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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut
Wow! Honestly I don't know what to say! I must tell you that I love what you have done with Viren and Virat's character in your short story, I loved Viren's depth and I could palpate Virat's pain and agony. I wish oh how I wish that the writers of the show could do justice to these characters like you do!
Take a bow! Thank you for letting us enjoy your writing and I hope that you continue 😊

Dr Po, nice to see you. 😃

You are very welcome for the story,and I am very glad that you have loved it and have fallen short of words. 😆 If I do write again I will be sure to tell you. 😉 I just wrote Viren how I want him to be - so maybe that is why he has that depth and well Virat was not a major person in this SS. I think Viren and Jeevika took most of it, but he was still there to sense his own internal pain.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: poojaroy1985
Bravo...brilliant 👏 I loved the line 'J crawled into bed' reminds me of the kuch kuch hota hain scene. I'm glad you ended it with M dying but would have liked to see J die too...but super writing...liked the balance and also a sensible Viren unlike the current one :) pls keep writing...

Kuch Kuch hota hai - How I do love that film. 😊

I don't think I could have really ended it any other way, she unfortunately died, but in the arms of her sister. Viren, what can I say about Viren he has his faults but suppose to overcome that in time, which I think I made him do.

Thanks for taking the time to read the SS and comment on each part :D

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preetivr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

thank you. thank you so much for this SS.

simply great. you have shown the extremes of emotions, what i would love to see in the show, really.

i have cried a lot while reading through this, cause you have excellently described everyones emotions.

and you vms reminding me once again as to why JEEMAN are closer to my heart than any relationship i have ever seen on television.

thaking you from the bottom of my heart. loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: preetivr
thank you. thank you so much for this SS.
simply great. you have shown the extremes of emotions, what i would love to see in the show, really.

i have cried a lot while reading through this, cause you have excellently described everyones emotions.

and you vms reminding me once again as to why JEEMAN are closer to my heart than any relationship i have ever seen on television.

thaking you from the bottom of my heart. loved it

Thank you for enjoy it and for all your kind words. I didn't mean to make you cry, but then I at least know you did enjoy it. 😳

The Vms were just to show the depth in their relationship, which I think is deeper than other couples.

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arohi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

i expected a happy ending...😭

but i liked it...

it looked more realistic...

thanx for the pm...

do pm me if u write mose ss in future!

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BadtameezDil.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Aww..It could not have ended much more better than this

Keep writing and pm-Ing me

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

... !! Hope u understand. I really don't have what people call words of praise!!

Still I would like to quote a line

"From childhood to today, from Fights to hugs, from ganga ghat to her wedding day. She had always found heaven in her sister's arms & she felt lucky - lucky to DIE IN HER SAVIOUR'S ARMS "

Simply incredible and heart wrenching!!!!!

Really sorry for being late, was stucked somewhere !!!!!

Plz inform me of ur any further work

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-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: arohi16
i expected a happy ending...😭

but i liked it...
it looked more realistic...
thanx for the pm...
do pm me if u write mose ss in future!

I'm glad you like it😛, even though it wasn't the happy ending you imagined. I'll be sure to Pm you if I do write anymore. Not sure when that will be though

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-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: __Shivani__
Aww..It could not have ended much more better than this
Keep writing and pm-Ing me

😊 Thank you for liking the ending, I thought I might upset a few people with the ending. But you all seemed to be good with it. I'll be sure to Pm you if I do write again.

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: nobo
... !! Hope u understand. I really don't have what people call words of praise!!
Still I would like to quote a line
"From childhood to today, from Fights to hugs, from ganga ghat to her wedding day. She had always found heaven in her sister's arms & she felt lucky - lucky to DIE IN HER SAVIOUR'S ARMS "

Simply incredible and heart wrenching!!!!!
Really sorry for being late, was stucked somewhere !!!!!

Plz inform me of ur any further work

It's not late at all Priya. 😊 I don't think I could have ended it, any other way. They are the soul of the show and she had to die, it would not have worked otherwise. You don't have to say anything a simple comment and like is more than enough praise for the story. I'm just glad that all of you have enjoyed the SS and in the way I have written it.

Don't worry I will be sure to inform you on anything I will write in the future, don't know when that will be though.