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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a beauty Sal👏...what an absolute piece of wonder you have written!!
Pain ..the feeling,the time. when you confused a lesson for a
soulmate.

Sometimes it's not the butterflies that tell you that you are in love, it's the pain..read this somewhere, your drabble gave the same feel.
Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Damn this is sooo beautifully painfull ❤️ 💔

Saleha your description and narratives are exceptional.. there is a depth which takes us in the world ur narrating to us 😳

For Him it was like always ... I look at you and see the rest of my life in front of my eyes 😳

For Her it was ... Love can make you happier than you've ever been, sadder then you've ever been 😳

Keep them cmg Saleha ❤️
Edited by amks2016 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Beautifully described kit👏

Love can leave a memory that no one can steal, but love can also leave a pain that no one can heal.



Arthi


That's a beautiful line :)
Thank you Arthi, you can call me Saleha 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Beautiful Sal, beautiful!❤️n💔both.


Thanks Sanjh ❤️
P.S: I saw the spamming 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Beautiful. As usual. Loved how you conveyed the message without mentioning names, without quoting instances. The point delivered straight to the heart. Superb!


Actually it was written a long time ago, just added some line to fit it with ShraMan.
Thank you so much ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

What a beauty Sal👏...what an absolute piece of wonder you have written!!

Pain ..the feeling,the time. when you confused a lesson for a
soulmate.

Sometimes it's not the butterflies that tell you that you are in love, it's the pain..read this somewhere, your drabble gave the same feel.



Pain ..the feeling,the time. when you confused a lesson for a soulmate. ]Sometimes it's not the butterflies that tell you that you are in love, it's the pain..read this somewhere, your drabble gave the same feel.

This is so powerful, this is why you are one of my fave commenter, always leave such interesting inputs !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: amks2016


Damn this is sooo beautifully painfull ❤️ 💔

Saleha you description and narratives are exceptional.. there is a depth which takes us in the world ur narrating to us 😳

For Him it was like always ... I look at you and see the rest of my life in front of my eyes 😳

For Her it was ... Love can make you happier than you've ever been, sadder then you've ever been on 😳

Keep them cmg Saleha ❤️


Thank you Mayuri, I love hearing from you and these lines are beautiful :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sal...🤗
OMG!!...What you have written !!
Killed it buddy... 👏

You have penned down Shravan's pain so damn beautifully ❤️❤️

Pain is like a poison..It is...A slow poison that kills you slowly n painfully without any noice...Kills you inside out, your soul.

one day will come you will be tired, so tired, that your sobs will echo....Painfully true!!... beautifully written ❤️

His beautiful illusion...The girl he hates but Loves the most..The girl he whose memories haunt him but whom he misses the most...the girl who broke him but the only one who can mend him...The one who rules over his heart,mind,soul and his entire being.

The third kind of pain is the most destructive one.It reduces you to ashes.
Destructive for your entire being.

The last lines...Shravan's soul calling out for his solace.His Sumo.
Beautifully penned down dear...❤️

You are pro at writing them Sal...Hats off to you girl 👏
Keep writing... 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nik03

Sal...🤗
OMG!!...What you have written !!
Killed it buddy... 👏

You have penned down Shravan's pain so damn beautifully ❤️❤️

Pain is like a poison..It is...A slow poison that kills you slowly n painfully without any noice...Kills you inside out, your soul.

one day will come you will be tired, so tired, that your sobs will echo....Painfully true!!... beautifully written ❤️

His beautiful illusion...The girl he hates but Loves the most..The girl he whose memories haunt him but whom he misses the most...the girl who broke him but the only one who can mend him...The one who rules over his heart,mind,soul and his entire being.

The third kind of pain is the most destructive one.It reduces you to ashes.
Destructive for your entire being.

The last lines...Shravan's soul calling out for his solace.His Sumo.
Beautifully penned down dear...❤️

You are pro at writing them Sal...Hats off to you girl 👏
Keep writing... 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️


Nikka sa Nik 🤗
You always write the longest comments and they never fail to make me smile ;)
I liked the lines that you have picked up and I love the way you appreciate everyone's works ❤️
Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What a beautiful weave of words you have here Sal😊
Although it was generic, I could totally imagine Shravan crestfallen, drunk, falling into oblivion somewhere in a lonely place, his good sense still trying to fight it, but eventually his huge form giving in to the hurt inside. Where crying doesnt soothe anymore, numbing doesnt work anymore and inapite of her being one of the reasons, the most fresh wounds came from her here... Still he wants to try and find relief in her arms only. Poor child.

Beautiful Sal.

Your description of pain made my own heart wince and I for one dont even like to experience that feeling unnecessarily. I am sure the first part would revive bad memories in every readers heart making the pain their own.

Brilliant as always

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