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love_zain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

wow that was a awesome update...plz update real soon

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

Ohkay, this was the best effing chapter ever !! This is my first comment in ages, I just couldn't resist ! The last line was effing awesome !! I love it love it luuuaaavvveee it !!

Absolutely in love with the story, with the characters Manvi Virat Dabboo and Tina, with the relationships they share and last but not the least the faint glimpses of Mannu's parents' life. Beautiful.

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

AWWW i loved virat's last few lines, they were so adorable omg seriously, pm me as always!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ndp102

@ndp102

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

Hey Elena! I came across this FF around May and it had me totally hooked!! I read a few chapters and then of course life got really hetic and I stopped visiting IF for a while. I had completely forgotten about your FF until about a week ago when I was on break and I heard the song "time of my life" and I instantly thought about the FF...My new guilty pleasure now is reading a few chapters of TTOML each day...& I just have to tell you I am soo obsessed with it! My roommate was trying to get me to read the 50 Shades of Grey the other day and I could not get through the first chapter without cringing...the writing is terrible!!! & I instead told her about TTOML and shes on chapter 4 and loves it (we both think it should be published Btw😊) Now enough of my blabbering and onto my review...First thing I am soo obessed with Virat's character!!!! Hes soo sexy, dangerous, mysterious, & that guy has one heck of a sense of humor!!! I love guys who have a bit of an edge..tt makes them so much more hotter😳!!! Manvi is the cutest/funniest character ever!! Dabbu and Tina are too cute! & Of course Rahul takes the cake for the biggest A-hole on the planet but after reading Ch.30 Beeji is a close second maybe even worse than Swamini Bua loll jk! I can ramble on forever about this but I just wanted to tell you that you are doing a fantastic job with this FF...from the plot to the characters everything is just plain brilliant!!! Oh and although I am not a huge Nicholas Sparks fan...I love some of the quotes you've used from his books! Sorry for the super long post but I had to let it out lol & Can't wait for the next update!!!

Also, I remember reading a few chapters of your other FF Humsafar a while back...is that still going on btw?

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oriyana

@oriyana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

OMG!! I Have so much to say about this Story!!

Me a new reader of your story Elena!! 😊

I must say this Story is full of GRACE!! All the characters, the story line is just too perfect!!

I Love Dark Romantic Stories!!

The complicated relationship is the most I love in this story! The subtle feelings, Maanvi not giving in easily to Virat's wishes, the rude behavior by Virat, understanding each other even though they don't know much about them!!

Best part was when Virat asked Maanvi's permission to kiss her! God! That shows his care, And Maanvi's giving in was obvious to the situation!

Start from then, the journey is too too Good!! Maanvi, not leaving Virat's side, always supporting him, believing in him all the way!! And Virat also standing by her side!! Perfect!!

Huh! I have so much to say about this story!! But unable to frame my words!!

-Oriyana

Edited by oriyana - 12 years ago

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Jaya

@screen22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

This was a great update especially the references to Megan fox and Harry potter, fancy both couples turning up at the house to introduce the other half, beeji was a bit harsh slapping maanvi, virat understanding and leaving but turning up the next minute in the bedroom, virat been a gentlemen and not taking it to the next level which could have happen then maanvi coming out with I love you, how will virat react will be interesting?

Thanks for the pm please continue

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Crazyvirmanfan

@Crazyvirmanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#977

Read chapter 28, 29 and 30 at once!! Loved it :)
Pm me when you next update :)

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#978

yeyyy!!!!!!!!...

he finally confessed!!!!!🥳

i feel like dancing!!!..throwin a party!!!!!...omg!!!

that was so gooDDD!!!

kinda expected Beeji to react the way she did!...

i cant ...seriously i cannot wait 2 read the next part!!!!

oh and thank you for takin the time to update it!

i love this story!..seein ur pm in my inbox alws brings a smile on my face!

thank you so much!..

Edited by misaki - 12 years ago

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sharma_vartika

@sharma_vartika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#979

read al d chaptrs in one go! U r Just Amazing I wondr y dont Indian Small screen productn houses hire writers lyk u...r dy afraid of d pinch of reality n les of drama u guys hold!!! m realy hapy I found u was tird of readin Arhi Ff xcpt sm...carry on! tc:-D