Virat Manvi OS | Love Hurts | Part2 Page8 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomeee os.. too emotional.. esp d confrontation scene of VirMan @ terrace.. bt thnx 2u tht u made Dr Manan speak truth to virat.. nywz i TRULY HOPE next part wilb a HAPPY ENDING to this os.. plz upd8 sooon n plz do pm me too.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely..

love really hurts..

cont soon..

PM me wen u u[pdate
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
It ws so beautifully written...
Just loved it...
Thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Vaah bai vaah...you are mazing meri sharni...too dood...<3 u and <3 u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

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Virat is in tears and driving in full speed!
Manan: virat drive faster! Issi cheez ka dar tha mujhe!
Virat: dr manan! Wat do u mean?
Manan: virat she is on her last stage!

Hearing this he gets annouyed n hits the car staring!
Virat: god damn it! Tumne kissi ko kaise nahin bataya? Aur of hospital koi relative ka permission toh manga hoga...?
Manan: haan aur meine kaha manvi ko lekin usne mera signature karwadiya!

Virat just couldnt stop thinking about her and blaming himself *flashback starts* their all nok jok moment! N the virika shadi moment!
They reached manvi's flat and both rush ! Virat starts ringin the bell continuesly! The maid opens it!
Virat: manvi kahan hai?
Maid: sab meine unne unke room pe bitadiya! ( without listening to her , he just runs to her room and doesnt see her there untill he hears her coughing from the washroom and runs in sees her coughing blood)
Virat: manvi... Manvi ( he goes to her but manvi pushes him away)
Manvi: *coughs* please virat go away! Im cheating on u na! Go away ( she pushes him)
Virat cried: manvi please im sorry! Jitna jagra karna hai badmein please abhi chalo mere saath please! I beg u!
Manvi: let...go... Me ( untill she gives up completely and faints in his arms)
Virat: manvi! Manvi! Dr manan!!! ( he carried her and rushes out! The maid stood their shocked! )
Maid: manvi madam ko kya hogaya! ( untill the home fone rings and she answers it)
Vanshika: hello! Kya virat wahan aaya? Manvi theek hai na?
Maid cried: madam...
Vanshika's heart started beating fast and shouted: saaf saf kaho kya baat hai! Virat yahan se jaldi nikla! Manvi fone ka jawab nahin de rahi !
Maid told her how since she came back from the party, she has been crying untill she started coughing so much n thn she realized she was coughing blood n she had to call virat here and says: aur abhi woh manvi madam ko hospital legaye! ( hearing this vanshika stood there numb! With tears running thru her eyes! Untill kadambari comes sees her like this: babhi... Babhi... ( vanshika comes back to her sense and she starts calling virat, who is sittin back seat wid manvi covered in blood! His fone is ringing again n again! But he is just not in his sense! He is just shocked seein the gurl he loves in his arms! Covered in blood untill manan who is driving asks him: virat.. Virat jawab do fone ka! ( he comes bk to his sense and answers without seein who it is)
Vanshika shouted: VIRAT! Manvi ko kya huwa! Virat tum log kahan ho!
( he doesnt reply untill she cried) virat mera maan gabra raha hai! Virat manvi ko huwa kya hai! ( untill virat cried and told her everything, vanshika on other side afta hearing all this shouts) MANVI! ( she shouts and fainted, kadambari who doesnt know wat happened takes the fone and shouts to know wat happeene but virat is in no good situation to talk untill manan tells her everythin and tells her they on their way to city hospital! Kadambari shouts fpr every1 and tries to bring vanshika to her sense! Every1 come running dowbstairs n r scared wat happened)
Swamini asks kadambari wat happened but all she is doing is crying untill she says; woh... Manvi... ( hearing her name every1 is shocked, jeevikas heartbeat increased n swamini widout knowin anything says: Argh ab iss ladki ne kya kardi! Yeh ladki nahin sudar sakti!
Kadambari gets annouyed and shouted: bas kijiye ap! Ab toh baksh do uss ladki ko!
Swamini : kadambari! Yeh kya batameezi hai?
Kadambari: woh ladki zindagi aur maut ke beech lad rahi hai! Aur app abhi bhi ussi ki galti nikal rahe ( hearing this jeevika runs to kadambari and says) chachi kya huwa mannnu ko?
Kadambari tells them everything, hearing this jeevika is standing there numb! Untill vanshika opens her eyes n shouts for manvi and asks them to take her to manvi! They a rush to hospital. Swamini stood their with guilt n ran to the hospital!
Virat and manan in the hospital rushed manvi to ICU! unconsious manvi opens her eyes and sees virat standing next to her holding her hand says: v...virat... I...really... Love you...
Virat holding her hand says: i love you more manvi! Tumhe kuch nahin hoga! ( untill she coughs blood again n manan comes in asking virat to leave! But he is just not ready to leave her)
Virat: nahin... Ab nahin.. Mein manvi ko nahin choroonga!
Manan begs him: virat please! Manvi ko kuch nahin hoga! Please( n he took him out)

Virat stood outside of ICU, covered with manvi's blood. Jeevika with the whole vadhera house rushed and were askin the reception about manvi untill jeevika spots virat n runs to him.
Jeevika: virat.. Virat.. Manvi.. Manvi kahan hai? Virat ( untill she sees him covered with blood n faints, every1 tries to bring her back to sense.)
Viren: virat manvi kaisi hai? ( he doesnt reply untill dada ji asks) virat beta manvi?
Virat cried: please manvi ko bachao!
Dadaji : beta usse kuch nahin hoga( but he wondered y virat is reacting this untill he cried n hugged him)
Virat: mein uske bina marjaonga dadaji! I really love her! ( this left every1 stunned)
Hours passed, they took her to OT! virat stood outside of OT for hours, seeing manvi in this situation, jeevika'd health became worst, and she was too under hospital service! Vanshika continued praying! Hours passed! Untill the red light was closed! As manan came out, virat ran to him and asked about manvi)
Manan: she is lucky... She survived( hearing this every1 was happy) warna humein laga.. We lost her!
Hearing this virat asked if they can see her and manan asked every1 to go home and rest as now no1 is allowed to see her but virat insisted he will stay n every1 realized how much manvi means to him so they agreed n viren to stayed as jeevika's health was not good either n was admitted!
Hour passed, virat was in the room with manvi n he fall asleep holding her hand, untill he felt a movement n woke up n was happy seeing manvi trying to open her eyes, n sees virat next to her and smiles. Virat is damn happy n hugs her)
Virat : i knew nothing will happen to u!
Manvi: tum kush bhi maat hona! Itni jaldi nahin chorungi tumhara peecha!

He holds her hand n cries: manvi! Meine hamesha sirf koya hai! Pehle dad , phir sab ka vishwas, maya aur ab mujh mein itni himmat nahin ke mein tumhe kho doon...
Manvi laughs: dont worry... Baghwan bhi mujhe nahin chahta! Kehta hai tore aur waqt darti pe bauj banno! ( both laughs untill manvi asks him to go get her something sweet n not let any1 know as she is not allowed. Virat first didnt agrer but later said yes, he kissed her forehead and went)
Manvi, with pipes in her nose sittin with help of a pillow, is waiting for virat and smiling... Untill she finds hard breathing and starts breathing fast n starts shaking! Untill a nurse comes n sees her like this n shouts for manan! They all rush in to control her ! Untill they see the heart beat dropping! And starts giiving her shock, where on other side virat who has no idea about this is happy n on his way to her room with chocolates for her mannu with a cute teddy! Where on other hand the heartbeat line is straight! Untill manan said ) time of death... ( he is just shaking and doesnt know wat to say n continues) time of death... 3:49am ( untill virat enters the room smiling, but the smile vanishes seeing the doctors there and then his eyes reach to the machine, n thn drops everything he was holding, n walks to manvi with teary eyes n says: m...anvi...manvi utho! Manvi! Dekho mein chocolate laya hoon! Manvi! ( he starts shaking her, seeing no reply he hugs her n shouts for her but yet no reply)
Manan: virat..she is no more.. Im really soorrry ( he cried, but virat was not ready to accept it, lays on bed on manvi's side and says) shhh she is sleeping! Dont disturb her! ( manan seeing his situation asks the nurse to call the vadhera's n call viren from the next room. Viren hearing about manvi is shocked and runs to her room n sees virat laying on bed n hugging her n repeating samething): na she is sleeping! ( viren stood their crying n brokw down thinking how to handle jeevika when she wakes up, on other side vadhera's dont know about manvi n run to her room, sees it crowded, with viren crying on his knees n virat talking like a crazy person, on other side manvi n realize wat happened n breaks down! A nurse comes running saying jeevika woke up n is saying onli 1 word 'MANVI' every1 asks viren to be strong n tell jeevika. He goes in the room n she asks: viren ji mujhe mannu ke paas lejao! ( no reply from viren) Viren ji... ( he goes close to her and says: jeeevika.. Woh manvi...
Jeevika: manvi kya? Viren ji mera maan gabra rahah hai! Viren ji!
Viren cried: she is no more ( this 1 sentence was enough for her to take her life away! She didnt cry or moved, but sat there as a statue with no reaction! On other side, who was just not ready to accept it, untill dada ji made him stand n slap him to bring him bk to his sense! But nothing helped!
Kadambari to swamini: wahan rishikesh mein toh kisi ko pata bhi nahin!
Swamini: humne driver ko bej diya unne yahan lane ke liye!
Kadambari: unno ne manvi ko hamare barose beja aur yahan... (she continued crying)

Days passed, jeevika was normal, yet quite, the gupta's were all broken , swamini was in guilt! So much changed other thn virat! Who sincr thn, neither cried nor talked ... Was just a statue! Will he ever be able to forget her?


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🤣 !! NO IM NOT HERE ANYMORE 🤣 ! before u guys kill me 🤣 !! Im hiding 🤣
but guys I dunno LOL ! this is wah made sense to me LOL !!
sorrry :(

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Posted: 13 years ago
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im scared to PM people 🤣 read @ ur own risk 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awww 😭...why oh why???...
that is sad...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sooo emtinal sad yr.. bt ws too gud ! sad stries alwas remains.. n our heart sme hw '
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnks guys <3 Rofl i thought i will be killed 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ROFL Talli 🤣 its fine i got worst n more hilarious comments n reaction on FB 🤣
sorry <3

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