ViRmAn FF:FAR AWAY FROM YOU (part 7-pg 14shortupd)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok i know i am mad to start a ff again but what to do eventhough i am not good at it i keep trying...i am writing this as a virmanan...here goes-😃
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it was four months after virman's marriage.they were leading a happy life eventhough they had their usual nokh-jhoks daily which the whole family enjoyed.they adored maanvi .after she became a cancer survivor swamini bua also had no problem because she only had problem with cancer and not a cancer survivor..

until the dark clouds emerged in their relationship...😔

manvi walked out of her room in search of virat.'he usually comes back at this time ...then what happend today' she thought.she walked towards her jeevika di's room.she thought 'at least till virat comes back from his concert i can time pass in here'

she wanted to give the most happiest news to virat and he was late today .she thought of calling him and saying but she thought 'no ,i want to see virat's expression while saying the news.'

she moved towards jeevika di's room but she stopped hearing virat's voice.

viren:ham maanvi se kab thak chupayenge ke jeevika he donnor hai uske?

virat: bhai,mujhe bhi lagta hai ke ham maanvi ko pata dena chahiye.

jeevika: par maanvi us news ko sehem payege?

maanvi broke down by now.is she hearing the truth or is she imagining simply 'she thought

she entered the room with an abrupt noise by her slippers which made everyone to notice her.

maanvi: tum logon ne mujhe jhoot bola

virat came out of his shock and said"nahi maanvi,we just wanted you to be allright"

maanvi:allright virat ?al right ha? u saved me after killing a small bay who dint yet see the colours of the world.

maanvi turned towards her sister and said"di ,aapne bhi mujhse jhot bola...kyu di..kyu?(raising her voice).

maanvi :ab mein is ghar mein nahe reh sakthe.😭

virat: mazak mat karo maanvi..😕

maanvi: mein mazak nahe kar rahe ho virat..aur maine kab kaha ke mein tumhe bhi saath leke chal rahe ho.tune mujhe doka diya hai virat ...doka..tune mujhe jhot bola virat ..jhot bola.

virat: maanvi ye mazak karne ka vakth nahe hai...tumhare liye he maine tumse jhot bola maanvi.

maanvi: bas virat...i swear on the child growing on my stomach i am moving out of here..your wotld...di's world...enough virat.

virat was shocked to hear the news that maanvi was pregnant but he did'nt know at this situation he was supposed to face her happily or not

maanvi turned away and walked towards the main door.she did'nt know where to go..but she knew that she could make a destiny for herself and her child.

it was the ;last time virat saw maanvi .he did'nt know whether he will be able to see her again.

AFTER 9 YEARS:

(IN THE NEXT PART)

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SORRY FOR THE BAD HINDI ...BUT WOULD LOVE CHAPPALS,TOMATOES ANYTHING.BUT PLZ DO COMMENT .IT MEANS A LOT TO ME.PLZZZ

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Jannat94 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start

but too emotional & sad

update soon 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update
cont soon pls pm me when u cont ...pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
Continue soon and do pm me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...its different. plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awesome!!
Plz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely and bit sad ff. i really like it

waiting 4 next part plz pm me next time whenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start but very emotional, hope virman re-unite soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...
really emotional...
wish manvi realises y virika n virat did so...
plzz cont soon n do pm me wen ya update...
thnx in advance!!!😊

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