VIRMAN OS: Pakoras - Page 3

Originally posted by: Aisha202

Hey Elena!

This is the first time I've come across your writing and I absolutely loved it!
Love the way you wrote it and the dialogues were awesome! ❤️

Originally posted by: luvya4ever

awww... that was super adorable... and so totally believable!!! I can totally see manvi eating an entire plate of pakoras like that 😆... and now I'm hungry 😛

great job hun!!! 👏

Originally posted by: hs7071

Loved it there were few dialogues in which i couldnt stop laughing in especially this one...
"he said.' Aur yeh!' he said, looking at the large tray of pakoras sitting besides her. 'Ek din pakora ban jao gee'.
'Woh to mein ban gaye he, thanks to you',"
Hillarious i can imagine virman's cute nok jhoks after marriage and virika spying and adoring their younder siblings aww this was great loved it

Very nice OS, I love ur imagination yaar... Now I wanna eat pakoras...

manvi s always cute...

supercute
baby will have cmpton for tantrums hahah
loved it

👏👏it is awsm superb...mindblowing👏👏...i just luved it...

cute!...

Such a cute OS! Loved how she literally had all that food. You should continue with more food OS(s). I adore how you portray their chemistry. It fits their unique style of loving each other!