Virman OS: Our first rain (Part 3: Page 7) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start dear!!!
plzz cont soon n dont forget to pm me wen ya update!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Awesome OS my Shruti!!
Keep up the gd work:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Wonderful start, Sruthz! After 6 months of their marriage Haye! Loved how Maanvi was the typical 'Maanvi' sleeping half the day and Virat, drooling over her! Continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
cute start..
update soon, thanks for the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Thanks a lot for your wonderful feedback guys!
Love all of you! 🤗

And the surprise is,
That I've updated the next part!

Enjoy to the fullest, because it's longgg! 😉

And don't forget to give your feedback! 😃

PS: There is a flashback of the suhagraat. But before you get too excited, there is nothing which you actually think will be there. 😆

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Part 2

"For the last time Manvi!"

And he threw his pillow on her and collapsed on to the bed, with exhaustion. Man, this girl could drain his energy completely.

Manvi sat their giggling at her husband, who was so tired, all because of her.

"Bade bade logon ke saath panga nahi leni chahiye, patidev ji"

He pulled her, and she fell straight on him.

"Virat! Ye kya kar rahe ho! Chodo mujhe"

He pulled her closer and wrapped his arms around her. She put her hands on his muscular chest.
Manvi had no chance of moving.

"Panga liya, aur galthi bhi ho gayi.
Galthi ke liye, compensation dena padtha hai na?"

He moved towards her lips.
She have him a hard hit on his nose.

"Kya yaar Manvi! Shaadi ho gayi hamaari. Ab bhi?"

"Aashiq ji. Ab der ho gayi hai.
Aath baj rahe hai, aur Maine breakfast tayyar hi nahi kiya, tumhaare chakkar mein."

She pushed his hands apart, got up, and headed to the bathroom.

Before she entered, he wrapped his hands around her tiny waist.

"Aaj mujhe kuch kaam nahi hai Jaanu. Chalo na, kahi baahar chalte hai"

"Lekin kaha?"

"Hmm... Voh main sochlunga, par tum aaogi?"

She turned around and out her hands around Virat's neck.

"Agar mere patidev ji, itne pyaar se mujhe bula rahe hai, toh main mana kaise kar sakti hoon?
Aaungi main, pakka promise. Hmm?"

He hugged her warmly.

"I love you Manvi."

"Love you tooo."

She broke from the hug,gave him a tiny kiss on his cheek and went for a shower.

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Virat sat down on the sofa and picked up the newspaper.

Meanwhile, he was also thinking where he should take his "Sherni".
And impressing her, was not an easy thing at all.

He checked the weather forecast, which read:

"Gloomy afternoon and evening. Heavy thunder showers are expected."

That's it.
An idea struck his mind. He remembered a place called "monsoon hill", on the outskirts of the city.
It was a lovely place for young couples.
There would be heavy rainfall, and lovers would enjoy to the fullest there.
It was a perfect spot for some romance.

He exactly knew what to do.

Even Manvi had that wish, to dance and dance in the rain, till she dropped with exhaustion.

*Flashback*
On the first night of their marriage,
Manvi went on and on the whole night, about what Virat should do for her.
Virat lied down, and drowsily looked at her, trying to register something in his mind.

"Virat! Suno na!"

"Sun raha hoon baba"

He gave a big yawn.

"I'm sorry partner, maine tumhe sone hi nahi diya."

He sat up, and gave Manvi a hug. She rested her head on his shoulder, and he rested his head on hers.

"Manvi, Yaad hai, jab hum partners the, tab hi maine tumse keh diya ki main tumhaari har wish pura karunga?
Aaj toh main tumhaara life partner ban gaya hoon. Ab toh main tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyaan dena chahta hoon.
Tum kuch maango, aur main nahi doon? Aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta hai"

"I love you Virat."

A tear rolled down her eye
Virat hugged her tighter.

"Batao. Kya chahiye meri princess ko?"

"Pata hai Virat, meri wish list mein, ek cheez hai, jo humesha top position lethi hai.
Baarish mein naachna.
Bachpan se chahti thi, ki main ek din, baarish mein itna naachu, ki mein thak kar girjau."

"Bas? Itthi si baat?
Yeh toh bahot aasan hai. Main ghar mein bhi yeh kar sakta hoon. Shower bhi baarish ki tarah hai na!"

He gave a naughty giggle and winked at her.
Manvi gave him a nice whack on the chest.

"Tum bhi na!"

*Flashback ends*

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He threw the paper aside and went to his room. He found Manvi sitting there and reading a magazine.

"Manvi!"

"Haan ji!"

"Ab bad mein karo ye draamebaazi. Tum tayyar ho jao"

"Lekin kyu? Kaha jaa rahe hai?"

He came close to her and whispered in her ear

"It's a surprise"

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
awww perfeeekkkttt...its sooo "virmanish"...virat,,,,,,...maanvi......and your os......awesome...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Lovely update! Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Awww it was so cute.. N da flashback was sho shweet shower bhi barish jaisa hi hai 🤣 n Manvi going on n on evn on her 1st nyt 😆 w8ing for da nxt part n Manvi's reaction to da surprise😊 thanx for da pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Cute part...virman r so adorable. Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awww...this is so cute 😳

I loved this part

<"Manvi!"

"Haan ji!">


So damna adorable!

Update soon. Tonight itself, if possible!

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