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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

it has been 3 weeks since they returned from Maldives
Kasak very much got easy with the vadheras especially with Maanvi and Jeevika...She assisted Viren well and the judgement was in Viren's favour...this is the next case...today is the hearing of Viren's case...
Kasak:Vanshika aunty...mujhe aapki aashirwaad chahiye...aaj main ne Viren ko jo case mein assist kiya tha uska aaj hearing hain...main nahi chahti ki meri wajah se is case mein koi gadbad ho...
Virat:Don't worry Kasak...mera bhai achcha wakil hai...woh yeh case bhi jeet jayenge...aur iska credit tumhe bhi milega..all the best bhai...all the best kasak...main nikalta hoon...
He leaves for his recording...at his friend's studio...
Viren:ha maa hum bhi nikalte hain...
all wish them the best...
It's lunch time everybody is at the dining table except Maanvi...
Jeevika:main maanvi ko dekh ke aati hoon...
Vanshika:tum itni baar upar niche mat karo hum Tarun ko bhejte hai...(she calls Tarun...but Tarun does not come)...yeh Tarun bhi kaha chala gaya...
Kadambari:bhabhi main Maanvi ko bulake laati hoon...
Vanshika:theek hai...
Kadambari:Maanvi...Maanvi...(she hears the sound of water falling)...
Maanvi comes out of the washroom...
Kadambari:chal Maanvi...lunch ka waqt ho gaya hai...
Maanvi comes out and falls down...
Kadambari:bhabhi...didi...jaldi aiye...
all come running...they call the family doctor...
Dr:iss halat mein in hone subah se kuch nahi khaya..yeh un ke liye khatarnak ho sakta hai...
Vanshika:kiss halat mein...kahin Maanvi ko...
Dr:Don't tell me aap ko iss baare mein kuch nahi pata..
Jeevika:kaunsi halat mein dr ?(worried)
Dr:Maanvi pregnant hai...aur inhone toh last week hi test karwaya tha...anyways ...woh ab theek hai...bas usse zyaada der bhhoki nahi rehna chahiye
Vanshika,Kadambari,Jeevika and swamini go inside...
Swamini:Maanvi tumne humein itni badi khush khabri batay kyun nahi...
Maanvi:buaji...main chahti thi ki pehle main sure ho jau ki bachcha healthy hai usske baad...pichli baar jo hua tha...
Vanshika:Maanvi..jo ho gaya so ho gaya usse bhool jaao...ab iss nayi khushi ki swagat karo...
kya Vir...
Maanvi:nahi main ne Viraat ko bhi nahi bataya...kal mujhe check up ke liye jaana hai...maine socha tha ki check up ke baad hi aap sab ko bataungi...
Vanshika:Virat ko bata dena beta...main tumhara khana yehi bhejti hoon...Jeevika tum bhi yahi khana kha lo..
Jeevika:ji ma...
they leave...Jeevika:mannu tu itni badi ho gayi ki tu...mujhse baat chupaane lagi...itni badi khushi ki baat tune chupaayi kaise...???woh bhi mujhse...
Maanvi:di...main darrti thi kahi...pichli baar ki taah iss baar bhi...
Jeevika:nahi Mannu iss baar aisa kuch nahi hoga...iss baar hum apni khushiyon ko khud se aur iss parivaar se door nahi karenge...
Virat returns home...
Maanvi:Virat...mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...
Virat:kya..
Maanvi:Virat main ...main...pregnant hoon...
Virat:yeh toh bohot achchi baat hai...
Maanvi:yeh baat mujhe last week hi pata chal gaya tha...
Virat:kya... tumne batayya nahi...
Maanvi:Virat main darr ti hoon kahin pichli Baar ki tarah iss baar bhi...
Virat:is baar pichli baar ki tarah kuch nahi hoga Maanvi...kuch nahi...humara bachcha duniya mein aayega...
Maanvi:promise...(with tears in her eyes)
Virat:promise...he hugs her...and is tensed...
Virat is standing near the staircase...
Viren:Virat tere liye itni badi khushi ki baat hai...aur tu yaha...
Virat:bhai...main ne promise kiya hai...ki iss baar humara bachcha iss duniya mein aayega...par agar last time ke jaise,...
Viren:last time ke jaise iss baar kuch nahi...hum iss baar apne bachche ko khone nahi denge...
Virat Viren hug...
Next day Virat-maanvi go for Maanvi's checkupp...the doc tells them the baby is healthy...they rettun home happy..Vadhera house is happy...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Kasak is talking to someone over the phone...
Kasak:ha...Virat ki patni ab pregnant hai...Vadher aparivaar bohot khush hai...aur tujhe pata hai ki...main ne Viren ko jis case mein assist kiya tha usme...woh successful hua hai...ab main chahti hoon ki main khud case ladu..nahi kissi ko assist karu...haan waise Viren ke saath kam karke mujhe experience toh mil raha hai...(she notices Kadambari)...main tujhse baad mein baat karti hoon...arre chachi aap..
Kadambari:ha...main tumhe woh khelne ke liye...
Kasak:khelne ke liye...matlab??
Kadambari:woh kya hai na...aisa hota hai...ki jab hum log free rehte hai...toh hum..dumbcharades khelte hai...chalo tum bhi...
Kasak:ji chachi chaliye...
They go down...Virat-Maanvi...Viren- Jeevika...Inder-Kadambari are partners...
Kadambari:hai ni Kasak..tumhara toh partner...
Kasak:koi baat nahi...main aap logo ko film ka naam dungi...
Inder:pehle main jaata hoon..
Kadambari:theek se acting karna...
inder:tum theek se guess karna...
Kasak whispers the film's name in his ears...
Inder:ha toh Kadambari dekho...hindi picture hain aur teen words...
Virat,Viren Jeevika and Maanvi:chachu cheating...aap mooh se kuch bol nahi sakte...
Inder:acha theek hai...kadambari dekho toh...
Kadambari:aap dihaiye toh...
his 2 minutes is over already...
Kasak:chachu time up...
Inder:arre aise kaise...tum phir se ghari dekho...
Virat:ha chachu aapka 2 min khatam ho chuka hai...
Kadambari:aap bata hi dijiye aap ka movie ka naam kya tha...
Inder:ha movie ka nam tha...ferrari ki sawari...
Kasak:nahi Chachu main ne toh aapko...dil kya kare diya tha...
Inder:ha jo bhi ho...ab next Viren...
Viren acts out the movies name...and Jeevika gets it right...
Again Virat acts it nad Maanvi gets it correct...
They play for sometime...
After dinner...
kasak is looking out through the window...
Jeevika:kya hua Kasak...tumhe sona nahi hai kya...
kasak:tum log sab saath mein kitne khush ho nahi...aggar ek ko kuch hota hai...toh kitne saare haath aa jate hai...unke aasooo pochne ke liye...ek ke khushi mein sab kitne khush hota hai...kash mera bhi ek parivaar hota aisa...
Jeevika:tum aisa kyun sochti ho...yeh bhi toh tumhara parivaar hi hai...humsab tumhare aapne hai...
Kasak:thank you Jeevika itne apnepan ke liye...yaha aakar mujhe bilkul bhi paraya jaisa feeling nahi hua...aisa lagta hai jaiose main tuim sab ko...barso se janti hooo..thank you Jeevika...

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girl97

@girl97

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

thanks

very nice Os

plz update soon

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Nice updates... Lol i read all ur pms now so zyada njoy kiya... Hmmm hope dis kasak is not upto Sumthng bad... Who was she talking to on da fon?? Finally virman n virika r happy:) Thanx for ur pms...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Jeevika and Maanvi has to go for their check up...Vien is ready to leave for his office...
Jeevika:Viren ji...aaj mera check up hai...
Viren:ha Jeevika tum pohoch jaana Maanvi ke saath main bhi clinic pohoch jaunga...
Jeevika:ji...
In Virat-Maanvi's room...
Maanvi:tum aaj clinic chaloge na...
Virat:ha...main studio se direct pohoch jaunga...bye...
Virat too leaves...
Maanvi and Jeevika spend most of the time together...
they are at the clinic...Virat is on his way...He gets a call...
Viren:Maanvi aur Jeevika ka aaj check up hai...tu clinic ja raha hai na...
Virat:ha bhai...kyu aap nahi aa rahe ho...??
Viren:woh actually Kasak ki ek friend Chandigarh aayi hai aur ussne ek party rakhi hai...aur woh Chandigarh ache se janti nahi...toh woh insist kar rahi hai ki main uske saath jaaoon...
Virat:acha bhai theek hai...aap jao...main hoon..aap bhabhi ki bikul fikr mat karo...
Virat reaches the clinic...Meanwhile Viren calls Virat and she gets to know that Viren won't be coming...
They reach home..
Viren:Jeevika i am sorry woh main aaj...
Jeevika:Viren ji...aaapko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai...
Viren:toh humara bachcha kaisa hai...
Jeevika:ha woh bilkul theek hai...
Days pass by...
Jeevika:Viren ji aaj aap jaldi aayenge...aaj humein woh mandir jaana hai...Maa aur buaji bhi chalengi...
Viren:nahi Jeevika...woh Kasak ne ek nayi case liya hai...toh main usse help karunga...office se laut te der ho jayegi...please Jeevika...
Jeevika:theek hai...vaise bhi Virat toh shayad jaayega hi...
This was third time...when Viren could not go with Jeevika...beacuse he had to help Kasak...
Weeks pss by...Jeevika is 5 months pregnant now...and Maanvi is 4 and a half months pregnant...
Virat-Maanvi's room...
Jeevika is cutting apples and both are having it...
Maanvi is thinking something...
Jeevika:Mannu yeh tu kya soch rahi hai...
Maanvi:Di...aapko nahi lagta jiju...Kasak ke saath kuch zyada hi...
Jeevika:Mannu...yeh tu kya keh rahi hai..kasak ka iss duniya mein koi nahi hai...aur Viren ji usse bas apna dost hi maante hai...
Maanvi:ha di main samajhti hu...jiju usse apn adost maante hai par kya ...
Jeevika:Mannu...itna mat soch...aur apple kha...
Kasak is again talking to someone over the phone...
kasak:ha tune jo kaha tha...main woh kar rahi hoon...lekin yeh bohot strong hai...aur waisse bhi mujhe yeh tareeka sahi nahi lag raha...
Phone person;tu apna iraada mat badal...
Kasak:nahi main irada nahi...main tujhse baad mein baat karti hoon...Maanvi is standing at the door...
Maanvi:tum yeh kisse baat kar rahi thi...
Kasak:meri best friend...woh Canada mein rehti thi...abhi kuch mahino ke liye Mumbai aayi hui hai...
Maanvi:acha tum usse milne nahi jaogi...
Kasak:main wahi se hi toh aa rahi hoon...
Maanvi:tumne toh kaha tha ki tum Delhi se aa rahi ho...
Kasak;ha..wo...woh main..pehle Mumbai gayi usse milne...phir Delhi wapas aa gayi...
Maanvi is not covinced with the reply...
Maanvi:ok...
Kasak turns around and heaves a sigh of relief...
Maanvi:kuch toh gdbad hai...yeh Kasak mujhe theek nahi lagti hai...Virat se baat karti hoon...
She goes to Virat...and tells her...
Virat:Maanvi tum iss baat ko le kar zyada mat socho...woh bass bhai ki subordinate hai...aur waise bhi woh bua ki friend ki beti hai...usska parivaar nahi hai...bass humein
Maanvi:tum baat ko samjho...
Virat:ab bass...itna stress mat lo...aur so jao...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Kasak:yeh mujhe kya ho gaya...yeh sab sahi nahi hai...Viren shadi shuda hai...nahi mujhe usse baat karni hi hogi...
Kasak calls up...
kasak to her friend ...dekh mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe...ab yaha se chale jaana chahiye...
Friend:kyun...
Kasak:nahi mujhe lagta hai mujhe Viren se pyaar ho gaya hai...aur yeh sahi nahi hai...
Friend:please kasak...tu abhi aise backout mat kar...tu jis wajah se Vadhera house gayi thi...tujhe uss maksad ko poora karna hi parega...
kasak:nahi woh log bohot ache hai...main iss parivaar ko tod nahi sakti...
friend:dekh tujhe iss baat se takleef hai na ki tujhe shayad viren se pyaar ho gaya...toh theek hai...tu Virat ko Maanvi se alag kar...aur Jeevika toh waise bhi...Viren se door ho hi chuki hai...toh Viren tera consolation prize...
kasak:nahi Maya yeh sahi nahi hai...
Scene shift...the person on the phone is Maya...
Maya:nahi tujhe yeh karrna paredga...tujhe meri kasam...yaad kar kaise main depression mein chali gayi thi...Chandigarh se wapas aane ke baad...
Kasak gets a flashback...
Kasak:ha tu theek keh rahi hai...they don't deserve to be in the Vadhera mansion...main in dono behno ko...Vadhera parivaar se door kar dungi...bye...
Maanvi listens to the last part of the conversation
Maanvi:yeh Kasak kya bol rahi thi...kahin woh Di aur mujhe...par woh aisa kyun karegi...lekin mainev toh yeh apne kaano se suna...kya woh...woh baat kisse kar rahi hogi...main di ko batau...ya Virat ko...nahi main aaj raat Jriju aur Virat se baat karungi...khamakha di ko pareshaan nahi karungi...
At night she narrates the incident to Virat and Viren...
Virat:Maanvi yaar tum bilkul ek shakki patni ban chuki ho...
Viren:ha Maanvi aise koi baat nahi ho...kasak aisa kuch kar hi nahi sakti...woh toh hum sabse kitna pyaar karti hai...
Virat:ha Maanvi...tum bekaar mein stress le rahi ho...aur please aaj ke baad hum koi iss baare mein baat nahi karenge...
Maanvi:par aap log meri baat...
Virat..please maanvi...
Maanvi goes out of the room...
Maanvi to herself...ab mujhe hi sach ka pata lagana hai...

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Amrita . T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Next day...Viren and Kasak left for office...
Maanvi:main usske kamre mein jaati hoon...
Maanvi goes to kasak's room she finds a diary...she opens it...
June 25, 2012....
aaj main...Vadhera khandan main pehli baar apna kadam rakha...sab yaha kitne achche hai...pata nahi yaha rehkar main Maya ki help kaise karungi...

June 26 2012...
aaj woh log wapas aa gaye...jiska mujhe besabri se intezaar tha...Virat -maanvi ek doosre se kitna pyaar karte hai...Viirat ko dekhkar lagta nahin...ki woh kabhio Maya se pyaar karta tha...mujjhe Virat-maanvi ka rishta todne ka koi dil nahi hai...lekin jab bhi main yeh sochti hoon muje Maya ka woh chehra yaad ata hai...ktna royi thi woh...

June 29, 2012...
sorry sorry sorry main woh case le kar busy thi...toh main tumhe kuch bata nahi payi...muje Viren ke saath kaam karna acha lagta hai...Jeevika bhi kitni achi hai...ussne mujhe aaj ek parivaar hone ka matlab sikhaya...pata nahi...main yeh sab kaise kar paungi...
Maanvi...turns may pages...

September 18,2012...
yeh ek ajeeb ehsaas hai...mujhe lagta hai mujhe shayad Viren se pyaar ho gaya hai...mujhe khud bhi nahi pata...yeh kya hai...

September 20,2012...
ha main ne aaj Maya ko bhi bataya mujhe Viren se pyaar hai...aur ussne meri problem jhat se solve kar diya...ha ussne ek sahi solution diya...Viren aur Jeevika ko alag karna hi ab mera mission hona chahiye...aggar Viren-Jeevika se alag ho gayi toh...toh Maanvi bhi virat se alag ho jayegi aur main aur Maya ...yess...am sooo soo sooo happy...

Maanvi is in shock...isska matlab...mujhe yeh baat di se kehne hi paregi...
Maanvi:di...di...mujhe...aapse kuch kehna hai...she tells her all that she read in the diary...
Jeevika:Maanvi yeh tu kya keh rahi hai...tere paas saboot hai kya koi...agar kissine humare baat par vishwaas nahi kiya toh...
Maanvi:vishwaas kyun nahi karenge...
Jeevika:nahin Maanvi main khud hi...mujhe khud iss baat par vishwaas karne mein takleef ho rahi hai...toh tujhe lagta hai...Viren ji aur Virat aise...i mean woh log abhi bohot ache dost ban gayye hai...humein kuch aur tarreke se baat ko sambhalni hogi...
Maanvi and jeevika try to give hints...but Viren and Virat...they refuse to believe...there have been several occassions when Viren coul not be with Jeevika because of Kasak...and there are tiffs between Virat and Maanvi too...
Jeevika:Viren ji main sach keh rahi hoon...main ne khud woh diary pada hai...
Viren:Jeevika aisa kuch nahi hai...yeh ek galatfaimi hai...
Jeevika:nahi Viren ji...main ne aur Mannu ne...
Viren:bas Jeevika...tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti aggar hum log 8 ghante kaam karte hai toh kasak 7 ghante tumhare...baarein mein baat karti hai...aur tum...maine kabhi tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha...
Jeevika:arre baat ko samjhiye...mera kya dushmani hoga Kasak se...mujhe kuch pata hai issiliye toh main keh rahi hoo na...
Viren:bass Jeevika...tumhe kuch dinon ke liye Hrishikeh jaana chahiye...you need rest...
Jeevika:Viren ji...aap mujhe...
Viren...ha...kal hi main tumhe...Hrishikesh chod aunga...
Jeevika:koi zarrorat nahi hai...mujhe Shankar ji chod ayenge...aapko takleef lene ki koi zaroorat nahi...
Kasak was standing outside the room and she heard the conversation...
Kasak:Viren tumhe Jeevika se aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi...woh pregnant hai...aur uski delivery 3 din mein hai...usse sabse zyada tumhari zaroorat hai...
Viren leaves...
Kasak in her room...aaj main bohot khush hoon Maya...finally...ek balah tali...ab Maanvi ka Di hi nahi rahega toh...toh Maanvi bhi Vadhhera parivaar mein zyaada der tik nahi payegi...
Scene shift...
Jeevika is crying and packing her stuffs...
Maanvi:di yeh aap kya kar rahi ho...ky...kyun pack kar rahi ho...kahin ja rahi ho...??
jeevika:Mannu main kal Hrishikesh jaa rahi hoon...
Maanvi:par iss halat main...
Jeevika narrates her fight with Viren...toh agar Viren ji yahi chahte hai...
Maanvi;nahin Di main abhi jiju..se...
Jeevika:nahin maanvi tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...
maanvi:opar Di...
Jeevika:please Mannu...
Maanvi:to herself...main Virat se baat karti hoon...
Maanvi tells Virat abut Jeevika-Viren fight and that Jeevika is leving tomorrow...
Virat:Maanvi tumne aur bhabhi ne yeh sab kuch...Don't you understand Kasak ka koi apna parivaar nahi hai...woh humein hi apna parivaar maanti hai...usse
tumne aur bhabhi...I don't believe this...
Maanvi:Virat tum baat ko samjho...
Virat;you know what Maanvi...tumhe bhi bhabhi ke saath Hrishikesh jana chahiye...
Maanvi:main di ki tarah pagal nahi...main kahi nahi jaungi...
Maanvi(to herself)...ab...Kasak ki sachchai toh amne lani hi paregi...par kaise...