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ita_04

@ita_04

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

it gave me goosebumps pooja...right from jeevika staring blankly at the blood to virat breaking down...it was amazing...
n the end is actually getting me scared...write it down quickly...waiting..

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Anu101

@Anu101

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Hey thanku so much for the pm 😃 I love your writing...it has all the emotions!!! I just feel so empty inside after reading your ss...as in 😭😭 yeah you did give us a warning...but isn't the pain part of the magic of VirMan...loved it.Hugzzz

oooh plz pm me when u update the final part!!!!!!

Edited by Anu101 - 13 years ago

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

hoping for a gud one..

very scared afetr ur update

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Simply awesome dude, emotions... I mean ufff, seems as if u wrote it all by imaging urself der . Wanna quote many lines but will do my fav. One

"the person she was trying to protect from all these months was fading away, for the first time jeevika was losing hope"

They describe her perfect condition , looking at her sister's blood@@@

U awesomely described virat & his feelings ..

Oh my, u have described all the relations so much deeply. FABULOUS

Btw I m not such deep person lol, but still got ur story

Waiting for final part, plz update soon

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_innocent_

@_innocent_

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Thanks for the pm PJ:D..

I seem to enjoy it more with each part. I thought part 5 was my fav but i guess not after reading part 6😆

This part was soo sad :(- especially when M tries to say something but cant seem to communicate what she wants to say :( Loved how Viren was more invovled, from the beginning till the end it seemed, something that has beeen missing from the show!!.. Love how J was remembering her time with M, from childhood to adulthood *as you stated* Just a little grammar mistake 😆@red- but other than that i loved every part of it :D..Cannot wait for the final part and the surprise😉

His eyes were full of tears he could hardly speak. He shut his eyes and held her hand close to him. He whispered "No, this isn't happening, not now. You're not leaving me; you're not leaving your Di. Listen to be Maanvi, just listen to me this once. You need to fight, fight as hard as you can please. Please just try to fight little harder, for me." His voice broke "I ... love you"

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arohi16

@arohi16

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

truely amazing!

loved it...

thanx for the pm

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BadtameezDil.

@BadtameezDil.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Truly loved it!!

Waiting for the surprise 😊

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..Jessie..

@..Jessie..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

PJ sorry for the late reply !!!!

my busy schedule is to be blamed!!!!

what should i say terrible one!!!!!

the whole emotions was amazingly portrayed!!!!!!!

👏(countless)

the way jeevika was my god i couldn't imagine !!!!!

the hospital scene was once again terrible one!!!!!

just awesome dude!!!

final part!!!gush i dont want u to end!!!sigh!!!!!!

each and every part was my favorite!!!

u are planning to end!!!😭

but i surely wait long as i ll surely get the best ending!!!!

brilliant job!!!!

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Nimishrr

@Nimishrr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Superb !! :) update sooon

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Pj 😊 I loved it! Thank you for sending me a message and updating me. I do not have time to comment in detail so I will be back as soon as time permits to let give you my 2 cents!!

In short I loved it!!

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