VirMan SS: Pyaar ka Dostana ch2 pg 5

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VirMan SS: Pyaar ka Dostana

Look at me ' hey partner don't cry hua kya hai" says virat

He looks around the room he is old pictures of maanvi and manan together 'her in his arms .. smiling 'looking ineach others eyes old romantic cards' love letters all riped.. a thrown all over

"Manvi kya hai yeh sab" asks .. virat

"Partner he is back ' who vapass aagya hai mere life main" ' crys manvi

"What kab I saw him he is here in Chndigadh koi larki ki saath"'

"Kyun partner kyunnn I hate him jo who mere saath kara uski baad phir yahaan 'kyunn" crys manvi she hugs virat

"Don't worry partner main hoon na' sab theek kar doon ga promise ab bandriya ki jaise mat ro"

Manvi looks at him and elbows his ribs'."oye tum srk ya zahid khan ho ..kya nahin na tho yeh ..main hoon na ..shakla se chep lag the ho main bandriya nahin hoon" she says

"Thank god partner you are fine now 'but on a serious note manvi manan won't hurt you ever again" ' "iknow what he did and I will never allow you to go through anything like that 'if he even trys he will be sorry 'kyunki"

"When virat is here no fear understood ..chalo yaar ..forget all this lets fix your mood how about a movie and dinner huh"? Says virat

"Yes parnter what fun ' lets go to the new movie you pick" says manvi

"Ok I know vicky donor"'says virat

"Done partner chalo let me get ready"

A few min later they leave for the movies

Later that night at the dhaba

Manvi and virat were eating dinner

"Kya movie thi virat ' that was a good laugh" says manvi

"Maanvi I forgot my cell it in the car ill just come" says virat

Just then manan comes there with a few friends of his

"Oh hi maanvi how are you 'tum yahaan ..have you come with your di and jiju" says manan

Maanvi is lost for words shocked to see him there right infront of her

Virat notices this'. "Kamine damn it" and rushes back 'instead of creating a scene or fighting he

"Hey baby im back ' with the phone" says virat

Manvi is looking at him like what baby?'virat circles his hand around manvi's waist pulls her close to him and looks in her eyes

"After so long you still look just as beautiful" say manan

"True ' maanvi is the prettiest girl in the world '. Duniya main sab se pyaari yeh hi hai " says virat

"Babe yeh kaun hai" asks virat looking at manan '

"Hi Im manan 'maanvi's friend"..says manan

"Really friend that's werid maanvi never metioned you ' im Virat 'Virat Vahdera manvi's boyfriend says virat

Manan is taken back he didn't expect maanvi to be with some else since she love him so much

Virat shakes manan hand very hard

Manan is hurt to see manvi with another guy other then him

"Really maanvi never metioned me once' kyun maanvi..apne dost ko bhool gaye tum" says manan

One of manan's friends ..Tarun.yaar manan jhoot kyun bol ra hai dost nahin ..tum manvi ka ex boyfriend ho 'first love" says a guy

"Really now" say virat

"Haan im her x we were together for 3 yrs and first love can never be forgotten kyun '.and ..maanvi one should always discuss there past relationship with there current ones kyun" says manan

"No you are wrong manan I always told my girl that what ever happened in the past let it be

Because im only concerned about our future together right baby" says virat

Virat smiles at maanvi

"Yes of course my hero ' anyways it was nice meeting you manan virat im starving lets eat na "says maanvi

"Yes madam chalo" 'says virat

They sit down

The waiter comes

Manan is watching them at the table right next to them

"Let me order baby I know what my girl likes

Um ek panner thika masala, malali kofte,dal makni ..sarsaon ka sag maki di roti poori's and riata and pyass on the side oh and achar 'and do lassi" says virat

"All your favorites kyun madam" says virat

"Yes absolutely and for this you get a prize"

"And what is that" '" yahaan nahin baad main" ' she winks at him*

"But for now here" she blows a kiss

He just smiles

Suddenly from the table next to them manan says '

"Manvi yaad hai jab I had eaten 22 chillis just to impress you "

Manvi rolls her eyes

"Really 22 bas thats all you ate..punjab ka sher use zayaada kha sak tha hai " says virat

"Kyun tum iss zyada kha sak the ho"? Aska manan

"Yeah kar sak tha hoon" says virat

"Ok tho competition ho jayi" says manan

"Sure done" says virat

"Kya virat ..pagal ho kya ..there is no need jaane do na "says manvi

"No babe it will be fun relax..and cheer me on " says virat

A sardar j brings the chilles

"come on virat'.Virat ..virat. virat" says maanvi wraps her arms around his neck while he eats

This is really irritating manan

They start eating it

Viart has eaten 35 so far and manan 32

Finally manvi stops virat '

"Viart please bas karo you are sweating and all red hogaye na .. please stop "..

"Bhaiya get some mheeta and honey"

Manvi comes and sits near him whipes his sweat and feeds him honey first then gulab jamun

"How are you feeling ' your toung must be on fire na" ' says maanvi

Seeing all this manan is extremely irrated ' seeing the concern she had for virat wasn't a show or put on he could see the genuine concern for him '

"Im fine maanvi ..really now' please eat your food" says virat

"Good your fine na "she starts hitting him '

"Haan kya zarat thi sher bane haan" says manvi'

" Ouch arre kya baby mar kyun re hai ' Punjabi hoon .. khoon main hai ..yeh sab kar nahin " says viart

She sits down all upset

"Maanvi at least eat na" says virat

"No thank you mood nahin hai" says maanvi

"Acha baba sorry(holds his ears) ab please kahalo na" ' he feeds her she bites his finger

"Ouch yaar 'you bit me" says virat

"Haan agar tum sher ho tho main sheri na" laughs manvi

"Aye haye mere jagli bili" says virat

She hits him they eat dinner

Manan remembers there old moments when manvi use to joke like this with him

Suddenly dhol wale come and people start dancing

Viarta pulls manvi up and starts dancing with her '

Manvi is doing tumkas..latke jhatke..and viart dancing and teasing around her' he takes the dhol and starts playing it

Manvi dances around the dhol her foot slips virat catches her eye lock '

After dinner and dancing they leave

Manan leaves after them

When they get home in virats room

"Oye chep ..ghude(she trows pillows at him) ' yeh sab kar ne ki kya zarat thi" ' she starts hitting him '

"Tum aur main boyfriend girlfriend ..pagal ho ' kay kare tum partner

Manan kya socha hoga" says manvi

"Arrey partner stop hitting me.. suno meri baat ..my plan worked he is and was so jealous yaar seriously

"That was fun and if he ever comes infront again I will do the same" says viart

"Yaar partner agar di ko pata chal tho phir kya hoga"

"Chill partner kuch nahin hoga "

'at manan's house in his room

"This not done manvi'after3 yrs you forgot everything we had 'how can you .. just act if I wasn't even there"

"Kaise tum woh.. stupid idiot ki saath act kare thi 'damn it my mouth was on fire too ..and tum nooo" he puches his puching bag'maanvi ' you were and our only mine suddenly the punching bag comes back and hits him in the face ouch he falls to the floor

Ch 2 precap "maanvi tum aur viart ..why don't you both come to goa with us ..it will be fun" says manan

"Yeah sure why not ..kyun maanvi waise bhi ..we thought ki shaadi ki baad we'd go to goa for our honeymoon ..right ..why don't we check it out and see if we like if not ..Switzerland'kyun baby"

Says virat with a smirk on his face and arms around manvi

Both manan and manvi our shocked hearing virats words

any predictions guy?

I think virmaan will fall in love with each other..

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

Arre yaar!

Yeh bohut hi acha hai.

I really love jealousy, and Virat saying babe the whole

time makes me laugh! I was superb, hope you continue soon!

nice really nice👏

Originally posted by: misaki

nice really nice👏

lookin fr wrd 2 the next part

pls pm me wen u update😊

sure sweets i will pm u

Originally posted by: nis_n

Awesome continue soon...

Loved it ❤️Update Soon! 😊

Virat calling manvi babe was so sweet and haha jealous manan
Uff VirMan are really acting very amazing lagta hai a new start of a new love story and the precap was like wow Honeymoon???
The mirch part was amazing and manvi's genuine concern giving virat honey was awww
Please continue asap and please please please pm me wen u update ive sent a buddy request