ViRmAn FF:FAR AWAY FROM YOU (part 7-pg 14shortupd) - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
awesome update, I'm curious to know y manvi left da house
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Can't wait for their reaction!!..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

awesome update 👏

but wat u did is not fair ...short update (just joking)😃

so update soon ...cant wait for the next part.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Awesome update dear
So it was all virat planned
It was so nice to convinced her and make her realise her love
Thanx 4 d pm
Update Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
hey its vry nice yar⭐️😊waiting for ur next update🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
maanvi's pov:

i did not know what to do.i stayed still.i really did'nt know to smile or cry.i was seeing a person whom i longed to see...my di...when i was standing in the airport abandoned,i wanted to see her and get her comforting shoulder for a hug.when aaditya was born i wanted to hug her and say"i have a child di,i am not alone".the day i craved for 9 years is in front of me.

di was also shocked to see me suddenly.she would have never expected me to stand in front of her suddenly.i went near her...she still stood still.even i could not believe that she was standing in front of me

.i could notice the others staring at me with tears flowing.no one changed .everyone was the same old cute family whom i adored .

i went nearer to di.she still stood still.i understood how much di was missing me...viren jiju had to hold her shoulders to make her stand still..even though he himself was in a shock.

i saw aaditya staring at me and i noticed his eyes asking many questios like'who are they ?' and stuffs.i have always waited for the right time to say him that he has his own family who would live him if ever they see him.

di also came nearer to me.i expected her to hug me.but she did something which i never expected ...she slapped me.aaditya came running after that hard slap.he went near jeevika and asked her"how dare you beat my mom?".i pulled him back .di understood that it was my child .she shouted" WHERE DID U GO FOR THESE MANY YEARS.IF U RAN AWAY DO YOU THINk I WOULD BE HAPPY.I WAS DIEING EACH AND EVERYDAY IN A WORRY HOW YOU WOULD BE?WHERE YOU WOULD BE?YOU CANT EVEN SAY YOUR DI.DON'T I HAVE A RIGHT TO SAve YOUR LIFE."she said shaking my shoulders.

i wanted to blurt out all the truth but i did not have that much strength by now.

everyone came near to me and scoulded me for my foolishness and beat me playfully.i could not blurt out the truth still.aaditya was still staring at me as everyone were kissing and smiling and saying'hamara khandan ka pehla beta".

i wanted to give all the love this family could give tim and how much love his father would have given to him.but all i could give is mother's love how much ever i tried.

aaditya called me to the side and asked me "who are they?"

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sorry for the very very short update.my exams just got over.but anyway there is a pre cap.

pre-cap:aaditya is shouting at his mother saying why she kept him away from his whole family and that she was selfish.maanvi shouted out the truth.and aaditya was left with tears dropping in his eyes

do leave your lovely comments.
and ya any idea how the story should proceed...if u do have any idea do inbox me.😆.dont frget!

Edited by virmanfanprema - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awsum update...
family reunion time...
precap z really interesting...wot z it dat manvi z hiding????
plzz cont soon...xpecting a loonger update
hope ur xamz went well.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awww she slapped manu... No
But mind blowing family reunion
Thanx 4 d pm
Update Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Nice update... Feeling bad for Aditya...
Do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
WOW!!!
Amazing update!!
Loved it, continue soon!!
Can't wait 4 the next part!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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