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Posted: 13 years ago
omg read all of it pm me eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
cant wait 4 next
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow this is so emotional u made me cry yr the way portrayed every emotion is so perfect amazing story n thank u for pm me this amazing story😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh this is so interesting. keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww nice story...so touching ...

swamini is gonna unite Virat n manvi...sounds nice

loved swamini bua in your story...

loved all ur updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update👏, so ayush is virat's son...
confusing, expalin soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god
u came up so beautifully
loved it a lott
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Posted: 13 years ago
nic writting kindly update soon
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Part 6
The Truth!!!
As the cold water from the shower touched his body it was as if it has taken away the cover or Mask he was wearing all day'..When meeting his family , Dadaji nd others all the while he was pretending, trying to act as if nothing has changed or what ever has changed doesn't effect him!!Hw he wished it was true nd it dint effect him'bt like every mask this has also gotten off nd the only things left was lots of complaints,Questions, pain,hurt nd confusion in Virat Singh Vadhera's life!!Manvi! Manvi! Ws the only thought in his mind nw'she got married nd that too to Manan nd has a kid bt Manan passed away leaving her nd Ayush all alone this was what his bhai had said to him when he asked abt Bua and Manvi relation nd nw all he wanted to do was scream nd acuse that god for all these happenings bcoz he has given him this pain bt why????

He looked up as if he could see the god, bt only to see the ceiling nd the heavy pour of water from the shower which was giving him nd his eyes a kind of slow pain which was soothing in a way nd he shouted

Kyun agar yahi sab karna tho kyun??he asked falling on his knees bt still looking up stubbornly without closing his eyes!

Kyun uskeliye mere dil main jagah banaya, jab wo mere te hi nahi??Kyun har mushkil waqt par uske hasta hua chehra dikhaya,jab wo hassi mere liye the hi nahi??Kyun har khushi ke moke usike saath baatne ki kwaish di, jab mere kushi uske hai hi nahi??Kyun har lamha mere dil uskeliye dhadkta tha, jab uske dil kisi aur keliye the??Kyun har din ke shuruwat aur Andh usiki kiyi hui baton se ki, jab wo bathein uskeliyen kuch te hi nahi??Kyun main yahan wapas aayi, jab meri maksat mere the hi nahi????Aur MAIN USSE KYUN PYAAR KARTHI HOON,JAB WO KISI AUR SE PYAAR KARTI HAI???? kyun??

Viraat?? Virat?? Tum andar ho na??Virat heard concerned voice of his brother ,who probably was knocking on the door of his room, Virat quickly stood up nd called out controlling his voice from breaking down'

Yes bhai main abhi aayi bass dho min!! Virat quickly changed his clothes then went nd opened the door to see his brother looking at him with a confused nd concerned expression..

Virat tum teekh tho haina??pata hain main kitni der se knock kar rahi thi??Aur main'

Wo bhai main naha rahi thi..After the long flight nd drive I was pretty much down u know..i said as casually nd coolly as possible with a fake smile'nd viren bhai noded bt the look in his eyes said that the lawyer vadhera is nt completely convinced bt Virat was in no mood for that nd jus wanted to be alone bt he dint want to hurt his family again by jus leaving this place'he have to be here atleast for 2 days nd then he will go back nd will never come back'he has already decided'

Its okayVirat tum rest karlo, main tumhe dinner tak bula lunga'wo tho main bass tumse ye poochne aayi thi ki kya tum meri aur badi maa ke saath bahar aana chahthi ho?? bt'Virat dint let viren complete his sentence nd said..

No..main nahi aana..uh I mean u know im tired'.i tried to cover my uneasiness nd rude behavior with the same lame excuse bt bhai jus nodded and said

Its okay, I will go with badi maa..u take rest!! bhai said smiling sweetly at me nd very softly touching my cheek as if to ensure that im really here nd I felt like crying that moment.. so I jus steppedback nd smiled at bhai casually he too smiled nd left!!!i locked the door nd literally fell on the bed!!

I felt like im cheating someone with my feelings for Manvi'.nd some one deep inside my heart echoed the same words to me yes u are cheating ur brother who is dead'I jus sat on the bed shaking my head in a NO nd I saw someone who looked exactly like me standing there wearing a wite shirt'may be I have lost it nd I have started seeing things I thought in my mind..

Yes Virat You are cheating ur self nd Manvi by not confessing ur love,ur feelings to her nd not taking away her pain nd Misery said my white shirted copy nd I was abt to reply when I heard some other voice.

Yes u are cheating ur family nd moreover ur dead brother by having feelings in ur mind for his widowed wife said some one nd I turned the other way nd saw my self leaning on the door which I have closed jus minutes b4 in a black shirt

I blinked my eyes several times nd looked at both my forms who was staring at me one with a sweet smile nd other with wicked sort of look'

Don't listen to him Virat'u are doing nothing wrong'u have loved her evn b4 Manan nd that too whole heartedly nd she has every right to know abt ur feelings..

Acha tho socho Manvi kya sochegi tumare bare main jab use pata chale ga ki uski dosth uske bare kya sochthi hai

Nahi Virat yaad karo jab tum iss ghar ko chod rahi thi tab usine tumhe hosla diya tha apne kismet ko pane ki, usse aasmane ki..wo tumhe kabhi galat nahi samjegi..

Ek dosth ki hum dardi ko itne ghande nazariye se dekha huh ye jaan ne ke baad tho wo tumhara shakkal bhi dekhna pasand nahi karogi..

Jab tum ne aaj subah use dekha tho tumne ek pal keliye hi sahi par uski aankhon main tumare liye pyar mehsoos kiya haina

Ek Dosth ki tumare taraf ki taras ko tum pyaar ka naam dogi Virat

Iski baat matt suno Virat bass apne dil ki suno

Uss dil ki jo tumhe itna dard de rahi hai

Nahi Virat ye sach nahi hai

Yahi Sach hai'Jhoot' Sach..Jhoot'

Basss!!!! Virat screamed closing his eyes tightly nd shutting his ears with his two hands as if to stop seeing his inner souls nd nt to hear their banter , who was driving him mad with his own thoughts.

He slowly opened his eyes when he couldn't hear any voices nd looked around his room in fear of seeing them again bt was relieved to see the empty room looking back at him!!

He sighed nd sat back on the bed again, closed his eyes more confused than before!

***********************Trip to the Manan hospital Chandigrah was smooth nd silent..thats why I insisted on taking Viren with me nt Manvi bcoz im sure she would have asked a hundred question abt my visit after almost an year when I have refused to enter this hospital several times b4 that's why I lied to Manvi abt spending time alone with Viren nd she agreed immediately nd dint put up a fuss which was shocking bt she seemed lost in her own thoughts nd that's nt new bt this time it looked as if something was burning her alive bt what?? Swamini have her guess bt doesn't want to bring that thought up!

Mam hum pahoonch gayi'said the ward boy in his blue custom uniform nd it bought me back from my reverie , I looked up nd saw Viren looking at me confused bt dint ask anything nd i smiled at my first son who understands me more than any one nd jus ruffled his hair with all the love..

Viren tum pls restroom main wait karogi..hum bass hamara kaam katam kar kar aathi hai'.he looked concerned nd looked like wanted to say something bt then he is my Viren he jus smiled nd indicated with his hand to call him if needed nd he left'I slowly opened the cabin..my heart beating at a fast rate nd I could feel as if someone has jus dropped something heavy in my stomach that I started feeling Dizzy nd uneasy bt got hold on the door handle b4 faalling down or calling back Viren nd closed my eyes

Bass Manan bahut hogayaa ab aur kitna kaam karoge'I asked my son my Manan entering his cabin!

U promised me nd Manvi that today we will go out in the evening nd here u are its already 5 PM manan Vadhera'.i scolded him or tried to do so will be apt bcoz if the person whom u were scolding was looking at u with the sweetest smile on his lips'hw can anyone scold someone who has an angelic smile like that I thought with all my motherly love for my only child!!

Maa bass two more patient then I will be free nd we will go out'he said in his sweet voice..my boyy I thought proudly who never sacrifices his work for his family or viceversa'

Pakka??? Or will u again ask me to wait for another 2mins??I asked bcoz I wanted to hear him call me Maa once again bcoz when ever he calls me Maa it feels like im the happiest person on earth..

Pakkka Promise Maa..nd he laughed shaking his head..

Could still hear that beautiful laugh in this room which was filled with Dust nd Memories nt with Files nd Special Aroma of my Manan'a lone tear escaped my eyes with the memories of my only son bt I jus reminded myself sternly I was here to fulfill my sons last wish n im nt going to get weak here I promised myself nd took few steps towards the locker nd removed my pendant slowly nd opened the locker with the key nd I was not that surprised to see a blue file nd a diary'a part of me was expecting something like this only!!

Swamini touched the dairy nd the file, could feel or sense Manan's touch there nd all she wanted nw was to open that Dairy nd read what is written there nd she almost opened the cover eagerly ..

Vi..raaat ko de de'.naaa'..

My hands automatically stopped myself from opening it further nd kept it inside my hand bag nd left the room without glancing back'.Swamini knows what she was going to do will spoil everything for her'her dream family with her Daughter like Daughter in law Manvi nd her beautiful child Ayush!

Badi Maa'A sweet voice stopped her tracks nd she wiped her eyes nd looked around to see that she has already reached outside the hospital without calling Viren ,she was gonne apologize to him when as usual he jus smiled nd holded my hands in a reassuring way!!

Farm house felt like a foreign place for Swamini as she made her way towards Virats Room aimlessly, her body ached nd her mind was screaming at her to stop nd go back nt to ruin her beautiful dream her family!!Bt she was determined and knocked the door twice nd again a no. of times bt no response!!Swamini was about to go back when the door opened nd there stood a dishelved Virat who was looking at me with something nd was trying to hide his pain nd the selfish part in Swamini's body died then nd there, she dint want Virat to suffer jus like Manvi, he had every right to know the truth!!

She was nt in a state to talk to Virat so jus did what she was here for and wordlessly handed him Manan's dairy nd fulfilled her son's last wish'leaving a stunned nd confused Virat behind, she started moving forward .she could sense all the walls that's she has made inside her mind and heart for the sake of her family falling one by one nd hidden thoughts coming in front of her eyes THE TRUTH abt her daughter which she knows from the very begening was dancing in front her eyes !

4 yrs before Manvi who was undergoing treatment in Mumbai for cancer wouldn't be able consume a baby at that time nd The truth that Ayush is nt Manvi's Child nd she was nt married to Manan ??was open to her eyes from the begning bt she has kept it closed under the fake pretendance of her family bt nw she dint need to pretend bcoz evn though she has not opened that diary she knows that's what lies inside!!

She reached her room nd closed it with Relief of fulfilling her promise, a broken heart, and the unbearable loneliness that was going to be part of her life from nw on!!

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I know no VirMan interaction bt believe me after the next upadate its gonne be full of VirMan😊!!Pls R&R!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW,...finally she is not married to manan..Wana virman more and plz update asap :) thanx for the PM

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