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..Jessie..

@..Jessie..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

wow Pj it was amazing one loved it !!!!

dont have more words to say how it was so amazing !!!!!!

just loved every bits!!!!!

amazing ending too!!!!!

Lovely VM's !!!!!

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: jessiekarthik
wow Pj it was amazing one loved it !!!!
dont have more words to say how it was so amazing !!!!!!

just loved every bits!!!!!
amazing ending too!!!!!

Lovely VM's !!!!!

Thanks Jessie 😊 Glad it enjoyed it all. I thought I'd end my SS in a different way hence the Vms.

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Jaya

@screen22

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

😲I came across your SS accidentally, Read the whole story in one go.

WOW i have no words to describe what i am feeling expect i have tears in my eyes while i am writing this post😭

Your writing is mind blowing, the way it is written makes you want to read to the end non stop. I enjoyed reading this very much

Thank you and take a bow!👏

I hope that you continue and please PM me if you write any more?🥳

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: screen22
😲I came across your SS accidentally, Read the whole story in one go.

WOW i have no words to describe what i am feeling expect i have tears in my eyes while i am writing this post😭

Your writing is mind blowing, the way it is written makes you want to read to the end non stop. I enjoyed reading this very much

Thank you and take a bow!👏

I hope that you continue and please PM me if you write any more?🥳

WOW! you read it all in one go 😃 Thank you so much for reading it and especially that you read it all at once. I'm glad that you stumbled across it and enjoyed reading it. 😛

I should write some more but currently haven't got any ideas. If I do I will sure Pm you. 😊

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_innocent_

@_innocent_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

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LOL… First let me comment on your vms….. It was definitely a nice surprise, had me smiling as soon as I came on the page LOL…

1- The song was perfect to demonstrate her struggle, but there were more of JV, than JM :!( and you did a good job by selecting the appropriate scenes to fit the song.

2- I loved the second vm… it took be back to the wonderful moments the sisters shared, in rishikesh… and that one fantastic scene- of J preventing BJ from hitting M… Seriously, I don't have words to describe the second one, I totally loved it.

3- Again third one was nice….. especially where JM fall on the bed

But I loved the second one more since it was only the sisters :-D…. Waise I was surprise you didn't include one with M finding it hard to choose b/w Jeevika and Virat. But am not complaining since i finally got to see more vms from your side😆😆

Now coming to your update… I knew you were going to kill M, I just knew it when I read the previous parts LOL…

Its was so typical of Jeevika to tell Maanu that there was still a way of beating her illness, despite there being no way! She refuses to give up, until her Maanu assures her that she wont blame her Dii, as she is aware that her Diii would have fought the world for her, but alas, this illness, was the one thing her Di, could not get rid of (despite her various promises). Man, thats heartbreaking. I love how she made her peace with Virat (in terms of finally confessing) and also how she asked Viren to take care of Jeevika.

But, one little thing- The doctor did not consider the whole kidney thing right? J bringing it up, surely that would have given M some hope of survival?

She had always found heaven in her sister's arms, and she felt lucky- lucky to die in the arms of her saviour. – Fantastic way to finish it off. I would have loved for a happy ending, but sad endings sometimes are better. Do write more SS… my only complaint in regards to this one is… the final part aint long enough, I wanted to read more LOL… I loved it- Part 1 to 7- in fact I adored each part more, as I went along.

Do write more pweaseee

It has been a pleasure reading your SS

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: _innocent_
LOL' First let me comment on your vms'.. It was definitely a nice surprise, had me smiling as soon as I came on the page LOL'
1- The song was perfect to demonstrate her struggle, but there were more of JV, than JM :!( and you did a good job by selecting the appropriate scenes to fit the song.
2- I loved the second vm' it took be back to the wonderful moments the sisters shared, in rishikesh' and that one fantastic scene- of J preventing BJ from hitting M' Seriously, I don't have words to describe the second one, I totally loved it.
3- Again third one was nice'.. especially where JM fall on the bed
But I loved the second one more since it was only the sisters :-D'. Waise I was surprise you didn't include one with M finding it hard to choose b/w Jeevika and Virat. But am not complaining since i finally got to see more vms from your side😆😆
Now coming to your update' I knew you were going to kill M, I just knew it when I read the previous parts LOL'
Its was so typical of Jeevika to tell Maanu that there was still a way of beating her illness, despite there being no way! She refuses to give up, until her Maanu assures her that she wont blame her Dii, as she is aware that her Diii would have fought the world for her, but alas, this illness, was the one thing her Di, could not get rid of (despite her various promises). Man, thats heartbreaking. I love how she made her peace with Virat (in terms of finally confessing) and also how she asked Viren to take care of Jeevika.

But, one little thing- The doctor did not consider the whole kidney thing right? J bringing it up, surely that would have given M some hope of survival?

She had always found heaven in her sister's arms, and she felt lucky- lucky to die in the arms of her saviour. ' Fantastic way to finish it off. I would have loved for a happy ending, but sad endings sometimes are better. Do write more SS' my only complaint in regards to this one is' the final part aint long enough, I wanted to read more LOL' I loved it- Part 1 to 7- in fact I adored each part more, as I went along

Well I thought the VMs were something different, hence I added them.
1- Jeevika struggles more in her relationship with Viren then she does with Maanvi, so they ended up with more. Lol. But I did think that when I was making it, there not enough Jeevika and Maanvi. (btw do you know the song???)

2- An ever so simply Vm, just based around the two of them. Like I said the good and the bad moments.

3- How I love the wake up scene! It always finds a way in my VMs.

These Vms were slightly different as they did not simply revolve around the sisters. Thought I'd mix it up a bit.

I said that I did not plan to kill her it just ended up this way. I wrote the characters the same as the show. So there was going to an ounce of predicability in their reactions. As we have grown accustom to them. Well that's when the writers keep them in character lol.

I did say ignore all medical facts in the SS, as my knowledge is limited. But in my opinion, the doctor said that it would not make a difference, but Jeevika is adamant that they can do something, which is why she brought it up, yet Maanvi was past the stage where she knows there is hope.

I know a happy ending would have been nice, but not this time. She died but I think in the best way possible. I do admit this part was rather short. Sorry about that. I couldn't expand it longer. Maybe had I cut the parts differently it could have been longer.

I should write more once I have thought of something to write about. Which do you think an OS or a SS?

Julie thank you for reading the SS and enjoying it that much, that you were annoyed at the ending. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your comments on each parts plus your quotations.

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

I always do Best things in last😆
Just finished each and every work so that i can enjoy ur last update...

*READING...*

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Baatein bhool jaati hain...Yaadein yaad aati hain..
Yeh yaadein kisi dilo jaanam ke chale jaane ke baad aati hain :)

I am actually not getting how to react ? no idea what to write in a comment...truly, i dont know...bas the whole part is rewinding into mind...again and again the scene where Maanvi was lost in flashbacks...it keeps flashing in front of my eyes...i myself was like expressionless and feeling less... Sach mein ek aansoon tak nai gira atleast not from outside... as for inside, thrz a feeling jiske liye mere paas koi words nai hain..

You know what impressed me the most, is how you took all the characters and really got inside their heads and showed us how Jeevika, Manvi ,Viren nd Virat were feeling.. ..You have truly shown us just how horrible it feels jab apno se door hona hota hai... A large range of emotions from one character to the other you have shown...And such a wonderful handle on all of these characters u have n make it so very easy for us to play each scene out in our minds. .
It was so Real..very original...I absolutely loved

And what should I say about ur Vms... They were well-made.. each and every scene was perfecttt...Fantastic Job

Really appreciate your efforts..

Thanks from the bottom of my heart Pooja.. :)

Love you for this :) thanks once again🤗

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Neha.K.
Baatein bhool jaati hain...Yaadein yaad aati hain..
Yeh yaadein kisi dilo jaanam ke chale jaane ke baad aati hain :)

I am actually not getting how to react ? no idea what to write in a comment...truly, i dont know...bas the whole part is rewinding into mind...again and again the scene where Maanvi was lost in flashbacks...it keeps flashing in front of my eyes...i myself was like expressionless and feeling less... Sach mein ek aansoon tak nai gira atleast not from outside... as for inside, thrz a feeling jiske liye mere paas koi words nai hain..

You know what impressed me the most, is how you took all the characters and really got inside their heads and showed us how Jeevika, Manvi ,Viren nd Virat were feeling.. ..You have truly shown us just how horrible it feels jab apno se door hona hota hai... A large range of emotions from one character to the other you have shown...And such a wonderful handle on all of these characters u have n make it so very easy for us to play each scene out in our minds. .
It was so Real..very original...I absolutely loved

And what should I say about ur Vms... They were well-made.. each and every scene was perfecttt...Fantastic Job

Really appreciate your efforts..

Thanks from the bottom of my heart Pooja.. :)

Love you for this :) thanks once again🤗

Neha I love that song. Yaadein, meeti meeti yaadein, aur khatti meeti Yaadein.

Dude! Thank you for all your comments, am glad you have enjoyed the way that I wrote the SS.Honestly I had never written as SS before and the style was different other fan writing, but I'm glad you have taken pleasure in reading it.
Like I said to someone (can't remember who, my memory sucks) I wrote the story as if it was being enacted, which maybe why it is easy to inagine the scenes in front of you.

I think that characters like Jeevika and Viren have so much too them, that they can be taken anywhere and still you can connect to them. Glad you enjoyed this trail of theirs.

Glad you enjoyed the VMs, there a bit different to my usual ones, but I love how so many songs can be linked to Jeevika and Maanvi, and how it changes the whole mood.

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_innocent_

@_innocent_

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

@PJ

Yeshh i do know the song, precisely why it made it perfect😳

I actually preferred the sad ending, for me sad ending are always better, since according to moi... it reflects real life!! not everything is rosy dosyy and we do not always find a cure from cancer, so i was glad you chose to end the story this way, especially with M having no regrets.

You tried your hand at writing a SS, so why not an OS now? But either way, i will be more than happy to read it, since i really enjoyed your first ever attempt😳

And dude it has been an absolute pleasure to read all your updates, i even found one grammatical error🥳😆 which annoyed you hahahahahaa...

Whenever you feel like writing again, just pm me<3