ViRmAn FF:FAR AWAY FROM YOU (part 7-pg 14shortupd) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Nice chapter with an amazing concept yaar loved it ⭐️
So when you gonna update...? 😉
Update soon don't you dare forget to pm me 🤣
On the serious note pls do pm me 😛
Much love Hun 😳
Inayah khan
IlovethisFF 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
nice start
plz pm me when u update next parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Aww that was sad though interesting!!..
Manvi left!!..I didn't expect that..
Please PM me if its not any trouble...
Thanks!..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Nice start!

Do continue, really liking the concept.

-Luv Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
thanks for loving my first part.the comments meant a lot to me.so here goes😉...this part belongs to maanvi ...so don't kill me for not uniting them
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AFTER 9 YEARS:
"aadu,don't fly away your shoes and bags as you come home,i am the one who has to arrange it"said maanvi to her loving son.

"mom,plz dont call me aadu ,see you have kept such a nice name for me 'aaditya'.what will my friends think mom?"

maanvi:ab tumhe bahut fikar hai na tumhari friends ke bare mein?yesterday only you had such a big fight with them and you came crying to me saying'mama,your the only friend of mine' and today if i patch up you with them then you'll forget me.(holding aadu's ears)

aaditya: mom,chill out..take a chill pill mom..vaise bhi you love me in either way .after all your my lovely ..caring mom(trying to melt his mom)

maanvi: ab zyada masca mat laga ha.go do your home work.then only i will leave you to go out and play.

aaditya:ok ok i am going mom.there goes the typical mom.(whispersto himself)

maanvi:you said something.?

aaditya:mom,you have started day dreaming a lot .don't say me your in love with someone.

maanvi got goosebumps by the name of love.how could she fall in love again ?she loved virat truely...she gave up her heart to virat.if she is living now it is only for aaditya.she still loved virat but the pain she had gone through was a lot to bare.she tried to relieve herself after coming to london .but she could not .so she dumped herself in taking care of aaditya and work.

her thoughts were disturbed by a call.
she took the call seeing the phone for knowing who called her.it was her boss again!!!

boss:maanvi,to the office fast .i have a important news for you.

maanvi: but sir,aadu has just come.i cant come so soon.

boss:no maanvi,this is important.i promise it wont be long.

maanvi:ok sir,i will be there in an another 10 minutes.see u soon.

(she cut the call)

while driving she thought what was her boss upto again.

she entered the cabin of her boss.she was worried if she did anything wrong.

boss:sit down in here (signalling the opposite seat of his)
maanvi sat down still confused of the topic he wanted to discuss with her😕 .

boss: maanvi i have got sum news for you.

maanvi;go on sir.

boss:seeing your amazing work we were asked by a company to appoint you as a PA to a award winning singer in INDIa,

maanvi: but you very well know that i have no idea to go back to india sir.and changing aadi's school and many other stuffs .its hard sir.and you very well know that.

boss;maanvi,you have to do this and you know this is very important.

maanvi:but sir

boss: take this deal or leave this job.

maanvi thought "oh no,what kind of situation am i in" she though for a few minutes she had no other option.

maanvi: i am in the deal.

boss: and the singer is.

maanvi;sir,whoever the singer i.i dont care.just say them to arrange everything in india.

maanvi came out of te cabin she thought to herself'what am i into now.?am i really going to india?oh no!i promised myself i will never be back in there again.and here i am going back to india with aaditya.

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now u know what i am planning for guyz...wish u liked this useless part😆.

plz do comment it means a lot to me.


Edited by virmanfanprema - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
nice update...
so manvi z gonna b viratz pa rite...really interesting
but u wrote rahul instead of aditya towards the end...do chk n correct if m not wrong
cont sooon...xpecting a loonger update n thnx a loot for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: alicemath

nice update...

so manvi z gonna b viratz pa rite...really interesting
but u wrote rahul instead of aditya towards the end...do chk n correct if m not wrong
cont sooon...xpecting a loonger update n thnx a loot for the pm 😊


eeks!thanx i will edit it out
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Felt like a short update to me but it was lovely!...
A part with just Manvi & Aaditya's bond...I enjoyed it!..
Soo Manvi's going back to India,can't wait to see wats in store for her..she's definitely going to meet Virat!..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely update, can't wait for virman to meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Nice update. Manvi is virat's P.A.. Wow it will be really amazing. Continue soon and thnx for the pm.

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