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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

superb start please continue soon pm me when you do thanks

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Days pass by...it's been about a month and a half...
Jeevika:Virenji mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai...bohot bechaini ho rahi hai...
Viren:Jeevika hum aabhi Dr. ke paas chalte hain...Jeevika and Viren are at the clinic...
The Dr. checks Jeeevika...Viren is sitting tensed...the dr. comes out...
Viren:kya hua dr...Jeevika theek to hai na...
Dr:Ha Mrs.Vadheratoh theek hai but i am afraid...
Viren:kya...Dr...humara bachcha toh theek hai...
Dr.:am sorry Mr Viren...Jeevika ka miscarriage ho gaya...
Viren(in utter shock):kya hua...i mean kaise...woh toh kabhi...hum sab unka bohot khayal rakhte hai...
Dr:dekhiye...Mr.Viren...Jeevika ko abhi kuch nahi pata chal na chahiye...I mean isse uski sehat par bura asar par sakta hai...aap sahi waqt dekh kar unhe sab bataiyega...you have to be strong...
they return home...Viren tries to fake...
as they reach home...
Maanvi:Jiju...di aap theek ho na...kya kaha dr. ne...??
Viren:ha maanvi jeevika theek hai...
Maaanvi notices the tension that Viren is going through...she keeps quiet...
Maanvi;'di chalo...main aapko aapke kamre tak le chalti ho...aap aram karo...
She takes Jeevika to her room...the entire family is downstairs...
Maanvi:di ab aap yaha baitho...aram karo...main aapke liye juice laati hu...
Maanvi is going down...and goes to the kitchen
Viren hugs Vanshika and starts crying...
Viren:maa humare khushi...humari khushi bas kuch palo ka hi tha...
Virat:bhai yeh aap kya bol rahe ho...kya hua...sab theek toh hai na...
everybody is confused...
Viren:main nahi chahta yeh baat Maanvi ko pata chale...woh abhi abhi theek hui hai...usse bhi yeh sadma bardaasht nahi hoga...
Swamini:Viren beta baat kya hai...
Vanshika:ha Jeevika theek hai na...
Viren:Ma jeevika toh theek hai...par ...
Maanvi with the glass of juice in her hand...is standing at the staircase...nobody notices that...
Viren continues...humne apna bachcha kho diya...
All in shock...the glass of juice falls from Maanvi's hand she faints...
All turn around...
and on seeing Maanvi shout...
dr comes...
Dr:Shayad unhe kissi baat ka bohot bara sadma laga hai...please aap log iska khayal rakhna ki unhe kissi baat se zyada pareshaani na ho...
Virat:ji Dr..
Viren:ghabrane wali koi baat toh nahi hai na...
Dr:nahi...
Maanvi regains consciousness...
Maanvi:mujhe di se abhi milna hai..
Virat:ruko...Maanvi bhabhi ko abhi tum kuch nahi bataoge...sahi waqt aane par bhabhi ko bhai khud batayenge...
Maanvi:par muje abhi di se milna hai...
Viren:please Maanvi Jeevika se...
Maanvi:main di se kuch nahi kahungi...
Maanvi goes to Jeevika's room...
Jeevika:juice laane mein tune kitni waqt laga diya...tujhe teri choti si teacher ka koi parwah hi nahi hai...
Maanvi could not take it anymore and she rushes out of the room...
Night...Dining table...
Dadaji and Inder Chachu is unaware of the fact...
Maanvi:main di ko khana unke kamre mein de kar aati hoo...
Dadaji:kya hua bhai...tum sab itne chup kyun ho...???
Swamini:bauji...woh...woh Viren aur Jeevika..
Dadji:kya hua...unka bachcha toh theek hai na...
Swamini:unka ba..bacha ab nahi raha...
Dadaji in shock...he gains composure...
Dadaji:Viren beta...aapne aap ko sambhalo tumhe Jeevika bahu ko bhi toh sambhalna hai...yeh ek accident tha...main janta hu isse bhoolna mushkil hai...lekin...yeh socho ki shayad hum sab ke liye isse bhi badi khushi hai...
Jeevika was already standing at the staircase and she had already overheard the loss...
She is shocked...
she walks towards Viren...she is very calm...no drop of tear...
Jeevika:Viren ji...aapne bataya kyun nahi...\
Viren:Jeevika woh main...
Jeevika:Viren ji aapko kya laga...mujhe...main toot jaungi...???
Viren:Jeevika woh main...
Jeevika:yeh ek hadsa tha...aur yeh kissi ke saath bhi ho sakta hai...
Vadheras are kind of startled with Jeevika's abnormal behaviour...
Jeevika goes to her room...but Maanvi kind of feels uneasy with Jeevika behaving like this...

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Andrea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Maanvi understands everyone's feelings! Cho chweeet!!

PM me once you continue! :)

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Maanvi:main Di ke paas jati hu..
Maanvi goes to her room...and jeevika is sitting on the floor cluthching the report that said she was pregnant...and crying...
Maanvi:di...di...(she sits beside her)...
Jeevika:Mannu main kissi ko khushi nahi de paayi...main ne apne bachche ko paane se pehle hi kho diya...Mannu...main Viren ji ko ek chuti si khushi ka ehsaas bhi nahi karwa payi...
Viren and Virat...who were standing outside heard this...
Viren:nahi Jeevika...aisi koi baat nahi hai...yeh ek accident tha...
Virat:ha bhabhi yeh bass ek accident tha...aur agar is bar khushi humare ghar nahi aayi toh kya hua...kuch dinon mein humein khushi zaroor milegi...
Months pass by...Jeevika is not over her great loss yet...It has been 10 months since the accident ocurred...but she is kind of happy as her little sister was pregnant...but that happiness was short lived too...Maanvi had to lose her baby...because her child would have been suffering from blood cancer and in case she would give birth to this child...her cancer would have recurred (this is going a bit over the top😉😳...spare me for that please😛 )
Virat and Maanvi return from the doctor's clinic...
Jeevika runs to Maanvi
Jeevika:Mannu tu himmat mat harna...sab theek ho jayega...
the situation at the Vadhera house is still gloomy...
Both of them lost their first baby...However Jeevika is trying to get back to normal state but Maanvi is in total shock...
In Virat-Maanvi's room...
Jeevika:Maanvi le Dabbu se baat kar...woh tujhe bohot miss kar raha hai...
Jeevika gives the phone to Maanvi...
Maanvi holds the phone to her ears but...she dos not talk...
Dabbu:Maanvi didi aap kab Hrishikesh aaoge...mummy aur beeji toh aaj kal aapke favourite khana bhi nahi banate...main toh kuch...
Maanvi keeps the phone...
Virat and Viren are in the same room...
Viren:Dabbu hum baad mein baat karte hai...
Dabbu:ji jiju...Maanvi didi aur Jeevika didi ka khayal rakhna...
Viren:Virat Maanvi ka khayal rakhna...
Viren and Jeevika go to their room...
Viren goes to the washroom ...Jeevika takes out the test reports and start crying...
Viren:Jeevika Jeevika kya hua tumhe...
Jeevika:Viren ji...main bohot koshish kar rahi ho apne aap ko sambhalne liye...lekin main nahi...she breaks down crying...
scene shift...
Virat:meri bina break kii gadi aajkal toh jaise permanent break mein hi hai...kyun raaste mein koi traffic jam hai kya...tum toh hamesha highway par chalati ho apni gadi toh aajkal kya tum mumbai ki raaste par chalane lag gayi...
Maanvi is silent...Virat continues talking...after a long time...Maanvi breaks her silence...
Maanvi:main kya kabhi maa nahi ban paungi...??
Virat:nahi Maanvi aisi koi baat nahi...hai...
Maanvi:Viraat shayad tumhe mujhse kabhi shaadi karni hi nahi chahiye thi...main kabhi tumhe...
Virat:tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi ho maanvi...Dr ne aisa toh nahi kaha...ki tum kabhi maa nahi ban paogi...
Maanvi is crying Virat hugs her...
Vaanshika had witnessed what her sons are going through...

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shefali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

niceee...continue sonn...😊

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Andrea

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Nice posts!

PM me once you continue! :)

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Next day at the breakfast table...
Vanshika:mujhse maanvi aur Jeevika ka yeh haal dekhi nahi jaati...Jeevika koshish toh kar rahi hai...khud ko sambhalne ki...lekin kar nahi paa rahi hai...aur Maanvi usske liye toh zindahi jaise ruk gayi hai...
Swamini:aur Virat aur Viren bhi...woh log khud ko bohot strong dikhane ki koshish kar toh rahe hai...lekin andar se...dono hi toot chuke hai...
Inder:bauji mujhe lagta hai ki humein un logo ko bahar bhej dena chahiye...un logo ko change ki zaroorat hai...
Swamini:ha Inder tum sahi keh rahe ho...hum un logo ko Maldives bhej the hai...woh log waha jake acha feel karenge...main aaj hi travel agency se baat kar loongi...
Swamini gets four tickets for Maldives and they are supposed to leave the next day...
Vanshika,Kadambari, swamini are at the drawing room...
Maanvi and Jeevika comes...
Viren returns from office with Dadaji and Inder...
Virat also is back from his work...
Swamini:hum sab chahte hai ki tum chaaron thode dinon ke liye...bahar kahi ghum aao...
Vanshika:ha isse tum logo ko achchi change milegi...
Swmaini:toh kal subah tum chaaron subah ke flight se Maldives ke liye nikal rahe ho...
Maanvi:par iss ki kya zaroorat thi...
Jeevika:ha hum log yaha theek hai...
Maanvi:please hum logo ko iss halat mein aapne aap se door mat kijiye...
Vanshika:Maanvi beta hum log tumlogo ko aapne aap se door nahi kar rahe hai...bas tum logo ko khud ko sambhalne ke liye thoda waqt de rahe hai...
Swamini:ha Maanvi...tum log kuch dino ke liye bahar ghoom aaoge toh acha lagega...
Kadambari:jaldi...jao aur apna packing start karo...
Maanvi and Jeevika leave and head towards their room...
Dadaji:Viren Virat...tum log mere kamre mein aao...
Viren and Virat:ji Dadaji...
Dadaji's room..Dadji:Viren aurVirat yeh bohot zaroori hai...ki jeevika aur maanvi ke zindagi mein jo bhi kuch hua isse un dono ko bohot bada sadma pohocha hai...aur un logo ke jeevan saathi hone ke naate yeh tum dono ka farz hai ki un logo ko tum iss sadme se bahar nikalo...main janta hoon ki yeh tum logo ke liye mushkil hai...par main jeevika aur maanvi ki zimmedari tum logo par saupta hoon...jab tum log wapas aaoge mujhe Vadhera khandan mein wahi khushi dekhni hai...
Viren ji dadaji...koshish karunga...
Virat:he nods his head...
Next morning they leave...for Maldives...

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Andrea

@VirMan_Ria

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Maldives!! Great! Gonna get some sweet Virman and Virika scenes!

PM me once you update! :)

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saggitarius687

@saggitarius687

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

In the aircraft...
Jeevika:main Mannu ke saath baith jaau...
Virat:ji of cousre bhabhi...
They settle down...there isn't much talking between Jeevika and Maanvi...
Virat:bhai...main soch raha tha ki...bhabhi normal hone ki koshish kar rahi hai...lekin Maanvi ko dekhkar woh bhi kamzor hoti ja rahi hai...
Viren:ha Virat mujhe pata nahi ki...hum kaise in dono ko iss sadme se bahar nikalenge...
during the entire journey Virat and Viren think of plans to get their ladies out of the trauma...
they reach Maldives...
Virat:bhai bua ne kaha tha Mr.Mathur humein airport receive karne aayenge...pata nahi woh aaye kyun nahi...main Mr.Mathur ko phone karta hu...
Viren:ha theek hai...main ghar mein call karke bata deta hoon ki hum pohoch gaye...
Virat:ha...Mr.Mathur...kaha hai aap...
Mr.Mathur:sorry sir...main abhi 2 minute main airport pohoch hi raha hu...
Virat:ji thik hai...jaldi aayie hum wait kar rahe hain...
Mr.Mathur reaches the airport and greets them...
they reach the place where they will stay...it is basically 2 cottages...sea facing...
Jeevika reaches her room she removes the curtain to get the view...Viren is somewhat happy to see that...Maanvi...has no expression...she sits on the couch...Virat removes the curtain...
Virat:Maanvi chalo beach mein chalte hai...
Maanvi:Virat mera mann nahi hai...main aaram karna chahti hoon...
Virat goes out and sees Viren coming out of his cottage...
Virat:bhai kya hua...bhabhi theek toh hai na...
Viren:ha Virat woh thodi der mein bahar aa jayegi aur Maanvi...
Virat:usse aram karna hai...
Jeevika comes out...:Maanvi kaha hai...woh nahi chalegi beach mein...
Virat:nahi woh aram karna chahti hai...
Jeevika:theek hai main usske saath hi ruk jaati hoon...Viren ji?
Viren ji:ha theek hai...
Virat and Viren are standing outside..
Virat:bhai Maanvi ke wajah se bhabhi kabhi uss sadme se bahar nahi aa payegi...mujhe Maanvi ko samjhana hai...he is about to go...
Viren:ruk Virat...Jeevika hai na usske saath aur abhi gusse se kaam lene se nahi hoga...humein sab aram se handle karna hai...
It's night...
they are having dinner outside..it is basically an extension of the two cottages...
Maanvi fiddles with the food and after sometime...she goes away...
Virat looks at Viren and goes behind her...Viren gives a "aaram se" look...
Virat:Maanvi...Mannvi...tumhe waha khana acha nahi lag raha hai toh tum bata sakti thi...hum andar khana kha lete...
Maaanvi:Virat tum kha lo...mujhe bhookh nahi hai...Virat:aise kaise...khana toh tumhe parega...
maanvi:Virat, please mujhe bhookh nahi hai...Scene shift...Jeevika:mannu...mannu...she is about to follow Virat...
Viren:jeevika...virat gaya hai na...tum ruko...
Jeevika:nahi Viren ji...main hi khali Mannu ko sambhal sakti ho...mujhe jaane dijiye...
Viren:tum aise karogi toh kaise cahlega...Virat uska pati hai...usse sambhalne do Maanvi ko...tum usse le kar zyada over protective ho rahe ho...Virat ko usse baat karne do...
Jeevika:Viren ji...woh dono bachche hai...
Viren:koi bachche nahi hai woh dono...woh shaadi shuda hai...tum agar har baat pe Maanvi ko samjhaogi..toh Virat aur Maanvi kabhi ek doosre ko samajh nahi payenge...
Jeevika:Viren ji...jis daur se hum guzar rahe hai uss daur se main bhi...
Vire:Jeevika please...jis daur se Maanvi aur tum guzar rahi ho na...uss daur se main ur Virat bhi guzar rahe hai...Humne bhi apna bachcha khoya hai...fark sirf itna hai ki...hum uss gham ko bholne ko koshish kar rahe hai aur tum dono...uss baat ko pakarke baithi ho...
Jeevika leaves in disgust...