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hey guys thanks 4 all the awesome comments on my other piece of writing...this ss is just something that i felt like writing i dont know wether u would like it or not but pls leave ur comments..it should have no more then 3 parts to it...due to depression over the ending of geet it will take sometime 4 me to finish OS:VIRMAAN...i may update that by saturday...thanks again n hope u enjoy this:

Part1: FLASHBACK

6 months after viren and jeevikas wedding...manvi knew she was in love and with no other person except the chep himself...but she never told him 4 fear of rejection after all she didn't want to feel as if she was totally vulnerable to him.
She knew he had a past but she didn't know anything about it. No matter how close they became he always kept his past a secret...she had often asked jeevika to find out but jeevika had refused! O di why did u have to b so goody goody all the time?? It was no use manvi knew that she may never find out about his past...but recently she had caught him drinking and that to enough to make any person pass out n that's what he did...as soon as he drank himself like a total idiot he left 4 his room and promptly fell unconscious...

This had happened 4 the past 6 days...and manvi was getting worried...
Why would he do this??? Why couldn't any1 see how he was hurting??? Was it just me bcoz I love him??? Or did no 1 care????

"Clink clink" manvi heard the sound of glasses and knew virat had started again...before she knew it she was standing infront of him...

Manvi: virat, yeh sab kya hai?

Virat looked up shocked!!!
Shit I thought I was the only one up...why manvi? Why you of all people to see me like this???

Virat: kya hai bandariya?
Manvi: why are u ruining urself like this? Why are u ...why?

Virat couldn't take it! Who the hell was she to question him? Who did she think she was? She was no1 to him!!! No one @ all!!!

Virat: oh just shut up manvi...thum koi nahin haq hai jho thum yeh sare sawal muje pooch kar saaktha hoon! Samjhe thu?

Manvi was shocked @ the way virat had spoken to her..how could he be so rude and uncaring when she had come there 4 him...to give her support to him...

Manvi: virat mein tho...mein sirf...virat mein..

Virat now grew angrier 4 no reason!!! Actually there was a reason bcos now that he looked @ manvi he wasn't actually seeing manvi he was seeing" HER"!!! The one that had made him bow his head in disgrace...virat knew he should control himself but he couldn't...he couldn't stop the words 4rm leaving his mouth...

Virat: kya chati ho thu manvi? Huh? Did u think that I'd fall 4 ur mischievous ways or ur so called charm? What do u really want manvi? Is it the money? Is that it? Or do u just want a trophy husband? That's why u keep spendind so much time here isn't? Wat were u hoping to trap me? Really manvi u are just a..

His words stopped when manvi gave him a slap across his left cheek...

When he recovered he just looked @ her grief stricken face and knew he had made a horrible mistake...

Manvi was stunned not to mention hurt and angry @ him of all the things he could come up with...he thought she just wanted to trap him 4 his money she slapped him then looked @ him, she the fled running straight to her room In the vadhera mansion.locking the door so that no one not even di could get to her untill the morning...

Virat watched as she ran away 4rm him..he was sorry that he had sed those things but he was virat vadhera..hot tempered and ready to fight...but he felt as if this time he lost bcoz this time it was some1 who had shared some joy and sorrow with him

No! No matter. Wat u were ryt virat maybe she just wants a name sake companion...

Virat came back to the present remembering how he had made manvi feel that night...manvi was so torn that she had left the next morning...

Viren: virat, its time...we have to leave now or we'll be l8 4 maanvis wedding...


Hope u guys like this little piece press the like button if u do

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls continue it's rly good 👏
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Goood storyy.. likeed the last part most!! conitue soon and PM me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice one..do continue and pm me when u do :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome story!! Can you pm me when you update! thnks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 thnxs fOr the pm
Loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice =) can't wait for the next part please pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice, please continue and do PM me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, thanks for the PM first ...and I liked the story
pls cont soon yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey! its a nice story! Manvi is getting married to someone else? How can this happen?? i'm sure virat will get manvi... lets see whats in store for us.. pls continue and PM me :) thanks so much!

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