VIRMAN OS: Pakoras

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Saraa :)

@SmileySara

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

aww so cute! loved it!

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Juhi Mokal

@-Juhi.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Awwwhh !!!! That was superrr cute and superrr adorable !!

OMG the scene will be so cute if it actually happens in the show...

😆 imagine VirMan 😍

Lovely OS Elena !! Do write more on VirMan 👏

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: JuhiDoll
Awwwhh !!!! That was superrr cute and superrr adorable !!
OMG the scene will be so cute if it actually happens in the show...
😆 imagine VirMan 😍
Lovely OS Elena !! Do write more on VirMan 👏

Thanks😃 That would be too good. Can't wait for their love track to start. 😉

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awww that was soo romantic and sweet plz contiue nd pm me

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Alice in wonderland ;)

@wanderlust09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

aawww...dat wz supeer duper cute yaar...luvd it..🤗👏

mr n mrs virat sing vadhera...such an adorable lively couple..❤️

luvd viren n jeevikaz comment at da end...😳

cant wait 4 their luvstory 2 start...till den pls do keep showerin us wid such cute virmalicious os n ff s...😍.wud luv 2 read more frm ya elena...

n do pm me weneva u pendwn ur imaginationz...😊

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

omg ...luved it a lottt

it was very cute and beautiful

u write very welll yaar

please cont wid ur works and pm me wen u write next

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

AWWW tht was soo damn cute!

u shud wrte more stuff like this!

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hey Elena!

This is the first time I've come across your writing and I absolutely loved it!
Love the way you wrote it and the dialogues were awesome! ❤️

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Safina

@miss_choxz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

amazing shot...written perfectly

if u write more please do pm me

Edited by miss_precious - 13 years ago

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Loved it there were few dialogues in which i couldnt stop laughing in especially this one...
"he said.' Aur yeh!' he said, looking at the large tray of pakoras sitting besides her. 'Ek din pakora ban jao gee'.
'Woh to mein ban gaye he, thanks to you',"
Hillarious i can imagine virman's cute nok jhoks after marriage and virika spying and adoring their younder siblings aww this was great loved it

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