virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx for liking my story guys... i havent updated this ss frm so many days... so this is a long update... read it and do share your precious views with... i will be waiting😊

PART TWO...
she remembered her first meeting with virat
manan had always told her about his best buddy, virat. it wasnt that she hadnt heard of this vry famous guy in college... famous especially with girls... but she.. manvi chaudhary hadnt even caught a glimpse of this virat...
but one day manan held her hand and took her to introduce her to his frnd virat, who was like a brother to him...
manvi was excited to meet him as she had heard a lot about this guy but today she herself wanted to check him out... she followed manan and saw a huge crowd gathered in the garden of the college... and someone was playing a guitar... the music so produced was so sweet and melodious that it touched her heart and her soul... she was awestruck hearing to that tune...
she really didnt know when she was standing in front of that guy and when they both were looking at each other like it was the only face they wanted to see in whole their life... for that moment it felt as if the whole world around them has stopped revolving and it has come to a standstill...
manan : hey bro this is manvi, my classmate and manvi this is virat, my bro, my best friend...!!!
we both exchanged smiles and virat stretched his hand out for a friendly handshake... the moment their hands met... it was a magical moment... his first touch sent shiver down her spine... this was their first touch...!!!

manan : what happened guys...??? u both are quiet, i really cant believe it... i mean its the 8th wonder of the world... two most chirpy people are quiet in each other's company...
virat : ohh... shut up dude...
manvi : yeah... its not like that... its just...
manvi looked at virat
virat : its just dat...
manan : forget it guys... i m really happy u both like each other... now all three of us can hang out together...
virat : wait a second... did i say something like that... ??
manvi : neither did i...
virat :hey u dont interfere... i am talking to my childhood frnd...
manvi : ohh hello... i am also not talking to u.. i am toking to my new friend...
virat : my childhood frnd...
manvi : my new frnd...
virat :my childhood frnd...
manvi : my new frnd...
manan : stop it guys...!! why are both fighting like 5th standard students...??
manvi : u r ryt manan... lets leave, we have a lecture to attend... ye toh na... chep kahin ka...
virat : did u just called me dat...??? u bandriya...
manvi : yes i called u dat... and i am warning u, dnt ever call me dat again...
virat :shhh... calm down bandriya... and i will call u dat...??? so what can u do...???
manvi : i will... i will... dekh lungi tumhe...
virat : photo bhej dunga, dekhti rehna meri jaan...
manan literally dragged manvi and took her to the garden... asked her to be seated at the bench
manan : calm down manvi... i really couldnt believe sucha sweet girl like you had an arghument with virat and that too in your vry first meeting...
manvi : i didnt do anything manan... he was the one who started... and tell me honestly is he really your best buddy...?? he is not at all like you...
manan : omg... manvi he is a vry nyc guy... i mean wo dil ka bahut accha hai...
manvi : forget it...!!! i dnt want to talk about that chep... neither i dont want to meet him again ever...

manvi smiled and thought how unpredictable life is...
there was a time when she couldnt even stand him for a second and didnt want to see his face again... and now she couldnt live without him even for a second...

she placed that envelop back in the closet and went downstairs. she greeted everybody and touched their feet.
manvi : good morning maa...
vanshika : good morning beta... how are you feeling...???
manvi : maa i am absolutely fine... maa aapke per ka dard kaisa h...???
vanshika : woh to apne aap theek ho jaega beta... tum apna khayaal rakho and aane wale mehmaan ka...
manvi : jee maa...
vanhika : neta htum jao apne room mein aur rest karo...
manvi : aur ye aapko virat ne kaha hoga kehne ko... hai na maa..???
vanshika : haan... wo kya hai na mera beta tumhare liye deewana hai... he really loves you alot...
manvi : i know maa i am vry lucky to have him... maa viren bhaiya dikh ni rahe hai...???
vanshika : wo toh tumhare hi ghar gya hai... jeevika aur wo shopping pe jaa rahe hain aaj...
manvi : kash main bhi ja paati... par aapka wo sirphira beta mujhe jaane hi nahi dega...
vanshika : woh tum dono pati patni ke beech ki baat hai... aapne aap handle karo usse...
manvi :okk maa... ab toh apki bhi permission mil gayi hai... virat toh gya...
swamini : manvi stop chattering... go to your room and rest...
manvi : bua ji main bas...
swamini : no excuses manvi... its for the baby u see...
manvi goes into her room and was getting vry bored... so she called up virat.
manvi : partner...!!!
virat : bolo life partner...
manvi : virat when are you coming back...???
virat : manvi... are you okk..??? and the baby..??
manvi : ni
virat : kyaaa...???
manvi : virat chill... i meant i am getting bored yaar... come back asap yr...
virat : ohhh... tumne toh meri jaan nikaldi thi... par i am afraid...i will be late tonight manvi.. woh kya h na bhai bhi office mein nahi hai..
manvi : haan... wo di ke saath shopping gaye hain... see you in evening... bye..
virat : bye and take care...
virat says to himself " i know you are upset meri sherni... par kya karun...??? i cant run away frm my responsibilities any longer... n i have to manage office for bhai also... let him spend time with my saali sahiba... who is soon going to be my bhabhi... love you manvi "

manvi sat in her room whole day... sometimes watched tv, slept for sumtym... even called shlok to give her some company but all in vain... shlok rather told her about the rarest animals found on earth; all thanks to discovery channel... whenevr she went downstairs, one or the other sent her back to her room... she took out an old album and relived each moment all over again... whether it was their frndship, her love for virat, or simply her college life...
















seeing those pics she fall asleep...

it was 1 am, when virat returned home... he saw manvi sleeping holding an album and resting it against her chest... he tiptoed into the room feeling guilty of not giving her time... he went up to manvi, laid her down properly and covered her with the blanket... then he took the album from her hands carefully not wanting to disturb her, but manvi woke up and said " i love you virat..."
virat : i love you too... now go back to sleep my princess...
manvi : but i dnt want to...
virat : but u need rest ded futiya...
manvi : ohh hello... i dnt need rest... i need my chep.. dats it...
virat : haayee... gusse mein bhi romance... maar daala...
manvi : hehe... khud ke paas time nahi hai romance ka toh saari duniya ko sanyasi samajh baithe ho...
virat : kya...??? i really doesnt make any sense...
manvi : ainwai sense ni hai... sense hai dhyan se dekho mere dhakkan pati...
virat : aise hota hai romance...??? do mile door se..??
manvi (swayed her arms) : aaja mera shona...
when virat was about to hug her manvi interrupted
manvi : haaww... tumne kuch khaaya...??? chalo niche chal ke kuch kha lo...
virat : nahi... ab romance ke beech mein boring baate mat karo...
virat went forward and took her into his arms and starts trailing her neck with kisses... he then kissed her forehead, her eyes, her eyes and was about to reach to her lips... when manvi again was going to say something... he didnt give her time and crashed his lips into hers... after a passionate kiss, virat cupped her cheeks and said " i love you... i really do... manvi thank you for being there in my life... " manvi now hugged him and whispered in his ears " thank you for loving me... i am lucky to have you... waise bhi tumhe toh koi bhi mil jati..." virat replies while carressing her hair "par what to do...??? mujhe toh ek pagal ladki pasand aa gayi aur main usse khud se bhi zyada pyaar kar baitha... bahut roka tha khud ko... par uss sirphiri ne mujhe deewana kar diya tha... aur..." manvi curiously asked " aur kya...???" virat continued while holding her even more " aur mujhe samajh aa gya k uss ladki ka manufacturing fault sirf mujhe handle karne k liya hi hai..." as virat completed his sentence, manvi lightly bite his ear making him moan her name... this was enough to drive virat crazy, he pushed her into the matress and went over her... he started nuzzling and nibbling her in order to make her moan... but somehow he controlled himself as he realised that manvi was pregnant... manvi really enjoyed whenever he made love to her and now that he stopped, she took hold of his shirt and pulled him back towards herself...
virat : you know you are pregnant...???
manvi :so...???
virat : dnt u know..??? i cnt believe you are asking me this mandbuddhi...
manvi : oh my god... virat i am only two weeks pregnant and its okk...
virat : ohh please... go off to sleep mrs manvi vadera... its vry late..
virat gets up and goes to change... and by the time he returned manvi was sleeping...
he was moving to his side of the bed when that album caught his attention... he had a look at it and starts thinking of the time manvi came into his life and how she became his life, his heartbeats, his everything... and how he lost his best buddy...

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Crazyvirmanfan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Awww that was so sweet :)
But omg virat lost his best buddy? how really eager to know? was it because of manvi? pm me please when you update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wanna kno more abt their coleg lyf...
amazing..
thnx fr ua pm. pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Awee i have just read both of ur parts! They r so interesting n virman as usuakt so cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
aww woow loved the start pm me!!!!!!!
wanderlust09 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awsum story...
luvd their cute romantic convo😳
cont soon n plzzz do pm me wen ya update!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dat was such a sweet and cute update, can't wait to find out how virat lost his best buddy
Jannat94 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
OMG it was terrific update... Thanx to make it long dear...
Loved it, it was cute, sweet, romantic.., awwt he lost his best buddy, how... Waiting 4 ur next update dear...
Thanx 4 d pm n update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww just read both parts loved how you have put all the pictures in how did virat lose manan was it because of manvi continue soon and do pm me when you next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
woow, nice concept and wonderful update! 😊
continue soon..
and thanks for the pm!

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