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Posted: 13 years ago
5th part updated!!!! when??? 😭
Great part, fultoo drama👍🏼 👏🤗

You made my Viraat janoo❤️ & me cry so much😭😭 and evil Swamini too😡🤣 Phere ho gaye hai, Maanvi is fine now and badi maa bhi kush hai!!! Bas ab VirMaan romance & SR ki kami hai☺️



Aur agar aaj usse Kuch hogaya tho yahan do lash honge! 🤣🤣🤣 Manal - my nautanki queen🤗 and finally, No SRK & Kaddu🤪love you that, muuaahhh xxx


Edited by -Misha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Pooja, Jeevika, Irum, Ishita, raveena, tina Thnks <3 🤗

@Mishu 🤣 !! GOSH I love DRAMA 🤣
n Last Part here 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Last Part :)

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Time passed, the red light was turned off and the doctor comes out saying they removed the tumor and for now she is fine and they can see her once she is taken to her room! There was this happiness on everyones face especially jeevika n virat, all they did was stand there for a good news n they did get it! Their manvi is fine!
When was taken to her room, and as the doctor said they can see her for now, jeevika and all just ran in the room where virat stood their seeing her from the window as he was blaming himself for her situation!
Jeevika rushes to her bed holds mannu's hand an thn manvi opened her eyes slowly and gives a small smile seeing this jeevika is so happy saying : mujhe pata tha meri mannu mujhe chorke nahin jaa sakti!
Manvi in a slow voice: mein darti pe bhoj hoon Itna jaldi peecha nahin chorine wali( untill she is virat is not in the room and asks them ( jiji ... Virat?( hearing this virat hides)
Jeevika: virat... Abhi yahin tha shayad doctor se Baat kar rahha hai.
Swamini: aur ab Tum jaldi se teek hojao, abhi toh hamein dhoom dham ke tumhari aur virat ki shadi karni hai! Sab rasmo aur rivaj ke saath( and places her hand on manvi's forehead, untill manvi tell jeevika to hug her tight as she missed her safe hugs, jeevika without thinking hugs manvi tight an cries )
Jeevika: aaj ke baad mujhe kabhi maat chorna! Marjaongi mein ( untill manvi's health becums worst! With manvi's body seizering! )
Jeevika shouting : mannu! Mannu!! doctor! Hearing this virat runs in the room holding manvi's hand shouting : DOCTOR! manvi ( he cried) DOCTOR! The doctor runs in seeing her heartbeat increasing n shouts for all to leave but all refuse!
Virat: doctor manvi ko kya hogaya! U said she is fine!
Doctor: mr virat it was a major surgery! We did succeed but don't know what happened now please try to understand ! U have to leave !( but he refuses and the doctor starts checking her and then sees her heartbeat falling, and the doctors starts giving her the shock! Seeing this Jeevika stood their in shock without crying as she thought her mannu is no more with her! Where virat runs and holds her hand shouting: MANVI! ( the doctors continues with he shock untill the her heart beat stopped and the heartbeat machine was clear, seeing the straight line everyone broke down, jeevika who stood there all this time, seeing the staight line fainted in viren's arm. Virat' is in shock but doesn't give up and starts rubbing her hands shouting for her and thn pulls her from her hand and hugs her tight! And cried : MANVI! Tumne promise Kiya! Manvi get up( he just hugged her tight and cried all he did, it was like someone is taking his life away!
There was a miracle! Manvi's heart beat starts, seeing this the doctors stood there as this was a miracle! And asks virat to move away for them to Check her! Virat couldn't sip smiling and moved back seeing this everyone was happy! Viren shouts fr jeevika to get up! He cried for her to get up! Manvi is alright but it was like she was not ready to accept the fact untill viren splashed water on her, she got up shouting: MANVI!
viren : jeevika manvi bilkul theek hai! ( wiping her tears)
Doctor: this is a miracle! When we thought we lost her! All your love bought her back! Now she is absolutely fine! Manvi opens her eyes slowly finds virat sitting next to her, holding her hands tight an she tells him slowly : kya huwa ullu ! Yeh bandariya itne jaldi tumhara peecha nahin chorne wali! ( hearing her voice virat hugs her tight saying) air mein bhi apne bandariya ko Kuch nahin hone doonga! He cried hugging her.
1 week passed, manvi now was completely fine! The doctors gave them permission to take her home but for a while she should not move around alot, hearing this virat looked @ manvi and said ' suna bandariya NO MOVING around alot!
Manvi: listen mokhe ka zyada fayda mat utao... Tum ab bhi chep ho ( she said while standing to leave)
Virat: acha ? ( and he carried her in his arms)
Manvi: OMG neeche utaro! Koi dekh lega!
Virat: dekhne do ( in a mischievous tone) officially bandariya ho tum meri! Mujhe haq hai ;) ( hearing this she smiled and gave him a hug)

Hahahaha the END of this OS hahhahahah I didn't like this part much as lol I didnt know how to end it :p

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Posted: 13 years ago
me first..

aww loved it..:)

emotional and cute update it was..

waiting to read more from you ..:)



Edited by me.san - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Me.San : Aww Thanks <3 Well this is the End of this OS :) ! next OS is on Their Shadi ;) ! a FUN n ROMANTIC 1 ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww Manal kya melodrama KJo style but VVsweet OS ...absolutely brilliant with fantastic connect ...Waiting for yr next treat🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pooja 🤗 Thanks ALot <3 !!
hehehe Next is FULL VirMan Masti+Romance ;) 🤣 !!
Continue of this OS !! how Mannu will Be full fine n thn Their Romance ;) 🤣 enough of SADNESS 🤣


Love yew <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was
can't wait for the next one!!! Mannu fully fit & fine and loads VirMaan Romance❤️😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mishu hahahhaha wait for it :P

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Deemag aww thnks love <3 this OS is done :) will write another 1 :)

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