VIRMAN FF: TTOML #31- 2nd thread link: Pg 1 - Page 97

Ok so I haven't commented on your post in so long it feels so disoriented. But your work never seems to fail and always keeps the readers on their toes :) love love love!

I loved this!! i really don't know what to say or how to say it!!

just WoW... you are so talented, it amazes me!! get it published girly!!!

Update soon... pleaseee

-Luv Pari!!

elenaaa!!!! i just luv ure each and every update..im sooo sorry for always being so late to comment but ure each chapter is just so superb and amazingly written that i cant help but admire u more nd more for ure fabulous writing.. i luved the deal between dabbu and maanvi as me and my bro usually do favours in return for each other too..nd maanvis thoughts about how her bringing a freind that was a boy wudnt be as bad as dabbu and his fiance..nd then beejis over reaction to the whole matter too...this is one of the best things about ure ff that we can relate sum of the situations so well with reality..i think that beejis reaction will just add more spice to the story and although most people would hate me for this i luved her reaction cuz the stories just getting more and more interesting..

viraats insecurities regarding maanvi nd him tryin to control himself was just such good touches that u mentioned in the update..i luv the way u add the details in to make the whole story flow so smoothly..

so maanvis dad and her beeji had sum differences..nd beeji is not so happy with maanvi following her dads footsteps..interesting..

the last line was the best dialogue of the update for me..im sooo excited to see virats reaction to maanvis statement..pleease update soon becuz u have sum eager readers...

p.s luved the longer update wish all ure updates are just as long😉 nd i see the uni room also has famous fairylights and candles..lol...waiting for humsafr update nd if this comment has many errors then please forgive me cuz i di not prrof read it..im not sure if it even makes sense nd if u even managed to read it all;)