Virmaan OS:Pareshaan part 2 updated

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BadtameezDil.

@BadtameezDil.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

At first i was really confused...but then 😊 AWSEM

loved it truly

pl pm me ur nxt update and accept my req pl

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

omg

it was fabuously

fantastic

i was damn scared wen maya came into the play

bt the way u ended it was fab

now ur calling me jaan

loved it

fab

cont soon

and pm me please

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guluna

@guluna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

wooow i dont knw hw to tell u hw amzing this story is i lovd every bit of it plz plz plz do continue

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Aisha

@Aisha202

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Awesome OS Gayathri!

Absolutely loved both parts, hadn't read the first part before, thank you for the PM!

I especially loved the second part. I didn't expect it to be a dream... nice surprise.
Unconsciously, Manvi was already in love with Virat, but the dream made her realize how she would feel if she lost him and he wasn't in her life anymore! I loved that hug she gave Virat after waking up and when she said: "You are calling me 'Jaan' from today" made my heart skip a beat!

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Damini

@VarunKiBiwi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Amazing!!! Thanks for the pm!!😊

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Veronica1504
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That was amazing! I absolutely loved it! Every word! I love your work Gayathri! I really want to write a nice long comment but I dont really have words. I was smiling throughout. And the ending, hayee.

'You are calling me Jaan today.' Was perfect! I loved how she was so insecure and her fear wasnt to die, but to see Virat with another girl. I loved it! Please PM me when you write more? Whatever it may be, another SS, or OS.

Thanks for the PM!

Agreed exactly my feelings ur os made me
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So cute and the dream i thought was true but aww the hug and the last line was jus hillarious

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Dii

@-princess-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

OMG i Loved it! ❤️ Plz Contiune i want to know virats reaction

love:

-princess-

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Janhvi

@ivhnaj

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

That was so nicely put together. It actually reminded me of Inception except the fact that the movie was much more dark than this os. Absolutely loved it please continue writing more os(s) because I truly wait for them :)

Edited by ivhnaj - 13 years ago