Virman OS: Our first rain (Part 3: Page 7)

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Hello, my fellow Virmanians!
I'm back with a new Virman OS!
It's a 3-parter again.
I may be a little late in updating, due to exams.

Anyway,
ENJOY!


He stretched his bulky hands and rubbed his eyes. The sun's rays fell brightly into the room and the day looked just magnificent.
Virat sat up straight and looked next to him.
There she lied, his love, his life, his wife.

The most beautiful girl he would have ever seen, Manvi. He placed his hand on that thin strand of hair which was on her face, and gently moved it aside.

How angelic she looked when she was asleep. He stared at her, with amazement.

"Manvi, tum pure din sothe raho, aur main pura din, bas tumhe hi dekhta rahunga."

Manvi sat upright all of a sudden.

"Agar aisa hoga, toh log samjhenge ki maine ek pagal ladke se shaadi ki hai!"

Virat was shocked.
How could he be shocked? After all, he married Manvi, the queen of pranksters. She could do anything.

"Teri toh!!"

And he whacked a pillow right on her face.

"Virat Singh Vadhera! Ab main bhi Vadhera ban chuki hoon. Mujh mein taakat kam nahi hai, samjhe Patidevji?"

And there they continued fighting with their pillows, just like they were before. Virat and Manvi hadn't changed a bit.

It was 6 months since they got married.
Manvi was now a "Sherni", just like before.
Their wedding was a grand affair, and a very memorable one.
Virat's singing career had just took to a new height. Life was happening for the two.

Happiness surrounded them. They were in complete bliss, together.


Hope you liked it!
Do give your feedback!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woot! Woot! Your BFF is the first to comment 😃
The OS was amazing beb <3 I couldn't help but read it!
Aahhh married for 6 months now and the same old, cute and typical VirMan version of behaviour 😳
What I love about these two is that no matter what, you can't change their bubbly characters, whether it is in an OS, SS or FF! Virat and Maanvi are just Virat and Maanvi. You can't even try to change their personalities and that was so well exemplified in this! Continue soon babe because that was short and I want a long update! 😃

...and the last line was amazing. I would like to re-emphasize the last word! 😉

They were in complete bliss, together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeti_Shadia

Woot! Woot! Your BFF is the first to comment😃


You're always right there. 🤗

But you didn't write how it was. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sruthi_Virmanli


You're always right there. 🤗

But you didn't write how it was. 🤣


I have now 😆 I had to post fast to make sure I was first to comment. Didn't even bother writing reserved on it 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Preeti: Before I start spamming my own thread, all I want to say is I LOVE YOU! 🤗
I'll update soon, and it'll be long! 😆
This was just a "starter" 😆

Ok now. Both of us will stop chatting here. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww lovely start to the OS shruti..👏

love them.. their masti and jovial mood is what sets them apart.. what ever might be the situation .. they never let go off this nok-jhok and masti ,..😳

will wait for the next updtae😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sruthi_Virmanli

@Preeti: Before I start spamming my own thread, all I want to say is I LOVE YOU! 🤗
I'll update soon, and it'll be long! 😆
This was just a "starter" 😆

Ok now. Both of us will stop chatting here. 😆


Before we stop spamming your thread-😆- I just want to say that I LOVE YOU TOO 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww lovely start sruthi..i always love to read your work..and this is so amazing..plz update the next part soon..:-):-D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was awesome Sruthi..!⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww.this is the VirMan Land of Bliss that I dream about everyday

I loved this line 'his love, his life, his wife.' So cute, it rhymes 😳

Jaldi update kar Shruthi!

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