ShraMan Drabble: Pain - Page 3

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Nikka sa Nik 🤗
You always write the longest comments and they never fail to make me smile ;)
I liked the lines that you have picked up and I love the way you appreciate everyone's works ❤️
Thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: deltadawn

What a beautiful weave of words you have here Sal😊

Although it was generic, I could totally imagine Shravan crestfallen, drunk, falling into oblivion somewhere in a lonely place, his good sense still trying to fight it, but eventually his huge form giving in to the hurt inside. Where crying doesnt soothe anymore, numbing doesnt work anymore and inapite of her being one of the reasons, the most fresh wounds came from her here... Still he wants to try and find relief in her arms only. Poor child.

Beautiful Sal.

Your description of pain made my own heart wince and I for one dont even like to experience that feeling unnecessarily. I am sure the first part would revive bad memories in every readers heart making the pain their own.

Brilliant as always

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww Take A Bow Girl...You have beautified pain in such a way that we feel it is part of us...once again amazing hun...

Also loved reading beautiful comments on thread...So proud & happy to be part of OUR WONDERFUL EDKV FAMILY...

Love,

Spandana

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Awesome..

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautifully written

Shravan's inner thoughts penned beautifully

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Beautifully written kit👏