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virmanforever

@virmanforever

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Dude first I ask you to PM me which you didn't then you just kill manvi are you kidding me but it was still kind of good.

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

It was a very emotional and sad update. Poor Virat is always left heart broken and Manvi dies when she has found her love. Loved you for the way you wrote the OS but hate you for killing Manvi. No hard feelings yaar😉

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vivian_angel

@vivian_angel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

hi champ

actually its my ever first post in this forum

i love reading ur os

both the parts r just superb

i love raeding it

bt why u kill manvi in ur writing

pls dont do this na

arrey yaar taras kha lo hum logo par

bt champ

kamal likhti ho

wonderful post

eagerly waiting 4r next

n pls do pm me next time when u update

tc :)

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

I cant believe it manvi died this is sooo sad ur my favourite writer plsz pm me and u have succeeded in making me cry ? plsz continue and do pm me i wont harm u lol

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

oyye manal, what you post girl??😲

disappointed,, you killed maanvi..[:'(]

After reading the first chapter i thought you will going to solve the issues between vimaan and maanvi's heath priblem,, but tum ne toh kamaal kardiya..😈

*angry* you killed the jaan of virat..😉😭

you are good writter we all know that well, next time write an os/ss without killing anyone and sad ending, other wise i will...😈...🤣

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lovearya

@lovearya

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Im crying!Oh god u are Evil! I thought she will b fine bt no u had to kill bt my evil mind is happy that Virat abhi bhi normal nahi hai🤣

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Coolioqueen

@Coolioqueen

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Loved it a lot! Plz plz pm me after the next part! Excellent post!

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

omg..how cn u do dis..??
nt fair at all...m literally crying..;( happy endng karna tha na...:( well i must say hats off to ur imagination and d way u wrote it...

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Hayee Manal this is you?? LOL!! I'm too slow :( shall I kill I here again after FB? Sachi u actually fan away and were suppose to come back with a love story so that I spare you lekin u r gayab!! Hehehe lol okay it's me jitisha..