Virmaan : pain and smile : PART-23 last part - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
viraj is so irritating
poor virat
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART - 11
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THEY SET IN HAL... ALL ARE HAPPY EXPECT VIRAT...AND MAANVI...
NIGHT...
MAANVI ROAMING ON TERRACE ... VIRAT CAME ON TERRACE ...
V- tum soi nahi ?
Maanvi looked at him...
M- nahi woh bas ase hi... Mujhe kuch kam yaad aa gaya... Mein chalti hu...
Maanvi walked towards door... She paased by virat...
V- tum khush nahi ho... Aur nahi wo achcha inshaan hai...
Maanvi stopped and turned... Looked at him... Virat came close to her...
V- kyu kar rahi ho?
M- kya?
V- apni life Barbad...
M- asa kuch nahi hai... Tum sirf apne kam pe dhyan do... Kal consert hai...
Maanvi leave the plase...
V- maanvi mein tumhe apni life barbad nahi karne dunga...
Next day every one work for concert...
Viraj also present there ... He try to came close to maanvi... Maanvi feel uncomfortable ... Virat noticed it... Virat tell ria to take maanvi away from him...
R- hello viraj ji...
Vj- hello..
R- woh actually Hume ladies room me maanvi ki jarurat hai..
Maanvi looked at her...
Vj- yeh sure...
Maanvi go with ria in room...
M- kya baat hai ria...
R- kuch nahi...
M- to phir tum mujhe yaha..?
R- woh virat ne viraj k sath dekha aur tumhari uncomforblity.. Usne mujhe tumhe...
Maanvi through pen on flore...
M- usne kaha aur tune kiya... Samajta kyu nahi hai wo...
R- maanvi woh teri fikar karta hai..
M- mein janti hu ki wo fikar hai ya p...
R- maanvi tum janti ho phir bhi...
M- ria concert ka time ho gaya hai chalo...
Maanvi leave the room...
R- maanvi...
Ria went to virats room... But virat entered on stage...
In whole concert viraj stood closely to maanvi...virat saw it...viraj also notice between virat and maanvis expressions...
After concert...
They reached home... In hall
vj- maanvi chalo dinner k liye bahar chalte hai... Ya movie...
M- nahi actually mein bahot tired feel kar rahi hu.. Aur wese bhi kal engagement hai...
All are go in their Owen Rooms...
Next day...
Maanvi engaged with viraj in presence of only family member ... Virat was not there...
In evening...
Ria entered in virats room
R- virat tum ne kuch kiya kyu nahi... Tum waha aaye tak nahi..
V- mein aake kya krta...
R- virat maanvi janti hai tum usse pyar karte ho..
Virat turned with shock...
V- kya?
R- haa... Aur shayad ye tumhe khud se dur karne k liye kar rahi hai... Maanvi sirf engagement kar rahi hai... Usne tumhare agale concerts se khud ko hata diya hai... Wo tumhe khud se door kar rahi hai...
V- pr kyu? Mein usse pyar karta hu.. Meine kabhi usse badle mein pyar ki ummid nahi ki...
In evening ...
Virat came in maanvis room...but she was not in room he asked abt her to Mrs bhatiya she told him that she was went with viraj for movie...
In theater...
Maanvi did not concentrat on movie... Suddenly she feel virajs hand moved towards her shoulder... His face come close to her neck...
Maanvi pulled him away...
M- viraj ye kar rahe hai aap...
V- maanvi humari shadi hone vali hai... Tum ase kyu behave kar rahi ho..
M- viraj plz mujhe ye pasand nahi...
Maanvi leave the plase and take taxi and reached home... Viraj follow her...
Maanvi walked toward home viraj pulled her close...
M- viraj kya kar rahe hai aap?
Maanvi try to free her self... Viraj tide his grip..
Vj- maanvi child ki tarah behave kyu kar rahi ho... Mera hak hai tumpe...
Maanvi pulled him force fully.. And slaped him...
Viraj become angry and again pulled her and grebbed her in tree and try to kissed her...
Suddenly virat looked it through window..
Virat runs towards them and pulled viraj away and start punched him...
Maanvi fall down and start crying...
All are came out from the house...
Aman stopped virat...
Mr bhatiya - ye kya ho raha hai...?
V- ye apne bete se puchiye.. Jo maanvi k sath jabarjasti karne ki koshis kar raha tha..
Vj- nahi bed he was wrong ...
Mr and Mrs bhatiya looked at maanvi...
Mrs bhatiya came close to viraj and slapped him... She told viraj to leave... Viraj leave...
Virat take maanvi in room...
After few hours...
In hall
v- uncle , aunty mein aapse kuch kahena chahta hu... Mein maanvi se shadi karna chahta hu...
They agree...
Next day...
Mr and Mrs bhatiya convey maanvi for marriage ... By imotional blacmailing ...
In evening virats parents came in Delhi ...
They decided to marriage date...
Virat met maanvi to his family... All are happy to see maanvi as virats wife...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Cool..waiting for nxt prt..virman wedding yayyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice onee...i love alll ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
hey plz plz cont. it its superb plz update soon..
n pm me pls..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
MAN DID U CONTINUED IT?????????? this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Yeah...
I will...try...
May be tonight as i get time...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Yeah...
I will...try...
May be tonight as i get time...
Or
may be other day..
If u all like that part then i will continue...
Bcz of my other stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
we are waiting khushi 😳 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jannat89

<font color="#990000"><font size="3">we are waiting khushi😳😃</font></font>


yeah...
Let me read first last few parts...

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