VirMan SS: Pyaar ka Dostana ch2 pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethis

its awesome.. and please pm me when you continue...

sure will pm u
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Originally posted by: girl_rocks

awsm blossom...continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonika_virman

OMG
That was my friend totally amazing . I am loving the concept . Do continue soon and ADD ME IN YOUR PMLIST

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Di you know me na...
I will always be happy to read a work of yours...
Apart from some small spelling mistakes, I think the start is good...
Continue on Di
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Awesome fiza darling.
Loved the flirt side of virat..
Btw I dint knew you love virman too..
I love love to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it...update soon...pls add me 2 ur PM list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ausumn
just loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum work hun...njoyed reading every bit of it...👏
frm jealous manan to our desi punjabi munda virat...a caring manvi
m sure in midst of al dis acts...virat wil surely fall for maanvi n wot abt manvi...wot wz her past???
well m sure u wud cum up wid more mindblowing twists and turns...
plz cont soon n pm me wen ya update 😊
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oh dear!!! it was too gud, u nailed my coffin but for gud luv'd man, i wan't 2 jump what a concept ... do pm me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2 let the games began

Bhai oh mere bhai aap se kuch baat karna hai says virat

Haan yaar mere bhai bolo kya baat hai says viren

Bhai actually baat yeh hi ki I need your help with something says virat

Yeh hai ..what did you do now says viren

Bhai um kal na (he explains the whole story to viren)

Bhai please keep bhabi away from this and please if ypu meet manan any where wih us if we go out along with handeling bhabi.. help us play along and cover for if needed please bhai this is the only way to teach that jerk a lesson what he lost and 'that he will never be get it please bhai help says virat

No problem koi tension nahin ..ill handel jeevika .. and what you did was right when ever you need my help im here ..and tell manvi not to worry till we vahdera brothers are here these sisters will never have to worry about anything kyun virat says viren

Yup that's for sure bhai thanks says virat

Yaar virat where is manvi need her to come with me shopping to get jeevika gift says viren

Main yahaan hoon jiju .. sure lets go virat also tags along with them

Manan logs on facebook and sees

Manvi status on facebook says at the paradise mall with jiju and virat

At the mall ina jewelry section

Manan walks in and sees them

Waise jiju gift and all kyun kya hua says manvi

Nothing just want to pamper your di that's all says viren

Haye how sweet jiju 'oh crap not again no says manvi

Kya hua says viren

Jiju manan damn says manvi

Koi baat nahin maanvi hum dono bahi hai na will teach him kyun virat says viren

Exactly just chill partner

Sweet heart bhai isn't the only one who loves to papmer his girl says virat loud so manan can hear

Maanvi is lookinga t some jelewry for viren to get jeevika when viren notices manan walk near them

Yaar virat kuch kar jaldi whispers viren

Virat to the store clerk can you show me this ring asks virat

Virat has ring in his hand'. Manvi try this one here let me

He puts the ring on manvi ' finger

So my princess kaise hai ?

Perfect mere bhai ..what ring you chose for her lets just see if maanvi will like it

Aap ki choice hai .. has to be perfect .. must say its one of a kind just like you says manvi

Virat and viren tell the sales guy to pack the jewelery and they for it

Hi manvi yeh kya ho ra hai ..shoping and all says manan

Yeah just like that says manvi

Oh come baby today wasn't like anyother shopping outing ' it was special says virat

That's for sure dulhe raja ..apni hone wale dulhan kilye ring pick kare says viren

Kya rings says manan

Haan exactly we..but before virat can finish

Arrey mere duhle raja ..jaldi karo ..thereis so many things to get done

Haan bhai hall book karni hai, barat ki ghoori book karna hai, honey moon tickets and all says virat

Aur who will do all this ..shaadi aap dono ki hai says viren

Haan bhai ' iknow everythibng happening so fast but mere bhai ..chill abhi tho engagement ka date bhi fix nahin hua hai na says virat stairing at viren ' giving the look tahts syas alil too much bro

Oh so you guys are getting married congratulations says manan (who was burning with anger and envy inside)

Forget all this manan you here says manvi

Yeah um me and a couple of friends are plan on going to goa so was getting a few things for the trip so hey maanvi tum aur viart ..why don't you both come to goa with us ..it will be fun" says manan

"Yeah sure why not ..kyun maanvi waise bhi ..we thought ki shaadi ki baad we'd go to goa for our honeymoon ..right ..why don't we check it out and see if we like if not ..Switzerland'kyun baby"

Says virat with a smirk on his face and arms around manvi

Both manan and manvi our shocked hearing virats words

Virat mere bhai ..not a bad idea tum dono go and enjoy your self in goa ' Manan both of them will join you

Right manvi says viren

Kya par jiju there so many things to get done we cant says manvi

Come on baby (virat holds manvi closer to him and looks in her eyes moves her hair from her face )

It will be fun ..i promise you wont regret just say yes it winks virat

Ok we will says manvi

Thank you baby sayas virat and kisses manvis check

Manvi is surprised and elbows him

Oh mera hero I hate pda kya kare ho says manvi

But baby me your boyfriend loves pda ..come lets go manan msg us the details says virat

VirMan and viren get in the car

Oye chep ..what the ..tum kya kare virat .. she strats to hit him from the back seat

Oye manvi im driving he will get hurt says viren

Oye jiju not a word tum dono bhai mere band baja baraat hi plan kar liye uff

Ab goa mein kya hoga says manvi

Precap: ch3 manan walking on the beach see's virat giving manvi a piggy back ride and they are running on the beach ' manan decides to win manvi back by hook or crook

That's it for now do comment ..

Any predictions ?

Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago

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