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-Leah- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
You know it is time to change the title from OS to something else 🤣..coz you have actually written four parts?😲🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOL ... Yea manal u shud high time LOL.. but its amazing keep me updated :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wait ViRman confessing their love,Viraat crying(you just had to put that)🤣,Kadhambri chachi and Swamini..🤣..Sindhoor falling on Manuus maang,Vanhsika-Maanvi cute mother -daughter convo,and if that was not enuf..they end up doing the pheras..😆..if all this happens within a space of two weeks me will get stroke..🤣🤣🤣

I loved the entire thing..but Maanvi saying she is not the girl for him coz she doens't have much time was like the best part..I can totally see that happening in the show..😳

@Sara..beleive me this part was like the least sad parts of all..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Sej 🤣 changed 🤣
n hahah this me i can make anyfin do in my OS to make my self feel better 🤣 as in show it will take MONTHSS 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣🤣..especially the phera part..I was like?🤣..and the OS title is perfect..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
MANNNUUU, PM me <3 asap.
YOUR OS IS DHINCHAK!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
u are so dramatic, man - i luv it😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Seju 🤣 wat about the phere's 🤣 !!
@Jeevika : sure Di 🤗
@Luvlife 🤣 I knw i am 🤣 thnks <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5 (i)

Everyone rush her to hospital! Shock jeevika still doesn't know what happened to her mannu!
She isn't crying, she is just like a statue standing there looking @ mannu thru the window! Viren who realize that jeevika is in shock an wants to cry but can't untill viren places his hand on her shoulder and she hugs him tight crying loud. It was like some one is taking her soul away from her.
Viren: manvi ko Kuch nahin hoga jeevika!
Time passed there was no news from the doctor! Virat just couldn't take his eyes off manvi's room just for a good news! Jeevika n BG and all were just crying and praying to god! Jeevika walking here and there thinking what's taking them so long! Viren walks to her to console her but she is jst not ready to listen to any one, untill she sees the doctor coming out! Virat runs to doctor on other way jeevika runs to him before she asks about manvi, doctor tells virat: mr virat Maine apko pehle kaha, she has to be here before it's too late! And I'm sorry to say it is too late! Hearing this virats eyes just pops out with tears, where jeevika is shocked at what the doctor just told virat and he just left! Jeevika walks to virat to talk to him, but broken virat in shock walks away and jeevika doesn't give up and shouts: virat! ( hearing this he stops)
Jeevika: virat! Doctor kya keh rahe the!( virat doesn't reply her question in guilt!) virat doctor kya keh Rahe the for godsake ! ( virat in tears tells her)
Virat: bhabi woh ... Manvi has lung tumor... ( hearing this it was like jeevika's whole life shook!) virat continues: aur ab woh tumor spread ho chula hai! ( jeevika standing here in shock asks him ( tumhe Sab pata tha?( she holds his shervani and starts hitting him untill she gives up and faints, viren runs to her and the whole family runs to her where virat was trying to hold her)
After jeevika comes back to her sense, first thing she shout is : MANVI! ( and then she realizes her convo with virat and begs him to tell her the truth)
Jeevika: virat ( with a husky voice) please mujhe saach janna hai! Please (she cried) tumhe meri kasam virat! ( by folding her hands infront of him, seeing this virat holds her hand in shock!)
Virat; babhi please..( he cried, an then he tells everyone how he got to know about manvi's a how she asked him not to let anyone * flashback starts of how from the mall it all started, after finishing his talk he breaks down holding jeevika's leg)
Virat: bhabi jitna bhi manvi be mujhe mana Kiya, tab bhi meine Uska kayal raka! I didn't know how she became my life! Aur agar aaj usse Kuch hogaya tho yahan do lash honge! Mein uske bina nahin jeesakta babhi! I can't live without her( seeing him break down jeevika makes him Stand and hugs him sayin) mannu ko Kuch nahin hoga! Virat! Usmein hum sabki jaan basti hai! Woh apni behn ko akela nahin choregi! (seeing everyone breakdown! There was one more person who was quite all this time as she was too in pain! As even tho she showed she never liked manvi! But she never wanted her to go thru this pain in this age. She sits on the bench and is in tears as she thought no one is seeing her but vanshika did and she went sat next to her, placing her hand on her shoulder )
Vanshika: jiji... Ap kyun Roh Rahi hain? Apko toh manvi kabhi bhi Pasand nahin thi na
Swamini: baas Karo vanshika mante hain ke woh ladki mujhe pasand nahin thi lekin aise nahin chahte the hum! Aur ab woh virat ki patni hain! Aur virat manvi ke bagair Nahin jeesakte! Aur meri khushi viren aur virat mein hain!
(untill a nurse comes out from manvi's room shouting for a doctor) doctor patient ki halat baut Karab hain! ( hearing this virat, jeevika and everyone rush to the room, )
Jeevika; mannnu! Doctor! Meri mannnu!( the doctor enters demanding everyone to leave as they have to take her for the surgery now, and they take manvi for the surgery to remove the tumor, but as the surgery was really risky but still not impossible)
When manvi was taken to surgery, here everyone was just praying, virat was just didn't move from the operation theatre where viren was consoling jeevika who just couldn't stop her tears where swamini and others were consoling BG who never imagined seeing her naughty manvi so quite, all she prayed was to give her life to manvi too but nothing should happen to her!
Time passed, the red light was turned off and the doctor comes out saying they removed the tumor and for now she is fine and they can see her once she is taken to the Ward





Note : People Willl Post the Last Bit of this PArt in a while ! couldn't Finish !! will finish in a while ! n Dont be happy so fast 🤣


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Posted: 13 years ago
Manal u better give us a happy ending...we have been crying reading all the chapters 😭nw its time for some happy momentsnd VirMan romance😃!!!I loved it...update it soon:)
Swaminichii ko ruladiya🤣🤣Aur aaj SRK ke bhi nahi aaya🤣

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