morning..
Mr.bhatiya-good morning beta..
Mrs.bhatiya-aaj main bahot khush hu maanvi..humari life se hume ab kuch nahi chahiye..she said happily..
M-confuse-kyu mom?
Mrs.bhatiya-kyu kya?..sirf ek raat hui hai tujhe virat ko sope aur dekho kaise uska asar tumpe dikh raha hai..i m so happy..tumhari pahele vali smile maheshus kar rahi hu..she get emotional..
Hearing all this maanvi realize her big nd permanet truth of her life..she starst looking here nd there..she found new place around her..hotel room which was fully decorated for first night of newly married couple..then her eyes fall on big mirror..dressing table just in front of her..she remove messy hairs from her forehead nd noticed red sindoor on her forehad..then manggalshutra which she wearing..she lost in last night thoughts when they married last night..how virat convey to all make simple marriege in maanvi's house nd with two family and close friend..ria nd aman..they become husband and wife..they married with hindu rituals as virat want to gve her all promisses..she get flash backes how virat filled her mang nd make her wear mangalsutara nd also how after long years she wear red colour..all family members her friends r too happy last night nd virat..his happiness was out of sky last night..she is nervous nd guilty both for married with him bcz she know very well that she is not in love with him..even not with anyone..her first marriage never gve her chance to feel that love nd marriad life..he still remember how virat's smile kept on his face for all time..he was to ecxited nd in hurry to marry her..she didnt know why bt small smile come on her lips remebring his antics during marriage..his jokes with both families nd all..
Her thoughts breaked out with mr.bhatiya's loud voice..
Mr.bhatiya-maanvi..
M-haa..haa..ded..
Mr.b-waise virat kaha hai?
M-she starts looking here nd there for him-virat..she cannot find him in all around room..sorry hotel room..she come out from bed nd check wasroom bt he was note there..
M-ded woh room main nahi hai..
Mr.b-shayad Mr.vadhera ke saath hoga..aaj tum logo ko mumbai ke liye nikalna jo hai..
Mrs.b-achcha ab thik hai..tum bhi jaa kar unse mil lo..hum to aa hi rahe hai tumhe airport pe milne tab baate kar lenga..okay..
M-ji mom..bye..
Both-take care beta..
Nd they hang up the call..maanvi come near to dreesing table nd put her phone on table nd went for freash nd up..
In few minutes she come out from wasroom in orange anarkali dress..she sit in front of dressing table nd ear her mangalsutra nd simple diamond earings as she raised her head she again saw her married look..she find herself diffrent..she took sindoor box nd take pinch of sindoor nd placed in her partision..she smile at mirror..its not like that she want to be this..or she is too happpy with this marriage..she love virat bt she smile bcz after last night convo with virat she can try to take one chance to their relation..
Nd again she lost in he thoughts..
Last night-
virat entred in hotel room which was booked for them..their first night suits..he walked inside nd close the door behind him..he saw maanvi sitting on bed in her night dress..as he already guess she must be change her wedding dress nd ready with so many questions..he walked towards her..
She notice him walking towards her..she abt to stood up bt he stop her by sawing her his palm nd sign her to again sit on bed..she gulped nd sit on bed..
He smiled nd sit next to her with distance..he was still in his shervani..he looking down with smile..maanvi looking at him with confuse mind..
M-broke the silent-tum smile kyu kar rahe ho?
V-still looking down..smile-kuch nahi..tum ready ho?
M-gulped with his question..scared..shocked nd surprise too..
V-looked at her-no no no..ek min..means..tumne ab tak mere liye jo question paper ready kiya hoga woh puchne ke liye ready ho..he said in one breath..
M-take realife breath-look here nd there..
V-turned towards her-go on i m ready..
M-looked at him-mere pas koi question nahi hai..
V-kya?
M-hummm..bas kuch kahena tha..
V-smile-main sun raha hu..
He said with assuring smile nd make her comfort..
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MAanvi amile at him..
M-without any akwardness nd shyness..be friedly-main jantu hu ki tumse ye sab kahena ki...tumne shadi kyu ki?..apni life kyu barbaad ki?..main tumhare layak nahi hu..tumheri daya ki mujhe jarurat nahi thi..badale me mujhse kuch ecxpect mat karna nd all that filmy lines...kyuki main janti hu tum usse bade drame baaz ho..aur tumhe usse bhi badi badi filmy line ati hai..jisse tumne mom-ded ko convey kiya..
Virat laughed little..
V-proudly-yeah..right..
M-continue..-aur ye bhi janti hu ki tum mujhse pyar karte ho..shayad isiliye mujhe asa kabhi nahi laga ki tum sirf mujhpe daya dikha rahe ho..
Now virat looking at her with full of respect nd love..of course with smile..
M-main ye bhi nahi kahungi ki main bhi tumse pyar karne lagi yaa main kabhi is relation ko accept nahi karungi..tumhare yakin par yakin rakh kar main humare relation ko ek chance dena chahti hu..pata nahi ye work karega ya nahi..lekin koshish karungi..bas mujhe waqt chahiye..
She said honestly..
V-smile nd took her hand in his-tum humare relation ko..mere pyaar ko ek moka dena chahti ho mere liye yahi kafi hai..baki ise fulfil karna mera kaam hai..dont worry..bcz i m virat vadhera..nd winked..
She smile..
V-aur waise bhi..tumhe waqt ki bahot jarurat hai..aur tumhe pura milega..he said drametically nd stood up from bed nd stood in front of her..
M-looked at him with confusion..
V-confuse kyu ho rahi ho?..tumhe sirf mere pyar se hi nahi balti bahot si chizo se deal karni hai..like mere antics se..mari crazy family se..mere music career se..mere drame se..etc etc etc...aur sab se badi baat..mari girl fan following se...u see..i m hard core cute nd hansome..he said proudly with sull of drama..
Maanvi laughed at his drama...
Virat smile at looking at her..
Maanvi stop smile nd looked at him..
V-come near her nd go on his knees in front of her nd took her hand in her..she feel nervous bt didnt felt uncomfortness with him..
V-mera adha kaam to ho gaya..
M-confuse..
V-humare realtion ki suru me hi maine tumhary do boundries toddi..
M-still confuse..
V-smile-first..hume mile kitne months ho gaya lekin is pure time me tumne itni baat nahi jitni aaj ki hai..woh bhi ek shot me..ns 2nd..aaj tum meri baat pe itni khul ke hasi ho..so mera din to ban gaya..smile widly..
M-smile..
V-aur baki bhi tum kar hi logi..lekin meri kuch demand hai..
M-kya?
V-hummm..1-mere pyar ke alava meri kisi baat ko dil se mat lagana..2-hum friend the aur humesha rahenge..3-meri family member mujhse bhi bade fimly hai so plz co-operate kyuki ab main change to nahi kar sakta naa..nd final..i love u..for ever..
She smiled at him continuesly..
V-stood up-chalo ab tum rest kar lo thik hai..kal se tumhe the vadhera's world me enter hona hai..
Nd he walked towards wasroom..she just smile at him..
In few minutes he come out from wasroom after change nd saw her half lying on bed one side waiting for him..
V-come near to bed-tum soi nahi?..kuch chahiye tha?
M-nahi woh tumhara wait kar rahi thi..
V-oh..lekin iski jarurat nahi thi..chalo ab soa jao..
He saw her looking here nd there..he understand..
V-relax..mujhe nind me kushti ki adat nahi hai aur nahi kicking ki..bas ek problem hai ki main couch pe nahi soa sakta..aur tumhe couch pe main sone nahi dunga..so..ek kaam karte hai..tum yahi soa jao main reception se dsre room k bare me puch lunga..so dont worry..
Nd he abt to walk towards door bt she stop him..
M-ruko..tumhe bahar jane ki jarurat nahi hai..
V-smile at her-dont worry..meri family main koi tumhare bare me kuch galat nahi sochega..
M-nahi woh baat nahi hai..mujhe problem nahi hogi tumhare saath bed share arne me..aur waise bhi abhi itni raat ko agar tum reception pe jaoge to woh sochenge shadi ki first night ko hi the rockstar virat vadhera ko uki wife ne room se nikal diya..she smile..
He laugh at this..
V-woh to hai..lekin..
M-virat...plz..waise bhi bed kafi bada hai..
V-pakka?
M-she nodded in yes..
V-walked near the bed-lekin yaha filmo ke jaise pillow wall banane ke liye pillows bhi nahi hai..sirf 2 hai..
M-its oka..i trust u..smile
v-smile at her..
M-ab soa jaye..
V-haa..chalo..
Nd both lay don on both side of bed with distance..
M-good night virat..
V-good night maanvi..nd i love u..he smirk..
She smile nd shook her head..
With this both fall in sleep..
Flash back end..
Maanvi's flash back broke by knock on door..
She opened door after adjust herself..
As she open door found her mother in low in front of her stood with sweet smile..nd her daughter with her..
Maanvi bent down take her blessings..as she stood up virats sister hug her tightly..
Kripa-good morning bhabhi..shook her..
M-smile at her-good morning kripa..
Supriya-her mother in low-kripa chhodo beta..woh saas kaise legi..
Kripa broke the hug..
K-ups sorry bhabhi..
M-its okay..main thik hu..aap log aaiye na ander..
And they all walk inside the room..
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Hey Khushi
awesome update dear
and you don't want to continue
its an amazing story so u should cont it further
update soon 😉 😃

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