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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting update
loved it
continue soon and do pm me!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy its soo reat one
i like it
Continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
OMg Dr manan Buaji's Son And Dead And Manvi Wearing A White Saree And Has. A Kid Dont Tel Me That Dr Manan Is Manvi's Husband and ayush is their kid
So This Reminds Me Of Babul The Film I Hope Dadaji's Main Motive Of Calling Virat there Is His Marriage Wiv Manvi
But Im Dying to see manvi's reaction
And u kno wat updte soon not after months and months
And do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5!
New Begining:

Manvi was shocked to see him..standing in front of her , her chep, her friend, her partner'she dint know what to do??she felt like laughing seeing him here after 5 years, crying thinking abt the times she has thought abt him or wanted him more than anyone in her life'hw she missed him 'and at this moment all she wanted was to hug him tightly never letting him go away from her nd to tell him everything'every second of her life when he was not here'every ounce of pain she has undergone'every moment of her life which she wished was with him'bt all she could do was stand there as if she has been nailed to the ground and look at him nd control her tears..he looked the same, his eyes as usual was hiding something ,his face looked jus exactly the same handsome! nd his hands were in his pocket that means he was nervous..she couldn't help bt smile seeing him nd she took a step forward to go nd hug him.

Arrey bhai tum abhi tak yahi khadi ho??? Asked an excited Viren coming from the lawn nd it bought Manvi back to reality nd she looked up to see Virat looking at her oddly'she took the step back nd looked away praying to all the gods at once that with some miracle he hasn't seen the tears nd dint notice the step she took towards him..

Manvi..kaisi ho??asked jiju nd manvi looked upto see Jiju looking at her worried nd Virat looking at his brother then at her with confusion etched on his face bt other than that he looked okay'she smiled went forward nd hugged her jiju'

Main bilkul teek hoon jiju aur maa bhi'I said trying to act normal nd jij smiled taking in what she has told him..

Manvi tum Virat se mili??Asked jij looking from Virat to her'she smiled nd looked at Virat who looked at her with an indifferent expression nd noded his head which broke her heart again but why? Was she expecting something else??What did she expect from him that he will hug her nd confess his undying love for her that he realized after he left nd all these years he has been waiting for this moment to meet her???she laughed a miserable laugh at her thoughts nd reminded her thoughts that he was not Manvi nd he dint feel anything for her!!suddenly there was a soft touch on her hand which send a chill through her entire body nd she was back to earth bt was surprised to see Virat standing jus inches away from her looking at her oddly nd then jus shrugged his shoulder nd followed Viren jij inside the house..nd she lifted her hand nd touched it where his hands accidently touched her which she could almost feel now nd she smiled ..

Finally he is back to where he belongs bt that's not with u Manvi bt with his family nd remember the promise u made to urself he is not gonne effect u ,there is no place in ur life for him..he doesn't mean a thing to you'Manvi said to herself bt with each word that came out of her mouth she could feel the pain it was if some one was pricking on a wound with a needle that too a hot one nd she let those tears fall freely from her eyes!!

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Swamini when reached the farm house, as expected her entire family was there both chaudhries nd Vadhera's bt Viren nd Virat was nt there'Everyone was excited to meet Virat bt she was excited a bit more than anyone nd was eagerly waiting for his arrival'.Dadaji was sitting on the sofa reading newspaper for the entire family bt for swamini she could understand what was going on in her father's mind, she could see his eyes full of guilt nd regret'She jus went and sat near her father nd held his hands in both her hands , jus pressed it lightly nd smiled at him..this is one of the thing she has learnt from Manvi..comforting the other without uttering a word!!

Jeevika beta zara phone karke dekho Viren ko, ki wo kahan pahunchi??said Vanshika for the 10th time in a min nd Swamini understood what was going in vanshika's mind..she is going to meet her son after 5 yrs nd who will understand it better than Swamini what it is for a mother to wait for his son'Memories of Manan came to her mind as usual with the pain of loss..

Virenji ke phone busy aarahi hai Maa'Shayad wo kisi aur se baat kar rahi hai??Jeevika said

Kya??Iska matlab wo abhi tak wahan se nikle nahi hai kya??Asked Vanshika in a concerned voice nd then all of a sudden a grave expression took over her face nd she sat down on the sofa with tears in her eyes.

Ya phir Virat iss baar bhi nahi aayi hogi..she said in tears nd Swamini felt Dadaji stiffen 'nd Kadambari, Jeevika, Inder nd all others looking worried nd she understood jus like her it was everyone's fear that nobody conveyed with each other What if Virat dint come???

Maa..ye dekhiye'Swamini heard Viren say nd felt like she jus got what she was searching for all these years..like this was the moment nd she looked upto see Virat hugging Vanshika nd noticed that everyone was in tears, Kadambri was teasing him saying he looked like some actor nd Swamini cant agree more Virat looked like one nd he jus smiled nd hugged everyone bt something was missing in his eyes ??nd her eyes immediately searched for one face among the family nd she saw her 'Manvi standing near the door taking in everything with tears in her eyes nd something else that she had seen in her eyes all these yrs Pain bt this time she looked like she was struggling to stop her tears or stand there nd when looked properly Swamini saw she was leaning on to the Door'nd the motherly instinct took over her nd she was about to go to Manvi that she noticed Manvi's eyes were only for Virat she was looking at him longingly???nd suddenly a past memory flashed in Swamini's eyes..

Agar wo aise bewakoofi karengi tho hum kya kar sakthi hai?Shayad wahi uski galti ki saza ho??wahi uski kismet 'she knows evn while speaking that what she saying was wrong bt She was Swamini Singh vadhera aur wo galti nahi karti she thought proudly and looked at Viren who was looking at me as if he had seen me for the very first time with hurt nd Anger in his eyes nd it somehw pained me to see anger in his eyes that too for me nd then what shocked nd surprised Swamini was when she looked at Manvi who have left her Di's side and taken a step forward her eyes burning with anger nd hatred she looked as if she will explode nw nd it scared Swamini a bit to see that nd it confused her more?Why was she reacting this way??

Nw she is getting a small picture of why she reacted that way!!Swamini thought!

Bua?? Nd Swamini saw Virat looking at her nd smiling she jus hugged him tightly,bcoz she knows some where that he will bring back everything to this family, nd Manvi'She has waited so long to meet him again'

Maa'a hand which was covered fully with blood was asking her to come near nd she did exactly that, bt it was a mistake she shouldn't have come forward bcoz she was nt able to face it'.he was covered fully with blood there were deep nd long wounds in his body nd blood was oozing out of it as if it was jus water..as if it was not taking breath away from her only child, as if it was not giving him deathly pain which was evident in every groan nd she knows in that moment she is gonne lose her child.

Jiske saath Zindagi bita kar abhi tak mann nahi bara hai, jiske mooh se Maa shabd sun kar abhi tak mann nahi bara hai..wo jaane waali use chod kar 'Nahi..she was nt ready to accept her faith'god cant be this cruel right??he jus gave back her only child jus months before nd nw god cant jus taking him back in an accident'No he cant!!

Manan main yahi hoon beta tumhe kuch nahi hoga'bass Dr's ko tumara ilaaj karne de'I pleaded to him..bt he was nt listening,his hands which was fully covered in blood he lifted it with immense pain which tore my heart nd kept in on my hand nd eagerly holded it'.bt he was trying to say something bt everytime he opened his mouth a huge amt of blood is the only thing that came out..

Ma'nvi'.Vi'.he was struggling nd seeing him in this condition evn I was bt the Dr near by said''the patient is trying to say something to u Mam''bt I dint listen to him or anyone'

Shhh Manan kuch nahi hoga beta'I cried knowing my self that ab kuch naahi ho sakta'.bt he holded my hand more tightly nd something wet fell on my hand bt I dint look what it is, expecting it to be blood..

Maa.. ye de'.denaa''.he said nd I could almost feel the breath being taken out of his body nd his hand became rigid nd his eyes rolled back'bt b4 he took he his laast breath he holded my hand more tightly nd said'

VIRATTT'''.

Maa'Nani'Maa..Badi Maa..Swamini Beta'she heard so many voices bt none of them was his, her son Manan..she knows he has not here, he was gone, to a place which was far aaway from her, leaving her alone with a huge responsibility'she slowly opened her eyes to see lots of concerned faces looking at her nd something wet fell on my face nd I ,looked upto see Manvi in whose lap my head was resting , was crying nd I tried to get up nd talk to her bt she shushed me..

Shhh kuch nahi bologi aap bass apne kamre main jaogi aur Aaram karogi aapko meri kasam hai Maa'she said with teary eyes bt sternly nd swamini jus noded nd searched for Virat nd saw him looking at Manvi in confusion, then at me , then Ayush who was sitting near by nd was holding my hand ,then again at Manvi nd something like horror passed through his face as if he has jus nw understood something horrible nd he looked stunned for a moment that for a brief second Swamini thought he was gonne ask something bt then he jus turned away nd went out side the door!!

As Viren was taking Swamini to her room she saw Manvi's eyes searching for someone in that room, for him, for Virat nd automatically Swamini's hand went to the pendant on her neck nd holded it tightly nt the locket bt the key that was hanging on it!the last thing that fell from the limp hands of her son!

It was time to dig some past, It was time to break some secret, Finally it was time to fulfill Manan's last wish nd give Virat what is his???nd Swamini Singh Vadhera was determined to fulfill everything..every last wish of her son!!

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Pls R & R😊

Edited by luvarjun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
cant wait for next part and please please update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awww waiting for next part... it was so emotional... the plot is getting gripping... update soon please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg...plz plz update soon i cnt wait 4 d nxt part
its jst osum...
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awesome update... And is Ayush Virat's child.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting!!waiting for the next uodate
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update... Really liking da way past is being revealed slow n steady... Da story being very emotional n intense however i can see a ray of hope 4 virman... Nice1 update soon, n also ur other story shaadi, i'm so much liking it... Thanx 4 da pm:)

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