Sardi ki Dhoop - OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: tsnymd

Nov 2011

Kisi naye chehre me apna kinara dhund lo, kehte hain dost

Koshish karunga, soch ka chala tha mai is baar.

Har leher me tum hi tum hote ho mere toofan

Har Kinare me tumhari talaash karta hoon ab bhi.

Meri kashti ko hi zid hai bikharne ki tere haatho har din.

Wow, beautiful

Originally posted by: deltadawn

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: tsnymd

Have not even finished reading but the shairi was too good to continue without dishing out some praise to the writer.

Originally posted by: deltadawn

oh my 😳 thanks take your time 😆 wont disturb you

Originally posted by: tsnymd

Finished reading but definitely not done reading it.

Am sure shall be returning to read it again and again.

Originally posted by: deltadawn

oh my 😳 thanks take your time 😆 wont disturb you

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

🤗 shayery! This is just too good! Loved it! Read it 4 times already! Going to read again!

Originally posted by: deltadawn

aaaw you read so many times.. am I that confusing?? 😉😆

ha ha want honest opinion here gundi. so write more !!

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Hawww! Kuch bhi!😕 Sach mein achchi thi! Maine socha sirf Lubna, Tabby anf Zoya hi aise shayeri likh sakti hai..par tumne to kamal kar ditta!👏 Will read again! I just love reading these type of write ups, with poems and shayeris !