VirMaan: Virat Hogaye Devdas... - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
nice story, maanvi's wedding day, good ending of the part 1, continue soon and please PM me when you update the next ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
ooh i liked that! please do continuee 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys 4 liking the story...note this story may not have a happy ending so plz dnt hate me if url dnt like the ending...

Part2: aaj meri shaadi hai...

Aaj meri shaadi hai, magar Mein ithni kush nahin hoon jEse sab hai...aaj meri shaadi hai aur mein...

Beeji: manvi thum ithni koobsurat lagri hoon...sach mein..
Chachj: haa mannu, bohot sunder ho

Manvi thinking to herself...thum sab kili ye mein kubsorat...lekin meri liye mein aur sunder ho sakti agar meri dulha...meri hone wala pathi...if only...if only...Virat...

Manvi silently cried...she knew now it was too late, she had made her decision to marry abhinash...it was her wedding day and she in less then 5 hours would belong to abhinash...Virat was her past...no one would ever know how much she had truely loved him...

Manvi: beeji, woh, di kaha hai?
Beeji: arre ajongi...

Di...aaj thumhara mannu badi hogaye...di jaldi ajana...

Downstairs:

Jeevika: arre suniye...
Viren: boliye...
Jeevika: mein upar jariye mannu ...mein mannu ko baat karna jathi hoon...
Viren: teke...

Jeevika went up and virat was left with his bhai

Viren: virat, kya hua? Thum teke ?
Virat: haa, bhai mein teku..

Viren knew something was wrong but he didn't know what...

Virat: bhai ek minute, mein abhi ajonga...

Virat went up knowing he had to talk to manvi...he saw her standing alone on the balcony...

Virat: manvi?

Manvi opened her eyes in shock...Virat!

She turned around n looked @ him...

Manvi: virat? Thum..thum yaha...
Virat: haa manvi mein...manvi mein...
Manvi: thum kya virat?
Virat: manvi thum yeh shaadi nahin kar sakthi!

Manvi was stunned...who the hell was he to say that!

Manvi: wat? I can't go ahead with this? Who the hell do u think u are?
Virat: I'm the one that loves u manvi...the one that u love...I'm sorry 4 everything...I'm sorry 4 that day I was angry n I didn't think I juust spoke manvi...believe me I love u I was just scared that u would hurt me...manvi plz just plz don't go ahead with this...plz manvi...

All this time manvi just looked @ virat with no emotions displayed...

Manvi: virat kya sochthi ho thu? Ke thum yaha ajongi aur yeh shaadi rokongi? Do u honestly think that I would 4get everything? Do u think that I would disgrace my family 4 u? All of asudden now u realise that ur in love with me? After 3months? No virat...I'm getting married today...aaj meri shaadi hai...plz...aaj mein Mrs Sharma banongi...

Virat couldn't believe this...it was as if manvi was some1 else...

Virat: manvi...mein...
Manvi: baas virat...ab jao...

Virat turned away...and walked away...

He had lost his life...manvi had left him...how could she have done this???
Manvi was hurt...she wanted him but manvi would not disgrace her family...he had once told her that his family meant the world to him...well her family meant everything to her as well...

Chachi: mannu, barat agaya...cchalo hum niche jaonga...


Guys this was part 2 hope u liked it...sorry 4 the shhort update...I'm feeling a little sadistic...so many more sad parts to come
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg this is just too good but it's short, hope u update it soon I'm waiting pretty impatient... Sorry:( hahaha thanks for every singe post and PM's!! Muah<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sad for virmaan, maanvi is right here, she must have to consider her family's happiness more than her own or virat..
well written, thanks for the PM and do continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continuueee soon!! Awsome! Pm meee...
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Part 3: haan main ne bhi pyaar kiya hai:

Chachi: mannu barat agaya...chalo niche...

Manvi closed her eyes...shut off the world 4 a minute took a deep breath and silent said...Virat...

When she opened her eYes she saw her family all looking @ her with excitement and sadness...their mannu would leave them today...tears started spilling...

Beeji: manvi beta...aaj thumhara shaadi...don't cry...soch ke aaj thum ek naya zindagi hai...
Jeevika: haan mannu...
Manvi: I love yourl all so much!!!!

Manvi bursts out into tears, tears 4 her family,tears 4 her friends and most imp tears 4 her Virat...

Cvhacha: chalo...punditji hume boolaria hai...

All walk with manvi...manvi can't stop to think about Virat...her chep...the only man she had ever loved...he waited so long to tell her and now it was over...
(Listen to the song: jaan e befar ho..4rm kuch kuch hota hai or hamesha thumko chaha 4rm devdas)

Manvi stood @ the top of the stairs looking @ all the guests...she could not see virat anywhere...as she walked down the stairs she couldn't help but remember all the time she had spent with him...@ di's wedding...when she had visited then @ chandigar...their time @ mousouri...the 1st time she. Had met him...identities exchanged...all the times he made fun off her...all the times he raised his voice @ her...today she would have to 4get all...4get that her 1st love would never succeed. Today she was going to leave all her childish behaviour behind her...today she was going to become some1 else...

Outside:

Virat kept on thinking of her and all her tantrums and teasing...the love that she had shown 4 him...and thhen the memory of that night!!! The night he had ruined everything...he wanted her...no he needed her to change her decision but he knew she wouldn't...after everything that happened...she loved her family...she would do anything 4 their happiness...even foresake her own...

Virat: god!!!why did I ruin it? I ruined it!!! I destroyed my life with my own hands...I love her...

Virat knew he couldn't take this any more...

Back to the steps:

Manvi was slowly walking down remembering all...virat...di...dabbu...beeji...chacha...chachi...jiju...

Punditji: beti...yaha bet...

The wedding began...

Just as abhinash was about to put the sindoor on manvis forehead manvi was abruptly pulled up on her feet and turned away 4rm him..

Manvi stared @ virats eyes...shocked...maybe this is a dream...maybe I'm dreaming that virat is here ...

All over chaos broke...people whispering...talking out loud...

Virat: maine kahatana ki thum sirf meri!!!

With saying that virat took out a knife,slit his palm and filled manvis mang with his blood...

Every1 around them were stunned...

Virat aur manvi???


Wat a scandal...some1 must have forced them apart..

The family in all their shock could hear wat people were saying...

Dadaji: VIRAAATTT!!!!!YEH SAB KYA HAI? THUMNE KYA KIYA???
Virat: maine apni pyaar ki mang bari hai...
Buaji: virrat, pagal hogaye thum? Janti hoon ki thumne kya kiya? Zindagi ek kehl nahin hai
Virat I know bua...now I know...

Manvi just looked @ virat...he had done the impossible...he had done the 1 thing that she had now wanted to do...he had disgraced both families...not to mention the sharmas...

Virat looking @ every1 in the hall says: mujhe pata hai ki thum sab kya soch rahi hai...aaj mein yahan apni parrivar ki moon kala nahin karna jathithi...na manvi ki parivar na abhinash ki parivar...lekin mujhe koi aur rastar nahin milsakthi...main manvi se pyaar karthi hoon...aur manvi mujhse pyaar karti hoon...lekin meri vajse...meri gusa vajse...manvi mujhse door chalajathithi...meri bevekoof ke vajse...manvi ka dil thordiya...

Virat looks @ the 3 families: I'm sorry ki shahid yeh rasta teek nahin lekin main manvi se door nahn rehsakthi...

Virat cannot control himself and starts to cry...tears running down his cheeks... : manvi, mujhe maaf kardo...I'm so sorry 4 everythiing...I love you...

He falls to his knees infront of her...he feels a hand against his face, he looks up and sees manvi on her knees as well...

Manvi: thum meri chep hoon...aur main thumhare binna jii nahin saktha...I love u chep...aur maine thumhe maaf diya...

Abhinash: manvi virat?

Both look @ him

Abhinash: thum dono se pyaar ithni taket hai ki agar bagwan bhi chatha hoon tho woh thum dono ko alag nahin kar sakthi...u two truely belong together...

Dadaji: haan beta...humse maaf kartha hum sab ne thum dono se pyaar nahin dekh sakthe...aaj thum dono se humesha ek dosri ki saath doongi...

The wedding then continued...(Listen to song aye meri zindagi 4rm saaya)

Since manvis mang was already filled, virat tied the mangalsutra...and the 2 took their pheres...holding hands and knowing that now nothing would really come between them...they loved each other...

1 year later:

Waaahhh...waaahhh

Virat: arre manvi, thumhare beta thumhe boolariya hai...

Manvi: haan meri beta!!! Lekin bilkul thumhara jese...jr chep...

Both of them held their child and looked @ each other..

The end!!!

Thanks 4 all the supprt and good comments hope url have enjoyed reading tjis as mush as I did writing it...plz note my hindi is bad...I can spak it but its very hard to write...plz ignore the mistakes...and listenind to the songs suggested may help with the dramatic effects...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww tht was a cute ending loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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happy ending,, nice... loved it.
thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
such a sweet ending:) i enjoyed reading it, it was really nicee:)
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