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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 woww just read all parts, u are a brilliant writer, plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz plz plz plz update soon... U've left it at such an amazing point yaar... I want to noe wat nxt... Plz jaldi karo na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg yaarrr wat do i say i dont know u r a fab writer the way u have written the story is relly beautifull i am waiting for virat to know the truth please cont soon PLEASE PM ME i always miss ur fab update without ur pm u r a ausumn writer just a great piece of work
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 7!!

He was confused as to why Bua was standing in front of his door bt he was shocked to see her tear stricken face nd was abt to say something when she wordlessly handed him a book nd then went from there'nw he was more than confused..he stood there for sometimes expecting something to happn bt nothing so he went inside nd was abt to open the book when an envelope fell from the book nd he took it nd was abt to keep it back when saw his name written on it ,was going to open it when he heard sound of her, Manvi..nd he kept the book under the pillow

Ayush stop running..its time to go to ur bed'nw nw be a good boy Ayush'her voice was getting closer by making his heart beat rise at a new level..

Na mumma I will sleep with CP today..Ayush said..

CP?? Who CP??? Ayush stop it muma cant run nw!..her voice was so close that it looked as if she was in front of him ..suddenly there was something on his leg nd nd he look down to see it was nt something rather someone, Ayush was standing behind him holding his leg..

CP pls main aapke saath so sakthi hoon..he asked in his baby voice awww so cute bt then he looked around to see this CP bt couldn't find anyone else other than him?was he calling me CP? He asked himself nd then suddenly there was a scream nd then

AYUSHHH'manvi came running nd then Ayush pushed me or Manvi tripped whatever we ended up falling on same bed that too on top of each other..i opened my eyes slowly nd saw a whole amt of hair on my face..i slowly moved the hair back nd saw her beautiful face which has haunted him every second of this 5 yrs..she opened her eyes nd I was ready to be hurt if she push him or evn shout at him! Bt the moment our eyes met it was as if something has passed bw us, as if we both were waiting for this very moment,as if her eyes were trying to say something,he could hear her heart beat which was irregular bt both of their heart beat together give a rhythm'he was abt to touch her face when there was murmur nd both of us looked around and saw Ayush , Alok nd Ananya lying on the bed nd looking at both of us with cute expression nd Alok was looking sad nd angry he forgot for a moment that Manvi was on top of him nd was abt to Ask Alok what happnd..when..

1'2'3'..yayyy maasi wonnn..screamed Ani nd started jumping on the bed nd manvi got up bt was nt looking at me'so I looked around at others Ani was jumping on the bed holding Manvi's hand bt Ayush nd Alok gave me a look as if I have jus betrayed them..What?? I looked at manvi avoiding our awkwardness bt saw her looking as confused as him'.

Katti CP 'huh hum haar gaye na'said Alok!nd Ayush nodded!

Haar gaye??i asked sitting on my knees'Kaise??

Abhi aap mamma ke saath WWF khel rahe tena aur aap haar gaye..iska matlab Boys haaar gaye aur Girls jeeth gaye'Said Ayush Grumpily making faces at Ani..nd I looked at Manvi she was the color of red tomato by nw aww she looked damn adorable'.

Ayush chalo ab its time for bed'said Manvi nd dragged Ayush with her..

What Cp??i was again bought back CP?? Ye kya hai..

CP means chote papa said Ani as if it was a world known thing nd im the only idiot in this world who dint know abt it!

Good Night CP'both said nd ran from there'I couldn't help bt laugh at their innocence nd our moment!for a momen it was As if she was his bt that moment is over nw!nd he turned and saw that diary..he took the envelop first nd started reading it after closing the door properly!

Dear Virat,

I know u will be confused as to why im writing this letter to you..believe me evn iam bt I don't have anyother option bt to inform u'she has sweared on herself made me promise that I wont tell anything to her family or ur family abt her disease nd if I did she will run away from here nd wont undergo the treatment''' Virat im scared for her..her condition is not that good nd then going through all the treatments without families support is going to make it worse..nd then last week from her I came to know that she has a special place for u in her heart nd I have noticed that when i gave her the news abt her disease, she broke down she kept on saying ur name nd nw my only hope is u Virat'Only u can save Manvi from this condition..we don't have much time pls come back nd convinse her to confront abt her disease to her family bcoz she needs u nd her family nw!Come back soon Virat b4 Cancer eats ur Partner!

P.S when u get this letter pls do come back soon bcoz I really don't hw much time we have!

Dr Manan!

Virats hand was shivering after reading that letter, he dint have the strength to turn the page of the diary, he was afraid of what is waiting for him in there'.

18th jan 2008

Wonder why I wrote Virat Vadhera a letter when no one knows where he is nd his address anyway im keeping it here may be I will send it to him when anyone get any info on him'Nothing going good at this end 'I haven't seen her for a week nw..im such a looser cant evn fight for the girl I love!

25th Jan 2008

Manvi's first chemo session completed nd she is week I don't know what excuse she will give to her family for her weak condition nd needle marks on her skin??i secretly wish someone find out soon abt her'nd as for me no luck!

1st feb 2008

Finally something good happnd Viren came to know abt Manvi's health.. bt then she again took the promise from Viren nt to tell anyone nd he did bt finally someone knows..

3 feb 2008

hospital is full of patients nd hurry burry due to the maharthi so many accidents bt none serious thank god! I saw a glimpse of her with the family that's all!

31st March 2008

Im shifting to Mumbai or running away with her'..Viren made some lies to the family abt Manvi getting a scholarship nd job in Mumbai nw all three are on the way to Mumbai ..we will be staying in Vadhera cottage there'finally something better happnd in my life.

9th Apr 2008

Manvi is weak, evn her blood count is so less, we both are trying to feed her as much as fruit ng veggies bt it seems she has given up..hw I wish i could do something nd bring that old cheerful Manvi back'whom I know nd loved bt this was jus a mere image of that girl!

28th Apr 2008

Manvi's chemo session again gt postponed due to her weak state nd less blood count nd on the way back to home saw someone familiar nd had to hide! Bt don't think we will be able to do it for long nd Manvi has started to think she is burden for us nw..bt hw can I explain to her that she is a blessing for them who is saving them indirectly!

15th May 2008

We have gonne out for a dinner or Manvi forced me..nd I enjoyed spending time with her in Mumbai beach that long walk holding her hand'it seems like ages we have done this..hw I missed my girl bt all in all a good day for me bt I wish I can say the samefor Manvi!

1st June 2008

What I have scared the most has happnd..chemo has started taking their toll on Manvi's health nd I have seen her no. of times struggling in pain nd sleepless night nd nw she has given up'nd she looked as if she has started counting her days nd it pained me to see her like this nd I called Viren to see if he can visit us bt it seems Jeevika is due this week or next so I dint tell him her condition exactly bt he gave me news abt Sighting Virat somewhere in Mumbai bt I dint inform Manvi bcoz I knw she will become more sad nd depressed nd I cant let that happn nw!..Got a call from Guruji from Hrishikesh saying that we are no more safe in Mumbai bt I cant leave Manvi here for my selfish reason!

21st June 2008

3rd chemo's effect has already started 'Manvi was loosing her hair nd her body was weakening nd she has given up ..we try on a regular basis to boost her energy saying abt baby,Mumbai, Jeevika bt nothing seems to have an effect on her'.hw I wish I could jus take away all her pain from her bt yesterday after long time she talked to me in her weak voice at first I dint evn identify her voice bt then hw I wished she hasn't talked to me'it still give goosebumbs to me to hear it from a girl who loved her life more than anything..'Pls kill me Dr Manan'!

3rd July 2008

I was coming back from hospital nd I saw known face im nt sure bt it can be him 'Virat'!Whatever I tried to do was having no effect on Manvi nd she has lost her hair completely I have seen her crying fr her bt im helpless as a dr, as a friend nd as a husband!

4th July 2008

As usual I was talking to Manvi or was trying to get any movement from her almost paralysed body that I saw her eyes suddenly there was that old glint back, her eyes was on me ..she looked straight at me with hope bt Ganga maiyya ki kasam he dint remember what he said that made a small part of Manvi Chaudry back , I tried bt nothing my mind was acting gay!nd then failed I was abt to go from her room when there was a cold touch nd I turned to see her fragile finger holding my hand nd she was mumbling something bt couldn't make out what?? Went near to her nd Heard' Virat''

5th July 2008

Manvi was back or almost a form of her was back with jus a news of seeing Virat in Mumbai'till nw I dint realize the effect Virat had on her nd for some reason I couldn't help bt hate him for not being with her!bt nw Manvi has started walking we took her out on a beach walk all three of us were happy!

7th July 2008

Nw I can finally say im happy may be nt completely bt still I was ..seeing the almost dead girl singing nd dancing nd giving sweets to almost all the patients in the hospital..laughing with nurses giving them good news abt her Di's delivery nd describing her unseen babies to everyone!nw I was sure that Manvi chaudry will be back!

15th July 2008

Viren visited us today nd he almost caught us bt then Manvi as usual to the rescue'Viren was happy to see Manvi all cheery bt he was shocked to see her in a bandana nd this weak condition nd asked me abt her later nd I told him all the details nd our new hope!

30th July 2008

Manvi's 4th chemo session was miraculously successful nd Dr bakshi said that after two more therapies May be they can stop her chemos nd with operation remove the dead blood cells'so I was right Manvi's chance of cure is high nw nd I was happy '

5th Aug 2008

Hw can I assure her that everything will be fine when I myself no that its only matter of time b4 they caught us'nw I feel terrible that I have bought her into all these mess!God help me!

30th Aug 2008

5th chemo session over,her body look more weak bt she has gained her lost confidence nd her wish to live..nw most of her time is spended tending to her nd I cant help bt smile at these two sisters!

5th Sep 2008

Today was the day nd I was scared bt then Manvi was there by my side holding my hand giving me all the false promises I coulnt help bt laugh at her words bt then That was Manvi Chaudry effect! She was more confident than me nd said that nothing will happn to our Baby!

15th Sept 2008

Manvi 's last chemo was over nw she was on medication nd after 10days she was to go thru all the check ups again nd then operation nd she will be back to life'.new member to our family is happy nd more than anyone Manvi was happy nd she get along well with him nd she told her all the fake stories of Jeevika's baby to him!i once evn heard her talking abt Chep to him!

25th Sept 2008

Manvi's operation was due today Viren was there nd we hided everything from him bt im sure he knows we were hiding something bt he dint dig on it'Manvi was confident and that gave us all some courage nd while going to OT she holded my hand nd whispered to me that 'if something happns to me tell Di nd Virat hw much I love them'she smiled with tears in her eyes nd asked Will you??it pained me to see her like this bt I dint give her any false promise of nothing will happn to her nd jus nodded my head!

30th oct 2008

Manvi was back to being healthy or she has gained a bit weight nd her hair was growing back nd she always made jokes abt hw she nd Ayush has same amt of hair'.i realy wanted to salute her then nd there'.On the other hand she was getting weaker due to the complications in the pregnancy nd bleeding!

3rd Nov 2008

They found us nw we are staying in cottage provided by my hospital a small one'..i asked Manvi to go back bt she refused to leave us like this'nd I know something wrong is gonne happn today bt what?

15th Dec 2008

I was right the other day when I said something wrong was gonne happn'everything went wrong that day I LOST HER FOREVER..MY WIFE MY TANYA LEFT ME LEAVING BEHIND A 2MONTH OLD BABY OUR AYUSH!...
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Thats it for today!I know i have made it more confusing than ever😆bt nw u know who is Ayush's parent atleast ...trust me next update will clear all ur doubts nd no i wont take another month for the upadate😛 i will update it 2mrw morning or evening😊dont forget to press the like button nd give ur honest Review nd sorry for the mistakes😊
Edited by luvarjun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cant wait 4 next part when u updatng?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...means ayush is nt maanvi's child
means our virman is gonna to be unite...yayyee!!!!
it was amazing.luvd d diary part
update soon nd thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it finally virat found out his ayush's parents are
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am happy to know who Ayush's parents are. Interesting chapter don't keep us waiting too long for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update... totally loved it.. waiting for virat's reaction... waiting for next part...

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