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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeti_Shadia

I know this is really loose ended and quite upsetting but the OS only has the one part. I felt I just had to leave it as a sad ending to portray what I am trying to prove in the story. Jeevika and Maanvi are each other's life and without one, the other is totally incomplete.


I know sweety pie u ended it on a sad note but it said all that u meant 👍🏼
it's so beautiful & touchy I can't even explain 😳 it's beyond words 👏
it had all the essence of our JeeMan & ur beautiful writing made it just way too beautiful 😊
loved it to the core 😊⭐️




do write more 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that was really emotional!!!
It just amazing!!
Loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You already know I think you are a gifted writer but that was something else!!!!
That letter, got emotions flying out of me that I didn't know existed!!!
Preeti has done it once again
👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Beautiful ❤️
And sad :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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spell bounded by urs amazing writing
seriously lovely os
touched my heart
amazing preeti
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much to all the readers and to those who left behind feedback 🤗
I wasn't sure whether you would like it but I'm glad you all enjoyed it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tears r rolling...Amazing work Preeti👏 Thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please could you translate into english the bit in the flashback to flashback because I could not read the Hindi, I would love to know what had been written to understand the post?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Superb Preethi...👍🏼
thnx for d PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks so much for your feedback everyone! It's much valued 🤗

@screen22 I'll try my very best to translate it a bit later...really busy right now 😳 Hope you understand :)

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