Ek Lamha Hamara : A ShraMan One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: orion23

@Tabby Thank you so much for the mention!

Means a lot to me!

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This very thread is an outcome of your perseverance !!

You deserve it !!

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And don't apologize ya, I was ready to wait. I wanted your piece on Likhavat...

But as you said, it was not meant to be a part of the contest but it did become an integral part of the revelation!

I am at peace now !!

I'm glad you allowed me to put your piece up, it was an honor!

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Really nice of you to say that !

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For this gorgeous piece, thank you!

My pleasure!

I can't wait to read more from you!

Well...😳

Cheers!

Originally posted by: orion23

Cap 🤗

Zoya !!

I never thought a day will come..,when you will comment n I will reply! !🤗

First of all, Congratulations on the success of your wonderful story!

Thank you ya !!😃

Secondly, suggestion, do write an A/N, it gives the reader a better perspective of your thought process! Editing! Its all gotten unbold, please rectifiy😆 My OCD keeps kicking in!

Done! !😳

Thirdly, I'm glad you liked the banner! I wanted something that could accentuate the story and I'm glad this fit the bill! Pleasure ❤️

Abs loved it !!

Now, finally, coming to your piece. I had told you back when I read it, what I thought of it! I would have voted had this been on Likhavat! Nonetheless, it was gorgeousness personified! Now since I've told you what I felt, now I'll show you what I felt...

Makes my heart flutter! !

Super se upar waala feeling hai !!☺️

When I first saw your PM, I was like:

Haha...the timing was such! ! Only ghost's appear at such hrs! ! 😆

When I opened it and saw the title and the fact that there were couplets:

Couplets were inevitable! !

He is Hotter than garam chai ki pyaali 😉

When I started reading it I was like:

Reading the couplets I was like:

When it ended I was like:

Now I am like...,

This is how a perfect post looks like !!

Merey to saare favourite hain! !

Thank you so much for all the appreciation! !😊

To end it off, as a token of my appreciation and since we are used to talking like this now, Arz kia hai, mulayeza farmaiye!

Irshaad Irshaad! !

Woh kehte hai darja-e-awwal ke qabil hai hum,

Nazar aati hai hamari likhavat Alaahida,

Hum kehte hai jhaakon khud mai,

Nazar aayegi apni likhavat bhi Vabasta.

Aapke hunar ki tareef mumkin nahi,

Jazbaat toh hai magar lafz nahi!

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Jazbaat aapke hamare dil ko choo gaye,,

Kehtein hain unko lafzon ki zaroorat nahi hoti! !

Shukriya rahega! !❤️

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Tabby...My fav commenter!

Nik! ! Ditto!

Aapke liye kya bolu?

Kuch to kahiye 😳

Am speechless tbh!

Aww! N I was hoping for a Nik size comment !😉

I am sitting here for so long thinking what to say!

Par bole bina to nahi jaaungi😆

Bin boley ...Bilkul nahi! !

Kuch to kehna padega! !😛

What a FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC Piece Tabby!

This is one level up👏

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Firstly the title...Ek Lamha hamaara❤️

Beautiful!!

I had changed it a minute before sending the PM...it was 'Zindagi tu hi bata' earlier! ! This one makes more sense! ! Haina! !😊

Now from where you started...

Sal demanded it somewhere though I dont remember where...am I right?

Yep she did! !

That Lamha...It had so much to say, to listen but we got silence.

But we have you 😃

We have us !!😃

The storm had already passed through her and nothing can be scarier....Beautiful one!!

Sumo was a way strong girl than met the eye.

Sumo is strength!!

I have seen her through your eyes! !

Now m sure she is !!

She could feel emptiness in her stomach but food was not the remedy.

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His dark clothes mingled with the darkness of night.

It gave something...a feel so different!!

I felt a depth!

One of my favourites! ! 😳

He kept his hand on hers n she understood!

That little gesture ❤️

Words were never a need for them!

I used to think the same than Shikayatein happened! !😳

Those lil bits here n there..

The lightening, the wind, the rain...everything was impactful!

Beautifully captured!

Thank you !!

The clouds could not hold it any more.

Heart ❤️

What a feel Tabby!

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They had reached the saturation point !!

Chashmish...I always think about him whenever I read something about Shravan or see him.

That part of him was just Love!

The person Sumo was closest too even more than Shravan!

Wo waqt hi kuch or tha...

Hye! !

Kuch naadaniya, ,kuch mohabbatein !!

The ending...

O My!!

Nothing major happened but one simple sentence of Sumo n Everything is alright!

Aise hi!

Bas us lamhe ki darkaar thi! !

Phir sab aise hi theek ho jaata hai!

Their first step together...A life waiting ahead full of Love and Life!

Tabby your couplets here...

I am speechless!!

I can't say a word for them..I can't!

Sooo beautiful...Beyond beautiful Tabby!

So so so so apt for Sumo!

Glad to hear this from you! And I mean it !!

I cant express what I felt reading it all!

You made me cry!

Crying is strictly prohibited! 🤗

Thank you for writing it Tabby and Thank you for sharing it with us!

I Loved it...so so much!

N I Love you more

It's a pleasure!

Love you too!

Keep writing now Tabby...Never stop!

Lots of Love ❤️

Nik

Tightest possible jhappiyaz for you !!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

story from Taby

wow after ages may be

Yes Finally! !😳

Shravan confessed he was the reason behind Aditya's act towards Sumo. she listened to him & understood his mental status at that time without thinking about her he just spoke what he felt at that time. he is guilty for his act & Sumo forgave him .
He wanted to hurt the mother son duo..,,in that process he maligned his relationship with Sumo! !

Aditya's act was his own folly! ! Such a pervert !!

Shravan being Shravan ,,he will hold himself responsible for this outcome ...Shayad main nahi bolta to aisa nahi hota. ..That Shayad hurts !!

beautiful story
Thank you! !

loved it

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Vinu

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

Well... how beautiful is this .. " ek lamha humara " Likhavat ke zariye ❤️ ❤️

Is it...😳 Thank you !!

Tabby 🤗 what more could I say which has not already been told 😳 .

🤗 every word is precious! !

.. Inn Lamho ko padthe waqt .. woh Lahme yaad aaye ., jo dil ko chu Kar .. khabhi na mitne ki kasam khayee hai ❤️ #Shraman #jurum toh sangeen hai ...

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You hve penned your imagination wonderfully ..They could have prolonged that scene a bit and Shraman needed to have a conversation ..,

How I wish


Cmg back to your story .. he moves to give her space when she comes to sit with him

Typically him

... n the khana Khale Bhook lagi hai .. simple and anassuming lines !!

One who was not desirous to have food got her appetite back, ,

One who was drowning himself in the darkness got his masterchef back! !

And we can't be happier! !😳

Loved your mentions and this beauty #lotsmuch 😳 you must write more buds 😛 big big jhappi for this ❤️

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Overwhelmed! !

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