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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello!

Here I am for Chapter-4... I know I have become lazier than ever... four pending updates... this is too much ...so sorry

Back to the update... Shravan found her ... they meet again finally after 5 years ... yay

She is alright... nothing happened to her... I don't why I was so worried for her after the last chapter😆

First few Paragraphs are so good... Shravan's nervousness and internal turmoil everything comes out so well.

"There's nothing quite like reality, Nothing that could surpass it, nothing that could be it's mirror."

Wow! This!👏

They finally meet!🤪Now just confess and get married you two... this bumping, talking and teasing is just not enough... come on go for it... my feels are out control🤣

"Seeing him here before her is like both a dream and nightmare. "

Ouch ! Sumo.. Nightmare?!🥺

She is still wearing his hoodie... my heartShravan be like I will be persistent I caught the hint Sumo😉... I love him.❤️😆

Daboo is cute as ever... Shravan is so in trouble... Sidha boyfriend... our boy looks like a shipper too😆 Sumo loves sinking our ship though 🤔

Hun! No one my foot... this feels like Shravan's Kaun Sumo ka revised version. Jhooti! Although daboo's is that really your name? He is so adorable. 😆

"Did your parents dislike you that much?" Poor Shravan 🤣

Nanu you are so right about the hoodie... old lover it is... keep up the good work 😆

"Home is where the heart is." So true!

That "somethings always are" ... ohh! Shravan you are so in trouble. This girl is sassy... I think like her although she is a cold and distant at times but damn! She is funny 😆

"Then we shall meet tonight " Shravan 🤣 That's called tit for tat😆

Okay! There is some mystery around Priya too in the story. So many questions! What happened to her in last five years? 🤔

Without giving them much dialogues you have painted a picture of exactly how they feel by just describing their small actions.

One paints a picture of different circumstances and events through words in their stories but here in Resurgence you are like literally painting their emotions with your words. I can feel both their turmoil and struggles throughout. It's beautiful!

I really Loved it!

Next chapter tomorrow pakka... I need to finish these.

Apoorva

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

I have set records for late-lateefi I know.. but I will finish them all today pakka😳

Chapter-5

It's an intriguing one!😳

Although I am all confused about certain things 🤓 I need answers 😆

"But Suman Tiwari is not a woman with a strong belief in deities or men, her faith begins and ends on her own accountability."⭐️

This speaks a lot about what her character is going to be... also the next paragraph... she is surely not our usual Sumo.

With Shravan toh samjhi... he kinda left for London and all ... why did her friendship with Pushkar go sour? And that mentioning of his father in this way? 🤔

And How is all this connected to Ramnath? I really like him in this story... I know he is dead but still ye chal kya raha hai? I will say this again I am confused... like really confused.😆

And they meet again ...much to Sumo's dismay 😆

That kidding reaction came from Sumo. 🤣Madam wants best always.... interesting! They will work together? Office Romance... it can be then😆😉

"Or we could run together" He is love!❤️

She has got snappy comebacks for everything... poor Shravan 😆

Her interview though!⭐️

Pushkar is here too... yay! Though he seems friendlier than ever. 😆

They look like good friends. They have lived in same city... Still she hasn't seen him in 5 years ...wait cause she was in Pune for her graduation right?😕

Also I would confess... I am really confused about this Sumo to be honest... it's like a love-border line dislike relationship I am in presently. Sometimes, I am like all you go girl... rest it's like chal kya raha iss ke dimag mien or what's wrong with her. She seems callous and sarcastic sometimes. 🤔😆

Shravan is so much sweeter compared to her. Uss par bhadakti hi rahti hai without any reason. And he is so sweet that he keeps brushing it off as nothing serious. It's literally like day and night kinda difference. smiley36

My interest is higher than ever... I am loving this 😳

Apoorva

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter-6

She is comparing her life with vortex... hmm... interesting. Also Why is all this so cryptic?😆

"The whispers. The questions. The stares." 🤓😕

And Har cheez mien five years aa jaate.. kya hua tha? I want answers now. Mere chote se dimag par confusion ka pressure badh raha hai🤣

She escapes all the awkward situations unscathed... please teach me how Sumo. I have a special talent for landing myself into such situations.😆

Drinks?! Latte? Seriously Sumo? Though I hope Pushkar isn't going fall for this talent of hers... he is should not let this go easily. Acchi fasi hai madam aaj. Ab maza aaega 😈

Sympathy and Pity for what? Kahan gayi thi tum Sumo? And kyun? And how long were you gol Sumo? Inquisitive me has a long list of questions.. aap jaane do abhi ignore karo for the sake of story I will wait ... I will just confirm them with Sumo for now🤣

She has a comeback for everything.. like literally everything... that too a sarcastic one... I am kinda jealous of her at this moment. 😆

"I don't even know who I am" See cryptic as ever!🤔

Shravan got the job!Sumo ko bhi mil hi jaegi😉Nirmala and Sham ji are both worried about Shravan... you should be. 😛 Considering Sumo is around him. 😆Par jab decline hi karna tha toh interview kyun diya.. Shravan?🤓😛

Kya headline? Your father died.. he didn't turn out to be terrorist or murder or something. Why would people make assumptions? What exactly happened to Ramnath? And the list of unsolved mysteries continues🤔😆

This Nirmala is so sweet and understanding. I love her and Shravan's bond. He surely needs this stability in his life.❤️

And for a moment I thought he declined for her. So that she gets the position she wanted. I suddenly feel so stupid 😆

Phew! Priya is okay!One confusion down! 😆

Sumo and Priya have more broken a relationship than Shraman themselves I feel. Sumo kya baat hai jo chid chida rahi ho... voh kya gam hai jo chupa rahi ho.😆

I now strongly feel Priya and Ramnath's death is somehow interconnected.

Both will work together... I am excited.😎

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Okay.. next... chapter-7

First of all... finally we have flash backs of young Shraman 🥳🤪

She works at diner means she likes to cook here too. Kaafi workaholic types lagri😳

Shraman are linked by hip! Ahh... My feels!😍♥️

Shravan the mother-hen!❤️ He hasn't changed much now also... he still cares deeply about her and keeps on showing his concern... like when he adviced her just before her interview😳

They all look so happy and carefree... bachpan! All that banter is so cute and Shramanish! Wrinkles... rubik's cube... incorrect history statements ... they are so adorable😳

It's both endearing and heartbreaking to see them like this... knowing everything goes down hill for them eventually. Though How much they care about each other is just too sweet... My two nerds! ❤️

A girl buys him milkshake... and Sumo isn't jealous! Rather she's laughing and teasing him... Miracle!😲🤣

Shravan and the milkshake girl situation!🤣

She knows all his looks!And he completes all her sentences... so much understanding. Mere dil ke feels are out of control... they are so good with each other ... still all this falls apart!?🥺He decided to stay! Still he left... my heart aches already. Aisa bhi kya hua hoga!smiley28smiley18

Priya and Sumo seem on decent terms in the flashbacks atleast. Matlab something went wrong in between this gap. She wants to be good enough for her own mother cause she feels she is not! Ohh.. Sumo!🤗

And the banter is back!😃 Bichari Nanaji's Ambassador...kya yaar Sumo aise bhi drive karna!🤣 he took the blame for her though 😳

"You are my best friend too and I'd be totally lost without you." Best friends indeed!❤️

You know I am getting so many murder mystery type vibes from the story right now.... Like itni saari unknown and unsolved mysteries... kuch toh hints drop karo yaa😆

And my frail heart wants to know if this has a happy ending for both of them. Cause both me and my Shravan fear Sumo right now.😆

She(Badi Sumo) is scary to say the least!🤣

It's like for the first time I am fully in team Shravan😆

This chapter is my absolute favourite! I loved it so much!😃❤️


Apoorva

Edited by akrocks77 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Chapter-8.. ohh... finally

Flashback over ho gaya...I was loving their younger versions.😒

They have both joined the same office though!

Sumo is forever frustrated about Shravan's presence around her ... I would say aadat daal lijiye ab madam aap 😛😆

He comes forward to pull the chair for her😳 ... it's not something huge... but it's so endearingly cute of him somehow... I love him really!❤️"Ever the gentleman!" Indeed!

If Sumo doesn't start treating him right... I will keep him for sure.😳😆 Phir Sumo tum dekhti rahna... and apne sarcastic comments pe roti rahna😛

Sham Uncle is going to be my favourite for sure. ⭐️He is suggesting they work together... they would make a wonderful team ... Ofcourse they will! 😉Working together they could do wonders!

He is such a good cupid. 😃I will be getting my Office Romance.. hopefully someday.. fingers crossed. 😆

Shravan still misses his dad! It's very rare that I actually admire and like the love and respect he has for his father.. or in this case his late father.

Ramnath's name was dragged into some spam scandal... and all that still hurts him and it obviously should... he lost both his father and mother's happiness cause of that... poor Shravan💔

That paragraph describing Shravan and his home ... is so so heartfelt and beautiful. He is so broken. Yet he doesn't let it show out in the open. This sure shows his strength!❤️

"Home is a fantasy and he is still running in wait for his home coming. "

This is heart breaking yaa! Shravan!🥺

Their banter can sooth all the aches though... they are precious!

She let Nirmala hug her so easily!😳❤️

Nirmala saves the day... Sumo sure has no filter at all... kuch bhi bolti hai🤣

"Scared of me stealing your thunder." Sumo se kaam nikalwana koi Shravan se seekhe... he sure knows.. how to rile her up 😆

The last line though!💔

I am loving this story. 😳

I know I was late on these.. but I will be waiting for next update eagerly and I will try to be on time next time pakka.

Apoorva

Edited by akrocks77 - 5 years ago

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