VirMan FF!You Were The One:)) Updtd part8 pg22!

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Hello peeps😊this is my new VirMan FF You Were The One but this story will be from every charecters POV not jus VirMan's!Pls do read nd if U like it pls press the Like button!

" You Were The One"

Flashback:Red.

Present:Black.

Virat Singh Vadhera:

Main kabhi kisi se nahi darti hoon, chaahe wo mere kamyabiho ya phir meri Haar. lekin aaj pata nahi meri mann main itne gabrahat kyun horahi, aise kyun lag raha hai ki main yahan aakar galti kar rahi hoon.Shayad Galti hi kar rahi hoon 5 saal baad apne ghar lautthe hue..pata nahi inn 5 saalon main yahan kya kya badla hoga Virat thought sadly as his car entered the huge gate of his family house,his home' Vadhera Mansion'

5 years back:

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki maine aapki baat nahi maani aur ek lawyer nahi bani.!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki main apne sapna poora karna chahta tha ek singer banna chahta tha!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki maine apne dosthon aur pyaar bar baroza kartha tha!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki main apne nahi kisi aur desh US par apne sapna poora karna chaha aur kaafi hadh tak kiya bhi!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki main apne sapne poore hone ki khushi main apne dosthon aur pyaar ki badalthe rang nahi dekh paii!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki kuch paise aur fame keliye mere dosthone mere saath chod diya!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki mere pyaar ne mujhse mera sab kuch cheenliya mere music, mere friends, mere fame sab kuch, aur aaj bhi main uss se pyaar karthi hoon!

Haan main ek LOOSER hoon kyunki main ek hare hue insane ki tarah aap ke haar taunt sah kar iss kar ghar main rahti hoon!!!Lekin abb aur nahi main jaarahi hoon iss ghar ko chodkar 'Saare rishtey chodkar apne nayi manzil doondne!!He souted at his Dadaji!!!!

Tum phir se wahi galti daura rahi ho Virat!Kuch nahi kar sakte tum..phir se haar kar laut auge yaha par..phir se sab kuch ko kar..ek haaare hue insane kabhi jeet nahi sakti Virat kabhi nahi!his dadaji said to him in his calm nd composed voice!

Haha haha tho phir dadaji aap bhi kabhi jeet nahi paugi kyunki bale hi aap world ke best lawyer ho!Chandigrah aapke mutti main ho!ya phir aapko jitna chahe utna award mil jaaye!Lekin ek Dadaji ke roop main app meri aankhon main humesha ek Haare hue insaan hi honge!!!!!!!!!

Virat could hear each nd every word he had said to his dadaji nd what his dadaji had said to him from this very same hall 5 years back as if an echo it boomed his ears nd it burned his eyes, he had missed his family,his mom ,his bhai nd everyone nd mostly the girl who had given him the inner strength or power to fight this world!

Virat uss darwaze ke bahar kadam rakhne hi waale the ki'koi aakar usse peeche se hug kiya 'Virat'Uski maa lekin wo jaanti thi ki main unki rokne se nahi rukhegi issliye unone mujhe nahi roka bass ye kehdiya ki apne dyan rakhna with teary eyes nd he saw the same unspoken concern in his chachu nd chachi's eyes nd he left the vadhera mansion'

'Virat Virat'.Aree yaar rukh jao na aise kahan baagi jaaa rahi ho Chep' he heard manvi coming behind him calling for him. Aur wo bilkul bhi uski bakwaas sunne ki mood main nahi tha..ek tho usne chachu ki help karne ka soch kar ye sab shuru kiya tha aur ab main ghar chodkar jaa rahi pata nahi kaha aur kya karenge aaj bhai bhi nahi hai yaha par..pata nahi wo kya sochengi jab wo HM se laut aayenge tab!he mumbled to himself!

Arre yaar kya badbada rahi ho???Manvi again asked him bt this time Virat was in no mood nd was abt to turn around nd give her a piece of mind'when he saw her standing in front of him holding something nd unshed tears in her eyes which surprised him a little bcoz he had seen her cry for her di,dabbu,bg,evn his chachu bt for him..

Ye lo'ye apne paas rakhlo'she gave something to me and I extended my hand without evn thinking nd she kept something in my hand and said

Ye bagwaan ka dhaga hai'ye meri di ne mujhe diya tha meri raksha keliya'ab tum raklo nd she smiled with tears in her eyes nd I was again surprised Manvi apne di ke diya hua cheez mujhe de rahi he thought bt dint say it a loud nd then she looked straight into my eyes and said'

'Aaj tum yahan se aise ja rahi ho virat lekin main yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon ek din tum yahan wapas aoge apne pariwaar ke paas pure izzat aur kamyabi ke saat khud dadaji tumhe bulaoge yaha par pyaar se"nd she ran away from there bt Virat stood there were she left him fuming with anger How dare she'meri pariwaar ke baaare main bolti hai'this was his thought at that time..

Yahi lawn thi jahan Manvi ne mujhe ek naya rasta dikhaya tha bale hi uss waqt mujhe uski baat se gussa aayi ho lekin yahan se jaane ke baad aur aaj ke beech main aisa ek din nahi hai jab uski baat maine nahi socha ho 'har uss struggling time par ya phir success ke time par'aur wo samay jab bhi main ghaana ghane keliye recording studio main jaathi hai tab'. har waqt har lamhe yahi baaat ko apni himmat banakar jiya hai maine..

Aur aaj Viart Singh Vadhera world ke no.1 singers main se ek hai jisse sirf log uski awaaz se pehchante hai chehre se nahi!!

Aur aaj iss ghar main'. apne ghar main'apne logon ke beech wapas aayi hai Izzat se aur kamyab ho kar khud Dadaji ke bulane par apne ghar apne pariwaar ke paas 5 saal baad!

Thats all for today wooohh😆If u all like it then pls press the like button nd drop ur comments what ever it is i dont mind Chappals nd Eggs also bt pls give ur honest replies!!!

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And if anyone want me to continue this story nd want to know what happnd to other Vadhera's in these 5 yrs??? why Virat havent met anyone till nw though he have passed through the main hall nd evn reached the garden????And mainly what happnd to Manvi??😉 then pls send me a Budd req...nd i will PM me u when i update the next part😆

Part2: Pg 6
Part3: Pg 8
Part4: Pg 10
Part5: Pg 12
Part6: Pg 15
Part7:Pg 19
Part8: Pg 22
Edited by luvarjun - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow really intresting great concept i lovd it
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Thanks for the PM, it was indeed a awesome beginning for your FF. Loved every line that described Virat's pain when he spoke to Dadaji. His definition of looser, aww it was so heart wreaking and painful. Could literally imagine the scene. You definitely need to continue and can't wait to know what happen in the 5 years...
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awseome start dear..plz continue soon n add me to pm list plz.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PUHLEASSEEE CONTINUE omg loved it plz pm me when u do loved it
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very interesting dear.. waiting for next part.. sending buddy request.. pm me when you update...
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Great concept:) pls pm me.
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Nice! Plz pm me wen u update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue soon...hope u r not planning a triangle for virman...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So interesting yaar,, what happened to maanvi,,??? continue soon please, hope maanvi is waiting for virat..😉
thanks for the PM😊

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