I Need You! - A Shraman story : Part 8 on Page 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Safire

Full romance!!

Eva ki meherbani!!😃



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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Cute and awesome update ❤️
U beautiful penned ShraMan moments 😳👏
Update fast😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
aww they both are so cute 😳
cute update. their romantic moments are so beautiful😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NiMikFan

Cute and awesome update❤️

U beautiful penned ShraMan moments😳👏
Update fast😳



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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: priety.priti

aww they both are so cute😳

cute update. their romantic moments are so beautiful😃



Yaay! Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Welcome 😊
Update fast eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6

Shravan: Sumooo! Do fast!! I need to use the washroom! Ugghh..

Sumo: (giggling) Tumhara tareeka apply karo na! Hehehh!!

Shravan: Kya tareeka? Kaunsa tareeka! Oh Sumo!! Do fast na.

Sumo: Choti ungli dabao na!! Hahahhah!

Shravan: Sumo ki bacchi?! Tujhe to mai baad mei dekh lungi..

Sumo: (coming out in a bathrobe) Meri bacchi abhi bhi nahi huyi Shravan. So don't telll thaaattt--- (gets stunned due to Shravan's sudden proximity)

Shravan: Tumhe chahiye abhi? To bolna chahiye na! (pulls her and pecks her lips)

Sumo: (pushing him towards the washroom) Oh Shravan! Kabbhi bhi shuru ho jate ho! Pressure ka kya hua abb? (smirking)

Shravan: (leaning against the washroom door in a dramatic manner) Hayee! Kya karu bolo!! Mera sexy wife ko dekhkar to kuch aur hi pressure aa raha hai. Itna sexy lag rahe ho in bathrobe mei ki kya bolu Sumo! (winks)

Sumo: (blushing) Shut up you Dumbo! Goo... (pushes him in)

Shravan goes inside the washroom and laughs heartily while Suman goes to the closet blushing heavily. After 5 mins, Suman gets ready and goes downstairs to see everyone while Shravan is still busy in washroom.
Downstairs.

Sumo: (with a cheeky smile) Good morning Uncle. Good morning aunty. Baki sab kaha hai? (moving towards the kitchen)

Ramnath: Good morning Suman. Baki sab ki pata nahi. Par mujhe ek complaint hai. (frowning)

Nirmala: (chuckling lightly) Aur mujhe bhi. Suman, idhar aa zara. (asking to go to her near the oven counter)

Sumo: (tensed) Uncle, Aunty! Is everything alright? Bolo na!!

Ramnath: Everything except you is alright Suman.

Sumo: What? Ab maine kya kiya Uncle? (frightened)

Nirmala: Tune hume Uncle Aunty kyu bula rahi hai? (smiling lightly)

Sumo: Kyu ki ap to hai hi mere Aunty-Uncle. Kyu?!

Nirmala: Nahi. Hum tere Aunty-Uncle nahi hai.

Sumo: Matlab? (looking at Ramnath)

Ramnath: We are your parents Suman. Your Maa and Papa. (smiling wholeheartedly)

Sumo: (eyes wide) Uncleee!

Ramnath: Ahaa! Papa. (coming to her in the kitchen)

Sumo: Papaa!!! Papa! (crying)

Ramnath: (pulling her in a fatherly hug) I am sorry Beta for everything I have done. Will you accept me as your father? (stroking her back)

Sumo: (putting her head on his chest) Papaaa! Papa! (crying bitterly) Aap mere papa ho, right?

Nirmala: (smiling and patting her head) Aur mai teri Maa. Bhulna mat.

Sumo: (moving from Ramnath and hugging Nirmala while crying) Maa!

Nirmala: Shh! Chup!! Meri bacchi. Suman chup.

Shravan: (near dining table) Sumooo? (shocked to see her crying)

Sumo: (running to him and hugging him tightly) Shravu!! Shravuuu!

Shravan: (hugging her back more tight) Kya hua Sumo? Ro kyu rahi ho? Aee! Bolo Sumo!

Sumo: (snuggling more into him) Shravu! I love you!!

Shravan: (blushing after seeing the smirks on his parents' face) Sumo, look at me. What happened? Why are you crying? (pulling her out of the hug forcefully)

Sumo: (rubbing her cheeks) Thank you so so much Shravan! Thank you.

Shravan: (confused) Sumo? You are thanking me? Why? For what?

Sumo: For Everything. (looking into his eyes)

Shravan: Matlab?

Sumo: Thank you Shravu! Mujhe Maa aur Papa dene k liye. (looking forward to Ramnath and Nirmala while Shravan holds her by her waist)

Nirmala: (coming towards the couple and caressing their faces) Suman, tu to pehle se hi meri bacchi hai. Jab se maine tujhe dekha, jana, tabse hi tu meri beti hai. (kissing her forehead) Aur dekh, ab to tu Shravan ka biwi hone k nate officially meri beti hai.. (chuckling)

Shravan: (rubbing his head while blushing) Ha wo to hai. Par maa, pehle tum mere ho. Uske baad Sumo ki. (lovingly hitting her head)

Sumo: (rolling her eyes) See who's being jealous!

Ramnath: Shravan, Suman. Mujhe please maaf kar dena. (looking down with eyes glistening)

Sumo: Papa, we are not angry on you. Dekho. Aap Shravan k Idol ho, to phir woh to aap par zara sa bhi ghussa nahi hai. (smiling at Shravan) Aur rahi meri baat, mujhe to Papa mil gayi. To aap hi bataiye na Papa, ek beti uski papa se kaise ghussa rahegi?

Ramnath: (coming forward and takes Shravan and Suman in a hug) I love you both beta.

Shravan: (hugging him and Sumo) We love you too Papa!

Pushkar: (from a distance) Oye Sumo!! Hum bhi hai yaha. Bhool gayi kya? Bhaiya choro usse! Aur Sumo, ek baat bol, ye subah subah itna emotions kaise lati hai tu? Bhaiya, ye 'Sumo' naam abb usse suit nahi karti.

Sumo: (coming out of the hug) Oye chup kar. Apne biwi aur aane wale bacche ki soch! Record breaker! (giggling)

Pushkar: Sumooo! (embarrassed) Not fair!! (pouting)

Sumo: (laughing hard) Hahah! Oh Pushkie!! Ye pout jaake meri behen ko dikha. Mai ispe nahi marne wala.

Pushkar: (smirking) Ha woh kyu hoga. Bhaiya hai na uske liye! (winking)

Shravan: Chotee! (glaring) Ja tu. Ja jaake Preeti ko le aa. Bohot zor se bhoot lagi hai. (caressing his tummy dramatically)

Sumo: (whispering) Bhukkad the, bhukkad hi rahenge! (eyeing him)

Shravan: I heard you Sumo!

Sumo: Veryyy good!! Now go and settle at the table. (to Nirmala) Maa, aj breakfast pe kya hai?

Nirmala: Chole batore.

Sumo: Ok, maa ap jaiye. Mai kuch meetha banake laati hu.

Nirmala: Arre tu ja, mai bana leti hu na.

Sumo: Nahi Maa. Mai banati hu. Nayi bahu jo hu. (with faint blush)

Nirmala: Aa haa! Ye bhi sahi. Ok tu kuch bana le. Mai ye sab leke jati hu. (caressing her head)

Sumo: Thik Hai. (smiling)

Nirmala takes the dishes with Bahadur and calls for the others. Shravan is busy searching for Sumo with the eyes from time to time.

Shravan: Maa, Sumo kaha hai?

Nirmala: She's coming. Dhiraj rakh!

Pushkar: (coming and settling with Preeti) Badi Maa, kya bol rahe hai aap! Wait?! Would bhi Bhaiya? For Sumo?! Hahahhh!!

Shravan: (pulling his ears) Chup kar. Wait ki thi maine. Woh bhi 10 saal use dekhne k liye. Aur tu bol raha hai intezaar ki baat? Tu?! Embarrassed hona hai kya phir se?

Preeti: (embarrassed) Shravan Bhaiya, leave him. Suman Di kaha hai?

Shravan: Mujhe hi nahi pata. (pouting)

Lalaji: (coming and settling in the dining) Oye hoye! Kya khusbu hai. Suman bana rahi hai kya kuch?

Sumo: (coming with a bowl) Ha lalaji. Aap ke favourite, moong dal ka halwa. (smiling)

Pushkar: (grinning) Wo lalaji ka nahi, Shravan Bhaiya ka favourite hai. (winking at Shravan)

Sumo: (glaring) Zyada bolega to tujhe hi nahi dungi ye mithai.

Pushkar: Accha ok. Sorry.

Kamini: Suman, tu ja baith. Vandy aj serve kar dengi.

Vandy: Mummy ji?! Yah hah! Suman, you go and sit. I'll serve today. (disappointed)

Sumo: No no, Vandy Bhabi, not needed. Pahle aap sab khaiye. Mai baad mein khaungi.

Shravan: To phir mai bhi Sumo ke saath hi khaunga.

Sumo: Shravan, you eat with the others.

Shravan: No Sumo. I'll eat with you only.

Nirmala: Accha babbah, chup karo tum dono. Suman, ek kaam kar, sabko serve karke de. Aur phir baith ja hamare saath. Sabko accha lagega.

Sumo: Thik Hai maa. (serves food to everyone)

Shravan: Sumooo! Suno na. (eyeing to go and sit beside him while everyone else giggles)

Sumo: (going near him) Kya hai? (glaring)

Shravan: Mujhe aur thora sa halwa do na.

Sumo: No Shravan. You have not yet recovered. No you'll not get more. (sits beside him)

Shravan: Ok! (pouting)

Suman smiles at him and everyone starts eating. Shravan takes a chance and holds her left hand and holds it tightly.

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Hey Everyone!
It's Sreyu here..
Here you go with a little longer update. As promised. A bit sooner!
Shraman and family. Hahah!!!
I'll try to keep my next updates as long as possible.

Ok, so I must tell that I'm much disappointed. I don't get reactions for this couple as expected.
And so, I don't feel like posting updates here! I'm sorry but if you don't like this story, I'll discontinue it. But I always wait for your reactions.
I wish you'll enjoy this part. Till then, Buh-Bye.
Edited by sreyu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Complete family picture ! !
Nice one !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Sreyu 🤗
Please don't discontinue the story.
I love your story, but sometimes laziness creeps in, and I miss the comments part. I'm sorry, but I will tell you my views from now 😃
As for this part,
ShraMan romance and Nok jhok 😳
Nice family bonding.
Waiting for more Shramanlicious moments.

Update soon bud :)

Madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Sreyu dnt think abt it to stop writing
I m here commenting all ur parts 🤗
So keep writing 😳
And todays part
Loved ShraMan and family part a lottt ❤️
Waiting for more ShraManlicious moment now

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