Beete Lamhe~~ShraMan OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

It is so emotional😭

Aansu nahi rukh raha hein!

Good one👏

Keep writing!

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...

Am 😭😭

Wat an emotional story this is...

Veryyy touchyyy...

Oh god y u did this to our ShraMan...

But it is purely amazing...

Donno wat else to say...

LavSriya

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Anu yaar. ..I am standing at that divider between having an applause in my mind and a cringe in my heart.

The writing is beautiful, the flow is smooth and the emotions were portrayed with conviction.

As much as I hate any death in Shraman's case, it's a fact that death is certain. It's life that depends on the possibility factor.

All that said, mera sawal yeh hai, Anu ,tu ne Sumo aur uske baby ko kyun maara?

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Aaw...!!So sorry itna rulane ke liye...
Zyada emotional hua kya??
Glad u found it amazing...!!!

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Hayeee kamini aurat tune sumo ko maar dala..upper se baby ko bhi 😭 ese rulata h koi. ...ye to mere os se bhi bura tha

Haye yar kitna rulaya tune meko upper se that song oh god that made it more worse😭😭😭 last part mene kese padha only i know it

But as usual likha to apne mashallah h!!!👏👏👏 penned beautifully

P.s:- reshma now you have one more person in the queue to blame and question...AB ISKO PUCH ISNE SUMO OR BABY KO KYU MARA???😆😭😭

P.ss :- beta zyada padh k dimag kharab ho gaya or paper acha nahi gaya tu tune physics ka gussa ispe nikal diya????😕

Originally posted by: amlavs

S absolutely i felt too much emotional while reading it..

As am a single mom...while reading it gave me lot of feels...

But it is beautifully written..

Plz do write more...

Luv.,.

LavSriya

Originally posted by: Nik03

Anu... 😲 😲
Just read the ending first and and WTH!!
Am not gonna read it now Anu baby...!!
Was going to write happy happy moments...No No No...cant handle it now!!
Will read it but not now!!