I Need You! - A Shraman story : Part 8 on Page 16

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Hello EdKVians. This is Sreyu here. My never-ending Love for Shravan and Suman lead me to write this. I hope I'm doing justice to this very special couple.

I NEED YOU - A SHRAMAN STORY

Part 1: Below
Part 2: Page 6
Part 3: Page 7
Part 4: Page 10
Part 5: Page 12
Part 6: Page 14
Part 7: Page 15
Part 8: Page 16


HOPE YOU'LL ALL ENJOY THIS. LIKING THIS WILL BE EQUIVALENT TO SHOWERING IMMENSE LOVE FOR SHRAVAN AND SUMAN 😳

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Part 1



This story starts from the last hug of Shraman on screen.

Suman: Shravan, niche utaro mujhe yaar!

Shravan: No Sumo, please. Please aise hi raho na kuch der aur!

Suman: Par Shravan, we are hugging like this for about 5-6 mins! Tumhe dard hoga na? Keep me down.

Shravan: Nahi Sumo, agar tum mujhe chorkar chali jaoge tab jyada dard hoga. Bohot jyada!

Suman: (playing with his hair) Shravan, mai jo bhool 11 saal pahale kiya, wo kabhi repeat nahi hoga. I promise! I will never leave you until I leave this world.

Shravan: (tightening his hold if that's possible) SUMO! This is the very last time you are telling this! Mai tumhe kabhi chodke jaane nahi dunga. Samjh gaya?(chocking)

Suman: Ok, ok.. Pahale niche utaro. You are squeezing me Chasmish!

Shravan: Ugh, ohh! I am sorry.(keeping her down and wiping his tears)

Suman: (cupping his face delicately) You don't have to be sorry Shravu! I know You need me, just as I need You. (wiping his remaining tears on his cheeks) Remember Shravan, I will never ever leave you. I cannot do so. Tumhare London jaane ke baad mujhe tumhare importance samajh mein aayi. I missed you like anything Shravu!

Shravan: Sumo? Ek baat puchu?

Suman: Huh? Obviously ha!

Shravan: (placing his hands on her waist while she put hers on his chest) Tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho?

Suman: Yaaa! Wait, what? Tum seriously mujhe ye question puch rahe ho?

Shravan: (tightening his hold) Haa, kyu?

Suman: (lightly punching his chest) How dare you?! Tumhe kya lagta hai, mai tumhe yuhi aise chipkali ki tarah rahne dungi? Ok. Leave me Now! I don't want to talk to you!

Shravan: Really? Tum chahte ho ki mai tumhe chor du? (smirking)

Suman: (in her Sumoness) Yes, yess, yeesss...(trying to remove herself from his hold)

Suman got cut short of her words when Shravan pulled her in a longing kiss. At first, Suman got startled by his act but eventually got herself into the deepening kiss. Happy tears made their way once again through their cheeks while they were either smiling or mouthing 'I Love You's in between the kisses.
Coming out of breath, they looked at each other, smiling infectiously..

Suman: I LOVE YOU my chasmish, I Love You!

Shravan: I Love You my Sumo.(kissing her forehead)

Suman keeps her head and hands on his chest while Shravan keep his chin on her head and hands on her waist pulling her to him as close as possible sighing contentedly.

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Hey Everyone!
It's Sreyu here..
This is my 2nd attempt writing a story, the first being ' Wait bidding Adieu - A Shraman OS '.
Shravan and Sumo has been the only couple that has conquered my heart and I can never get over them. I don't know how this story will be going, I just started writing to ease my mind! I know this is a very short part, but since I have just started writing here itself, please do support me. I promise I will do my best for Shraman.
I hope you all like this short part. Sorry for the typos. Waiting for your Valuable comments.
Happy Reading!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks 😳
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Thank you! Will try to keep the next parts nice as well 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful !! so cute and adorable dialogues !! suits shravan and sumo so well...I vote for this scene if I ever get to choose for a modification of the last episode 😊😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanyata

beautiful !! so cute and adorable dialogues !! suits shravan and sumo so well...I vote for this scene if I ever get to choose for a modification of the last episode😊😃



Hey thanks! It means a lot to me, you know!! Specially because I have just started writing for this special couple. Thanks a lot! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
I always love this scene
And you are exploring it
Its beautiful dear
Waiting for next 😛




Luv
Tiii se tinna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinna28

Lovely update dear
I always love this scene
And you are exploring it
Its beautiful dear
Waiting for next 😛




Luv
Tiii se tinna



Thank you so much! And yes, I'll try to update as soon as possible 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written!
I have been waiting long for someone to write this part just after the last episode!!!
Thank you so much for trying this!
Waiting for next updates...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Safire

Well written!

I have been waiting long for someone to write this part just after the last episode!!!
Thank you so much for trying this!
Waiting for next updates...



I am honoured! Thank you for your support. I will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice start...
Hug and first kiss is really beautiful..
Continue soon...
Thanks for pm

Love
Smita

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