Virman OS: Our first rain (Part 3: Page 7)

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

aussum part

but y stop plz atleast one more part

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

u are such a fabulous writer please continue soon waiting to read ur next update😊😆

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Delena

@Delena-cious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

i have to say...this is one of the most beautiful chapter i have ever read...it was like that i was seeing them...for real...i mean...u knw wat i mean...😆

such a dreamy update yaar...arree...want something like this sooo much

thankk u sooo much for the beautiful update...is this the last part? arre nooo...dn make it last...include one more na...m feeling selfish now...😳

brilliant brilliant brilliant update🤗

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow... Loved it. U should add 1 more part yaar... 😛

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Awww it was so cute... U noe i imagined da whole thing Manvi in red saree n virat in black Uff it reminded me of srk-kajol ka kuch kuch hota hai Wala rain dance... Thanx for da pm sweetheart!!

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

beautiful piece of work...

luvd the last scene...mannu in red saree n virat in black...n dat too in rain...wot a cute, hawt n perfect couple yaar...☺️

plzz do cum up wid more such works...

thnx a loot for the pm!!!😊

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Sruthi

@dauntless.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Thanks everyone! 🤗
I'm thrilled by this response! 😳

I think adding another part might make the story a teeny-weeny bit messy, so I'll rather write another OS soon! 😃

The red-black combination of dress was definitely "inspired" by my all time favourite, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai.

Thanks again!
Love you all! 😃