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Tina Saigal

@TIA.Tia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

Awesome twosome.. Manvi and Virat. I never expected Beeji to be so rude to Manvi about her parents.. Well that's how Grandparents are old fashioned and always jumping to conclusions.. Manvi's lines "Does Tina knows that she is engaged to you" made ROFL.. it was howlarious seriously how do you come up with such witty lines... and Yes finally Virat confessed his Love after such a long wait.. Calls for a party.. Awesome Babe.. Just awesome

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Cintila

@Cintila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

Wow !! Finally !!

Such a great chapter !!
Finally virat admitted being in love with her !! yayyy!!

But beeji shouldn't be so harsh with manvi !!

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vanilla.ice

@vanilla.ice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

Omg! Omg! Omg! Finally he said it!!! He loves her! Awww that was like the most sweetest thing ever and i loves how he just said it and that too in egoisitic virat vadhera style. Felt bad for manvi though when beeji slapped her, that was really harsh and what she said about her parents. Loved how virat came to comfort her. Next updates gonna be interesting, cant wait!

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Awestruck!
My "anything" plans crashed when I read this update!
"I thought the anything would be a mini holiday or like a day away' this line was the exact copy of one of "my" anythings 😆! But he is Mr. Unpredictable Vadera, I can't really predict what the next line would be while reading his dialogues. I love his character! Beeji actually sensed it, anyways her behavior was too harsh!
And is Manvi 19? I mean really? 😲! I thought her to be 22 or 23! Anyways chuck it!
And didn't anyone see him while he came into the balcony? I was actually terrified that Beeji would see him slap one or two 😛! I actually loved how Virat stopped himself crossing the line, he didn't get carried away! Now I'm really...really...reallyyy...interested to see how this is going to end!
P.S. This was actually a longer update! Loved it!

Edited by ITrustMyHeart - 12 years ago

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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

OMG that was freaking awesome..
You dialogues are so perfect that it all looks real , practical, magical...
Manvi-Dabbu convo was hilarious, the way any bro-sis duo would talk..
Beeji was being way too judgemental.
Virat...This guy.. I've no words to explain his character..He is different.
I loved the way how he restrained himself in the end...

We have another f**king problem Maanvi'. Her forehead creased in confusion. Her eyelashes lifted up to meet his piercing gaze.

'I am in love with you'.

*Faints*

Love, wow. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

Da last bit was too intense... Yes he truly truly luvs her else he wudn't hav cared for their limits... Hmmm it was all so real like dabbu planning to introduce tina n Manvi using da opportunity of introducing virat as well... Now virat's thoughts r confusing me a bit... He thought abt his insecurities n da trust issues... Den he said he wants to meet her family... Den in da end he says he luvs her... Ok i feel he wants to own her officially... Atleast engaged officially... He has changed quite a lot... Loved how again a flashback of Manvi's childhood wid his parents came in... I luv da transitions... Awesome update...😃 Thanx u so much for da pm!!

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#957

awesome update

finally he said it!!

excited for the next update

continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

till date i was a silent reader for this FF.now this update has made me to comment...u r amazing writer n also a a great great story..please continue...i read all ur updates at weekend when i am bored n seriously i guess i have read around '10 - 15 times...but never get over ur story...simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#959

A wonderful surprise, you finally got round to updating! Brilliant update btw!

It's amazing how you make us feel the emotions of the characters through your writing. The last part was absolutely beautiful; loved their brief moment of passion as they gave into each other. They should get married; then they can go the whole way.. 😆 But I guess Virat doesn't believe in marriage... now what can change his mind? I hope he does eventually...

He finally said it! :) Awesome, can't wait to see where the story will go from here onwards.

Thoroughly enjoyed this part Elena! :)

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leafmaria

@leafmaria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#960

Yes you updated. This update is by far the best, yet. I really don't understand dubu, I mean why does he not see that Virat has changed since Maanvi came in his life, and Maanvi is happy with Virat. He should have done something when Beiji took Maanvi to the kitchen. Loved how Maanvi was in a sleepy mood on the balcony, and Virat came on the right time to catch her. Ha, Virat finally lost his control. The romantic moment was perfect. Yes Virat is love with Maanvi, and he confessed. I can't wait to find out Maanvi's reaction to the confession. I just hope that Beiji does not decide to come and check on Maanvi. Update whenever you have the time, and thanks for the PM. This FF is one of the best I am reading currently.

-Maria

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